Madam, Please Calm Down

In fact, this book has the potential to become a hit, but the author's direction is wrong. The author should learn to let go of the witch with a second purpose. Since it is a farming article, the development of the technology tree should be focused on, and the pursuit of women is just incidental. When Chen Chu traveled through time, he brought a mobile phone with him. As long as he was equipped with a hand-operated generator, this was actually a physical plug-in. Then from rubbing gunpowder, to steam engines, to chemical acid production, and finally nitroglycerin. As the war escalates time after time, the technology tree rises one by one. This is definitely a hit.

I like this book very much. It is not as boring as a history book, nor as boring as a short novel. It feels like the Romance of the Three Kingdoms to the Three Kingdoms (exaggerated of course). Part of the modern knowledge is used to improve the excitement of the article. The occasional parent-child triviality reflects the triviality of life. The continuous affection connects the family and the country, and the constant external pressure pushes the male protagonist forward. The story line of this book is not complicated. It is basically the male protagonist's path to becoming an emperor. In troubled times, there is no way for people to survive. If you carry a knife to protect the rest of your life, there is no way out. Not to mention stories, ambitions, etc. Let's talk about my feelings after watching the extra story Zhao Maoer, with her gentle, virtuous, fair and capable image as a woman, has provided a lot of help to the male protagonist. Strong, strong and courageous, she takes the initiative to do a lot of dirty work for the male protagonist. She is a whip for the harem and a treasure to the outside world () Yunong, a pistachio, is the person who can relax the male protagonist the most. He is also the harem's adjuster of the atmosphere and promotes harmony in the harem. The coagulant The above are the three protagonists In the supporting roles, as Chen Jinyu said, the male protagonist (the author) gave 80% of his heart to the three protagonists, leaving only 2% for Chen Jinyu, Jiarou, and Tie Dan, Poetic and picturesque, Chai Yuanyi and others can get a piece of it Among the many female protagonists, the one I admire the most is Zhao Maoer, but the one I like the most is undoubtedly Cai Hua, who dares to hate and love, is strong and brave, and loves her family. Of course, in the end, everyone passed away and he was left alone to support the overall situation. The ending of chasing the soul also added a lot of points to Cai Hua, which made people feel heartbroken. The male protagonist has grown up and passed away along the way. From my perspective as a reader, he and Zhao Maoer do owe a lot to Caihua, including the fact that they died six years before each other (escaping 😡😡). It was so abominable that Caihua had to take the initiative to chase him away. The author deserves to die too. Although no emperor has ever abdicated on his own initiative, this is a novel, so why can't you imagine extending your life and allowing the family to abdicate and enjoy a few years of happiness? This book is really good. After a while, I will buy all the tickets. The ending is not satisfactory to me. I will still have to read the book with a hook in the future (cannot see the joys and sorrows of farewell, collective short life).

9.8

After reading it, I can't help but want to comment. I really like this book. But it may be that the title and introduction are easily misleading, and may deviate from the expectations of some readers who were attracted to it. I feel that this book is an imaginary history and then brings up some harems, and some lightning points in the comments, such as the so-called "missing daughter" and Chai. If you don't look at the strict requirements of harem writing, I feel that it can be explained logically. Whether Hu Tou is committed to education or Lady Ding is committed to improving the status of women, they are a bit like Paul Korchagin (of course not that advanced, let's just say a little bit). Marriage is not necessarily their optimal ending. The matter of the male protagonist and Chai, I personally think it is also in line with the complacent psychology of the male protagonist at that time. Of course, everyone has different opinions 🤝 The only regret is that the ideological differences between Jia Rou and Chen Chu were brought up in the middle period and were not expanded upon in the later period. There is also a collision of ideas with Ayu, which I feel is not enough Maybe I usually read more fantasy and immortality, but occasionally I see this kind of historical literature, where the characters from childhood to old age, from birth to death, are quite touched. I hope the author will continue to work hard 🌹 If there is a new book in the account, I hope I can get it.

Okay, okay, such a brave author voted for the title of these 346 chapters for the first time. I hope this book can still be alive.

Multiple heroines, here they come 😃😃😃

The writing style is so good, I really admire it! ! !

The story frame is very good, and there are no particularly strong cheats. However, the shaping of the little goldfish is a bit abrupt. The little goldfish should have been more in contact with Chen Chu before the Tongshan Security Station, to understand the modern idea of ​​equality, and then lay out the emotional line, so that rescuing people outside the city turns into emotional sublimation. This would be much more natural.

The writing is also good, a bit depressing but not poisonous. I would rate it 9 out of 10.

There are some quirks, but I'm not tired of it. (Find it yourself in the comment section) I like the innuendo in the book. The heroine, Zhao Maoer is a poor peasant (popularity), Cai Hua is a businessman (industry), Yunong is an actor (wealth), and Jin Yu is a scholar-bureaucrat (fame). When these four are combined, one of the two princesses is strong and the other is indifferent. The author's yin and yang is full of weirdness. 😏

The author moves quickly😆

I suggest the author sort out his thoughts. The starting point of this book is very simple. Chen Chu, a graduate student at Huazhong Agricultural University, traveled through a troubled time similar to the Southern Song Dynasty with a large number of modern crop seeds and certain modern appliances. This setting is obviously a farming routine. In troubled times, food is the most important thing. The protagonist leads a group of people to grow high-yielding crops and develop a commercial economy (big hotels, lipstick, women's beauty), and they will definitely become rich in the future. The problem is, these are troubled times, and it is impossible for you to live in peace and prosperity. Anyone who shows any signs of recognition will be targeted, and conflicts are inevitable. The small rich have a small conflict, and the big rich have a big conflict. When it comes time to fight with swords, it is inevitable to develop industry, steel and iron, machine guns, crossbows, cannons and machine guns. Tanks and aircraft are not uncommon in time travel novels. You have such an elite army, it is impossible to take sides. In the future, he will conquer all directions and unify the world. The whole book will be completed. Starting from thousands of farming-style authors, they basically follow this routine. This is not a question of whether the author thinks about it or not, but the logic can only develop in this way. You only have money but no soldiers, and Shen Wansan is a lesson learned from your mistakes. What is the problem for the author of this book? The reason is that the Shura field in the harem was set up too early, which led to a contradiction with the main development idea. The Shura scene in the harem is a scene that readers love to see. "I want to see rivers of blood" has always been the top ten comments on Qidian. The delicate and vivid harem Shura field can effectively attract readers. From the description of the Shura field in the harem, we can see the author's writing power to a certain extent. Many novels have a lot of foreshadowing of the Shura field, and they become cowardly when they really tear each other apart. From this point of view, the Shura Field in this book is very well written, with fresh and delicate writing style. However, the timing and extent were not right. Let's talk about timing first. The protagonist is going to be the founding leader of the country (I can't tell yet whether it will be an empire or a republic in the future. I think it may be similar to a British-style parliamentary empire). Since ancient times, the success of the founding emperor has depended not only on his own conditions, but also on the support of his harem. Empress Yin Lihua of the Eastern Han Dynasty, Empress Changsun of the Tang Dynasty, and Empress Ma of the Ming Dynasty are all outstanding representatives. Running a family is like running a country. How can the husband have the heart to work hard outside when the house is restless? The book has now written more than a hundred chapters, and the head of the harem can only be Zhao Maoer (there is a hint at the beginning, Widow Zhao mentioned that a fortune teller said that Zhao Maoer has the image of a queen). Then the author arranges the conflict between Cai Hua and Zhao Mao'er twice in a row in Chapter 94 and Chapter 98, which is a bit in conflict with the main plot. The Cai family is one of the three major local forces. The protagonist has already made good friends with the Ximen family, and if he contacts the Cai family, he will basically be able to control the county and develop slowly in the future. This is the land of Longxing. How can I build a strong relationship with the Cai family? Just rely on economic cooperation? This was never the case in ancient times. If they really want to form an alliance, marriage is the only option. When your daughter marries you and gives birth to your child, and you have blood ties, you are considered a family. Lu Taigong of the Western Han Dynasty gave his daughter Lu Pheasant to Liu Bang and gave birth to the prince (Emperor Hui of the Han Dynasty); Qi Taigong gave his daughter Madam Qi to Liu Bang and gave birth to Zhao Wang Ruyi; Liu Xiu of the Eastern Han Dynasty, his wife Yin Lihua voluntarily gave up the position of the head wife in order to gain the support of the Guo family; Li Shimin was able to seize the throne from the Xuanwu Sect because of the contribution of his wife, the head of the family, Sun; Zhu Yuanzhang was able to raise an army because his wife Ma was the adopted daughter of the commander Guo Ziyi. This was the case in ancient times. Only when your daughter gets married and becomes a family will she be willing to fully support you. Therefore, if the protagonist wants to start a rebellion, the support of the Cai family is indispensable in the early stage. Cai Hua is a woman with a poor reputation among the people, and it is not easy to get married. It is reasonable for the Cai family to give her to Chen Chu. The problem is, since Cai Hua will marry Chen Chu sooner or later, but the author deliberately depicts the conflict between the two, how will the protagonist develop smoothly in the future when the family is in trouble? What were the founding emperors in history like? Look at Queen Yin Lihua of Emperor Guangwu Liu Xiu of the Eastern Han Dynasty, Queen Taizong Li Shimin's eldest grandson, and Queen Ma of Zhu Yuanzhang of the Ming Dynasty. None of them ruled over the Sixth Palace. How could there be any favorite concubines who refused to obey the Queen's discipline? According to ancient etiquette, the queen can punish the concubine with a stick. Liu Bang is special because when he met Madam Qi, his parents and wife Lu Fei were captured by Xiang Yu, so Madam Qi had no opponent at the time. And when Lu Pheasant was released by Xiang Yu, she had to accept that there was another woman beside her husband. Even if the two women don't get along well with each other at this time, Xiang Yu's defeat has been determined (it was already time to release Liu Taigong and Lu Pheasant to the Chu-He-Han Realm Covenant, and Xiang Yu has been going downhill since then), and it will not affect Liu Bang's unification of the world. But author, look at what time it is now. Chen Chu now has a village defense team in his hands. The only one with some martial arts skills is the big sword who just joined. With this strength, he can also open a Shura field. He is afraid that his family fortune will decline slowly, right? If he wants peace in the back house, Cai Hua has to change his temper, but how is this possible? Moreover, you are used to using Shura Field to attract readers. Once there is no Shura Field, readers who are used to it will find it boring. Let's talk about the level of Shura Field. I can understand that Cai Hua deliberately suppressed Mao'er's momentum in order not to lose to Mao'er in the future. But suppression must be measured in a certain way, and the author clearly has no sense of measure. Mao'er is such a shameless person that even Chen Chu wouldn't let Mao'er cook for her because she was afraid that others would say she was lazy. A person who values ​​honor and integrity was so humiliated by Cai Hua twice that he made her cry in public. Do you think Mao'er doesn't hold a grudge? If you make fun of others over and over again, will you be able to pass by just apologizing and calling me sister when you come in? And with Cai Hua's character, she won't cause trouble once she enters the house? Even if the cat can tolerate it, how can the grown-up tiger head and the cat's future children also tolerate it? Author, how do you think Mrs. Qi died? You can do whatever you want when Liu Bang is alive, but how does it feel to be a human pig after Liu Bang dies? Do you think it's because Empress Lu is jealous? But there isn't only one Mrs. Qi in the harem? The future Emperor Wen of Han's mother, the Bo family, lived a good life. Her son was named the acting king, and she was named the acting king and queen mother by Empress Lu. She was the queen of more than ten thousand people. She was also Liu Bang's concubine. What do you think of Empress Lu's treatment of the Bo family? Do you dare to say that Queen Lu cannot tolerate others? In history, Empress Lu was a talented and strategic figure who was respected by all the officials. The siege of Baishan Mountain was not solved by Empress Lu adopting Chen Ping's suggestions. So, if a person wants to die, he must seek his own death. The current dynasty is similar to the Southern Song Dynasty. Cai Hua is also well-read in poetry and books, but has no understanding of the fate of Madam Qi in the Han Dynasty? If Chen Chu becomes emperor in the future, Mao'er will definitely be the queen. When Chen Chu dies, you can just wait to become a human pig. Zhao Mao'er was able to burn down his own home at the age of fifteen. He followed Chen Chu without any regrets. If he doesn't make you a pig after Chen Chu dies, he will be sorry for the fire he made back then. And Chen Chu's behavior in these chapters is also very weird. Mao'er is your wife, Cai Hua is not married yet, she is just your business partner, there is a difference between closeness and distance. Now Mao'er was made to cry by Cai Hua. Chen Chu actually didn't react at all. He just watched his wife being bullied. In the end, he smiled bitterly at Cai Hua and said, "Why bother provoking her?" Do you think this sounds like what a husband would say? The key thing is that it's in public, everyone is looking at you. You can't even protect your own wife, how dare others follow you with confidence? You said that the Cai family is very important and cannot be offended easily? Then if you meet a more important noble person in the future, can you offer the cat and tiger head for the noble person to enjoy? Is this still a human being? I guess the author may be a woman, thinking that if the protagonist has money, technology and strategy, many people will follow her. In fact, this is purely wishful thinking. In any uprising, faith and the courage of leaders come first. Tell me, during the Nanchang Uprising, did we have money, high technology, or strategy? Chen Chu's performance was disappointing. He had no courage at all and was not like a founding king. A person who can't even manage his family wants to run a country? So I think this book will be very contradictory later on. If Cai Hua changes her temper, she will no longer be Cai Hua. But if everything goes crazy all day long after moving in, the Chen family won't look like it's a big deal. Unless one of Mao'er and Caihua dies, then the book will be meaningless. Therefore, most authors don't dare to use Shura Field. It's not that they can't use it, but that it easily conflicts with the main plot. From this point of view, the Shura field of this book starts too early and is too deep. I am very curious about how the author will end it in the future.

In fact, the vast majority of male authors of online articles are in their 20s and have little life experience. Most of them have just left school. Their understanding of women is limited to the content of physiology classes. Everything from the makeup to the speech and behavior to the psychological activities of the heroine are all made up in such a way that they can't even be copied correctly, so it's better to write less.

I hope the author will not be influenced by those who call for a single female protagonist. In ancient times, it was still unscientific to have a single female protagonist.

Support multiple female protagonists😍

This emotional drama was really poorly written. The mistress dared to show off her power to the principal wife, and was slapped twice in the face in public! Where does this self-confidence come from, and you plan not to enter the door for the rest of your life? The protagonist is also a SB and does not protect his wife. What does he want to do in the ancient environment where reputation is important? It is suggested that the author should either write Cai Sanniang to death directly, which is better than being retaliated to death by his wife after entering the house! Either let him be obedient to his real wife, not the lighthearted way of apologizing directly, but the kind of swollen face in public, otherwise this problem will not be solved! Don't say that a real wife should be generous, and don't persuade others to be kind without suffering others' suffering! 🤓

The three main heroines of this book, Zhao, Cai, and Yu, are very clear, so in the end these three have relatively complete endings, which is good, but other than that? Due to Chai Yuanyi's character, it was reasonable not to accept her in the end, but what about Hutou? She was invisible for a while in the middle period. In the end, the girl grew up and there were several chapters about her relationship, but why did she devote herself to education in the end? Brother, if you want to write about women's independent progress, aren't the examples of Ding Jiao and those female students enough? Forget it if you don't grasp the supporting role of the eldest son. What does it mean if you don't explain the tiger head at the end? Is it okay to even mention it once? Do you like this feeling of incomplete beauty? I thought you were listening to the readers after you wrote the extra chapter about Yunong, but in the end you ended up writing the male and female protagonists to death (even though they died of natural causes). You are writing a male harem story, so you know your position, bro. You can avoid the death of a girl or a girl if you can. I really like this book, and I wrote so much because of it.

I only recommend one female protagonist, and one more would dissuade many readers.

If the hero's brother also has a harem, can't we just mention it in one stroke? Even if a supporting character has a harem, he has to write an emotional scene.

I only recommend having more female protagonists. If you omit even one female protagonist, you will have to dissuade many readers. Brothers, do you think I am doing well in studying single-female novels?

Cai Hua's portrayal was so good. The extra chapter really shouldn't have written about her death. Cai Hua, a person who loved her clothes and was beautiful and unparalleled in splendor, got older in the extra chapter. She had wrinkles on her face. When she returned to the palace, she saw the hero sitting at the door waiting for her. She still smiled and ran over to joke with the hero as she did when she was young in the first dozen chapters. Then on the next page, the hero died of old age. On the next page, Cai Hua spent six years alone and dreamed that the hero died of hunger strike. There is really no need to write it down here. The extras are supposed to be about giving out sweets, not writing about this.

Ai

Good looking(○｀ε´○)

This book is really a pity. The previous male protagonists and female protagonists were well portrayed, but since the male protagonist started to conquer the world, he has no personality of his own. From then on, he became the symbol of "protagonist", and the female protagonists became background boards to fill in the gaps in the plot of the struggle for hegemony. , Only Cai Hua has always dared to love and hate, and she has been completely unreadable since more than 400 chapters. The protagonist suddenly went to bed with the concubine of Emperor Jin. We are not discriminating. A concubine who has been with Emperor Jin for more than ten years, seduced him and slept with him? I really doubt whether the protagonist was taken away or the author was replaced (I am still the lowest-level trainee because I read it on QQ Reading. New users can watch it for free. Please do not attack me because of this)

This looks good(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The book is very interesting But I think the character Chen Jingyu is completely unnecessary and disgusting, and has ruined the male protagonist's design In terms of virtuous and dignified, he is not as good as Maoer Wanyi In terms of being arrogant and cold, he is not as good as Cai Huanyi In terms of innocence and cuteness, he is not as good as Yunong Wanyi And there is no emotional basis for the development of the protagonist. After being rescued, can he shamelessly send himself to someone else's bed? The excuse of inner panic cannot preserve the persona of a "scholarly family". Instead, it is suspected of being cowardly and escaping from trouble. The protagonist also accepted this relationship inexplicably. The reason given by the author was "in order to have a closer relationship with the other person's family." It was really outrageous. The male protagonist was suddenly transformed from the image of a good young man in the new era who takes relationships seriously, who misses the past and loves his wife, into an amorous scumbag who got official in ancient times.

Don't keep using the plot of cheating. Except for Mao'er, all other women are considered cheating. Can't you write about confirming the relationship first, communicating first, so that everyone can accept it, and then having a relationship? ? Even if it happened, you can't admit it? Let's talk about it again, it's not monogamy, and it's not good for anyone to hold it in. Seriously, having an affair is really, really, really, really disgusting. You'd better not bring the concept of "an affair is very exciting" into it,,, and then present it many times in the novel, lowering the quality of the novel and making it just a mouthful. I hope my suggestions will help you in some aspects of your next novel, alas.

No, where is the tiger head? There is no explanation, and Yu Nong, Concubine Chen? This is a complete mess, isn't it?

The author's image of Madam Cai is vivid and vivid on the page. From this, it seems that she has a good writing skills. But the author really has room for improvement in writing wars. Like a white mouse, Brother Shen's death in battle didn't feel tragic at all. It just felt that the author was forcing sensationalism. If you don't know how to foreshadow, you can write a family ending. There is no need to do this for the sake of tragedy.

I suggest the author learn from the author of Red Mansions. What if you killed your mother-in-law to death in the first three chapters? Harem novels are all about happy endings 😥 Harem novels are historical. Try not to write about the heroine's parents, or she will start as an orphan from the beginning.