Rebirth Begins with an Unsuccessful Breakup

Well written! Reminds me of an old author's "Orléans Grilled Sturgeon Castle". This brother's writing style is average, and the plot is a bit cliché, but the youthful atmosphere and girlish feelings between the lines are really "moving even if they are ruthless"! Your characterization is really good, your writing style is even better, and your words also flow with the vitality of a seventeen or eighteen-year-old, as if the "infuriating energy" runs through the article. It's great. Don't be discouraged if your grades are not good, hold on. Maybe you can consider that this book doesn't need to be too long, but it should have a beginning and an end anyway. Very optimistic about you!

Lin Luxi

Let me talk about the shortcomings first. As for the advantages, I want to write a separate book review, because I feel that the shortcomings outweigh the good points. Indeed, I like this book very much. A suggestion to the author: When writing the next work, you must be more cautious at the beginning and the title of the book, because many people have their first impression when reading a book. If it is not attractive at the beginning and is directly persuaded to quit, no matter how wonderful the subsequent parts are, the readers will have already run away, which is indeed a pity! (But don't be discouraged, author, you really have great potential) In fact, at the beginning of this book, the first chapter can explain the reasons for breaking up with Xiaolu in the previous life, so that maybe it won't make people feel like this male protagonist is so scumbag and heartless at the beginning. He just doesn't want his current girlfriend and pursues a strange girl (although she is also quite scumbag). At least there is a foreshadowing buffer For example, at the beginning of the first chapter, we briefly talk about the troubles and regrets in the previous life, explain the relationship with the two female protagonists, and elaborate on some of the male protagonist's attitudes; then, it naturally transitions to the present after reincarnation, showing some of the male protagonist's current state of mind, and based on this, the subsequent story unfolds The "unfeeling" of the male protagonist towards Xiaolu at the beginning can also be diluted to make it less heartbreaking. For example, after the male protagonist has finished chatting with Ah Sha, he at least explains it to Xiaolu a little bit instead of completely ignoring it (this is just a personal immature idea, don't pay too much attention to it~) Also, the title of the book is a bit long and casual, which is different from the main character of the two female protagonists in the whole novel. The title is not very matching (although it is indeed difficult to choose) In fact, the title of the book can be a little shorter, such as "Rebirth in the Mood for Love", or, to be more blunt, "Rebirth: Double Choice" (here is an example, I don't really want this title) This book I would like to take some time to talk about the advantages of the book in conjunction with some of the author's paragraphs. In fact, I admire it very much~ This book needs to be read slowly. It is actually difficult to feel the author's skillful writing power until you read 200 chapters. This is also the biggest pity, because many people If you try to persuade you to quit at the beginning, it will be difficult to persist until the end Madam, please calm down, but don't be discouraged, otherwise, Madam will get angry~ Because Madam wants to see you continue to work hard to create a new chapter~ Please be sure to learn some experience from this book and work hard~ Madam, calm down!

Brother's writing is really good. I prefer Lin Luxi's silly and sweet character. I hope the author can describe it more.

I gave up after reading Chapter 9, tell me your feelings. Don't you want to know why you broke up with your first love after rebirth and then try to make up for it? And this is still rebirth, and there is a chance to make a new choice. You and your fiancée have gotten along and developed a relationship. Are you sure you can still develop a relationship in college? Chen Hansheng started out with ideas and goals, allowing people to learn the multi-line operation of a time management master. And the protagonist of this book just wants to break up with his first love and pursues his fiancée with the idea of ​​not taking the initiative and being irresponsible? This is true hypocrisy and disgusting.

Teacher Lin

Which one do you think is suitable

If you haven't cleared your heart, don't delay others. Don't look into the pot. It's really disgusting to flirt with someone else when you have a girlfriend. Either break up or get along with your current girlfriend. If you have a current girlfriend here and you flirt with someone else, why don't you just let it go? Do you understand the most basic principle? In fact, I think the protagonist doesn't love anyone at all. He only loves himself. At present, he can't make a choice after weighing the pros and cons. Here there is someone who loves you wholeheartedly and you can't bear to let go. Over there, you can't break off the relationship and pursue your so-called true love. No matter how many reasons you give, it's just scum. Does anyone still think these three views are correct? This is completely different from knowing several members of the opposite sex and then liking the male protagonist because of his personality charm. The male protagonist has certain feelings for other characters and cannot make a choice. This book has already established a confirmed relationship, right?

A shame

Readers of harem novels will want to run away after seeing you as the protagonist.

Do you have any childhood sweethearts? I have parents who work in the same workplace. We grew up together, took baths together, slept in the same bed, and were in the same class in junior high school. Although I am married now, she is still single and has basically no contact with her. But I know that no matter how long we don't contact each other, we are still friends who can talk about anything. I have never pursued her, not because she is not beautiful, on the contrary, she is childish, white and tender, and has a lot of LSPs who like her. The reason why I didn't pursue her was that I knew her too well. She was too independent-minded, which was completely different from her appearance. She looked soft and cute, but had a very tough personality. I'm a macho man, so it wasn't suitable, so I didn't make a move. There may not be love between us, but there must be friendship, and we will not choose to hurt each other (implying that the author poisoned me at the beginning). I like Xiaolu because of my own personality and life experiences. My wife's personality is similar to Xiaolu. And those who like A-Shame also have their own personalities and life experiences. Having said so much, the main reason is that I am tired of seeing so many people denying other people's preferences in the comment area. Readers should understand each other and criticize the author together. Wouldn't it be better? What could the reader do wrong? It's all the author's fault.

On the first day of his rebirth, the protagonist rashly went to look for his previous wife. After being rejected, he broke up with his current girlfriend simply and rudely. It is said that he has the experience of working hard in society in his previous life, so he should be more mature, but the protagonist behaves like a lunatic.

The writing is really good. The protagonist and supporting characters in the article are not stereotyped and are more vivid. The two female protagonists are also heart-wrenching, and the male protagonist's mental journey is also more logical. Lots of updates, available for full order🐶

It's pretty good, so sweet that it's like falling in love every day. Some friends said that the male protagonist was not well portrayed. In fact, it was mainly because the plot was a bit stiff at the beginning and it would be better later on.

🐢There are so many men. Qingmei took the initiative to break up with her, but the male protagonist just accepted it and found a romantic destination again. She insists on saying that the male protagonist is a scumbag. I never put myself in the position of others, and I also want to use this kind of licking values ​​​​to kidnap other men, and work with xxn.

I became addicted to online literature in 2009, and I love urban literature. I have read many novels such as Ekao, Pomfret, Laoyu, Lao Ao, etc. In the heyday of urban literature in the early days. Even now, after the decline of urban literature, I am still looking for urban literature to read. My evaluation of this novel is 8.5 Points. Let's talk about the shortcomings first: it was a bit bland in the middle period, and the dramatic conflict was a bit less exciting; Let's talk about the advantages: 1. The male protagonist's emotional explanation at the beginning of the double heroine setting is naturally logical. It can be said that the rebirth time point is used to explain the reasons for the male protagonist's feelings well, making him not a scumbag even though he is 1v2; 2. The main and supporting characters have full images and diverse characters. The two female protagonists have distinctive characteristics, and the whole story does not become a tool; 3. The behavior of each character is logical, and there is no abnormal plot; the plot advancement conforms to the laws of reality; 4. The male protagonist has been working hard to reduce the disaster of the earthquake, throughout the whole text, and becomes the key to solving the problem of the two female protagonists, which is logical and sublimated; 5. The full text does not make bad jokes to cater to young readers like young authors, the text is mature, and the plot is not poisonous. For some readers or trolls who just glance at it and start complaining, I would like to say that you can at least understand the time before and after the male protagonist is reborn? This is obviously the author's very clever explanation of the reason for the two heroines. You insist on spraying the harem... Is this your reading ability? ? Too many female leads make you a scumbag? Good guy, the most perfect 1st and 4th generation of Fairy Sword are all double heroines, the moral young man should respect himself

What a bad idea, letting people eat the skin of their feet. It grossed me out. I couldn't stand anything after that.

It is really uncomfortable for the protagonist to smoke. Nowadays, very few young people smoke. For people who have finished smoking, I can smell the smell of cigarettes even one meter away from me. My father has quit smoking long ago. . .

Why can you write about scum so confidently, but why are scum, licking, and green all the rage these days?

No wonder it's exempt. After reading a few chapters, I feel that the author has never experienced the countryside. People from the countryside are black and yellow, unless they don't know how to cook in the countryside and don't know the fields. I used to do research in my junior year of college, and 100% of the results were black and yellow.

After reading the first few chapters, the behavior and personality of the male protagonist cannot be said to be that of an adult who has experienced society for many years.

To be honest, the portrayal of the male protagonist is a bit poor.

The third golden chapter is so poorly written that no matter how good it is later praised, it still makes people uninterested in reading further.

The early beginning was not very good, resulting in few readers. There are many unreasonable places in the middle period, but the flaws are not concealed. The writing style and rhythm are excellent, and it can be called a masterpiece. The earthquake in Sichuan in the middle and late period was too embarrassing. I laid the groundwork for half of the book and ended up rotting. I think it is very understandable that fame and wealth are not attached to oneself and not for one's own ideals and patriotism. But you should either don't do it. If you want to do it, be perfect. Is it necessary to be a contractor for half a year without being at home and supporting others who don't understand? With the advantage of foresight, I think that the most ideal way to maximize the effect is to conduct remote control from outside. Forcibly putting yourself into the danger zone will not help you. In the end, the pregnant wife and child will be buried in the disaster area. The operation is too good. Even if the child does not die, if something happens to him, Ah Sha will be a lifelong demon. This plot was really embarrassing and made me dig my toes into the ground, and I couldn't help but complain.

A bunch of stupid dogs started complaining without even finishing the free chapter.

This is too dissuasive at the beginning. After all, they are childhood sweethearts. No matter how much you liked your wife in your previous life, you can't do this just because you are reborn 😅

It took me a few days to read it all. I couldn't bear to see many readers criticizing this book, so I decided to speak out. First suggestion: Don't abandon the book just because of the reviews of the first three chapters. The book will get better as you write more in the future. I really like the author's writing style. It can be seen that his writing skills are particularly solid. Many sentences in the book silently touched my heart. The characterizations of the two heroines are also very delicate, and their personalities are impressive with their own characteristics. The supporting characters basically have more character development instead of background boards. After reading it, I feel that it is no less than Lao Liu's urban classic. Both have their own strengths. I sincerely hope you can read it carefully until the end. Above.

Playing the main supporting role of Lalang is your biggest failure.

What kind of mentally retarded novel? The male protagonist is like 2b. I have never read anything so poisonous. I still got angry after reading a novel and vomited.

Let me tell you my opinion. I think there is no problem with two female protagonists, because the first female protagonist has a good personality and plays a straight game at the beginning, which makes people like it. But how to write it later? There is no pulling and no love. Unless it is about business, this book will end with tens of thousands of words. Otherwise, we should start with a single female lead, and then use other methods to make up for the second female lead (the first female lead should be given priority in everything, and help the second female lead if nothing happens). If you still want to have two female leads in the later stage, then look for accidents or other problems, and bring the second female lead in. I think this is the right way