The Demon Lord of Great Love, All My Female Disciples Are Yanderes

No, is this done? ! 6666666

The author should update quickly, otherwise I will have to keep a book

This is the real Great Love Immortal

After reading it, I felt uninterested. What is the meaning of human existence?

I saw Daai Immortal click in.

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If your writing is not good, then think carefully about why you were scolded, where you were scolded, why you were scolded before, and now you are being scolded. If the memory is not well written, it is a fact. If the memory is indispensable in the outline, speed up the progress as soon as possible and endure the scolding. The faster the progress, the less scolding you will receive. When you return to the main line later, who will scold you like before? Now not only is it not corrected, but it is messed up. It makes book friends angry and directly reports it. Later, they blame the book friend and say that they reported Sesu. If you bite back, do you think other book friends are blind? Can't they see what you did? This not only fails to explain anything but also lowers your own image. Is it worth it?

It's so bad. Why can't the author write the final ending? Because the author doesn't know what love is. You don't even want to give them a grand wedding.

It was okay in the early stage, but in the later stage, I was like a piece of shit, spreading love without any head or tail, it was disgusting to watch.

No, you have become a eunuch after chasing him for so long? ? You didn't explain anything clearly, Han Jinniang, Demon Emperor Queen, and Hua Yuerong didn't even write it clearly, so you told me to finish the book?

Has there been a great love alliance between heaven and earth?

To be honest, I can't blame others for this incident. This is the first time I've seen someone colluded in my own v-group to report someone. In fact, it's not that much of a problem if you don't make a big deal every day. I used to read other books whose updates were unstable. When I joined the group, I found that the author was chatting with friends in the group every day about which games were fun 🤫 and he was also a harem writer. This is actually a matter of attitude 🙄. However, I personally feel that this book should be reported as soon as it is reported. It is a done deal. In addition, the copyright ©️ for the comics has been sold a long time ago, so it is useless to report it. The living environment of harem comics is more rubbish than novels, so don't do it (basically the style of painting is eye-catching). In addition, if the author's other books are good, there is no need to report them. There are three books in total. Is there another one standing outside? In short, this book has basically completed all the major foreshadowings. When I read it, it was a page per second, and I only read it awkwardly. Thank you for the hospitality 😁 We have a long way to go and don't see each other again.

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You don't have to get married if you don't want to, the child is really yours

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First of all, let me say this: I have not joined the author's book club, and this is the first book written by this author that I have read. All my evaluations are based on objectivity. Friends who have different opinions are welcome to correct me. Please do not spit out sweet words or make inexplicable insults. This book is the first novel I have ever read in which a villain is the protagonist. Although I have read many novels of the same type, it still has its highlights. First of all, in terms of character design, I personally feel that except for the character violation of the first swordsman who appears at the end, all the characters are considered complete. Not to mention that the protagonist, as the big villain, is indeed decisive in killing, and he has numerous Taoist companions along the way, so he is worthy of the name of the big villain. Let's talk about the most touching characters: the junior sister Xingnu, the Japanese wife Jinniang, and the queen of the big car. Thank you, the creation of the character is undoubtedly successful and deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. Whenever I think of these leading characters, I can clearly remember some of their classic lines (words of tiger and wolf). The creation of characters is like the foundation of a story. I have always believed that the three elements of fantasy novels are: plot, characters, and world view. Therefore, the success of character creation undoubtedly makes the creation half of the success. Next is the plot. To be honest, the plot is actually very simple, and can be summed up in two words: horizontal push + stallion. But isn't this also the theme of this work? I have to say that the author's description in this aspect won my heart. In other words, it was quite bold, no wonder it was reported. So the plot and characters are both above average. Even if the world view is put aside, I am looking forward to this work. So why is it now at the point of being cut in half? I have read a lot of negative reviews, and based on my own experience, I roughly know some answers. To be honest, in fact, the work can only be considered in the middle and late stages, far from the end. The author himself also said that there is still an expectation of 200,000 words. The sudden ending today made me lament for a long time. I didn't know the author's personality, and I fell into the trap near the end, so I didn't pay attention to anything other than the work at all. First of all, the author's ability to shape characters declined significantly in the middle and later stages of the story, especially in the memoirs. From the many comments, I believe everyone is deeply touched by this. The author spends a lot of writing to describe the reaction of the onlookers, and the perception can reach one-third of the chapter. This is indeed a masterpiece. This also leads to the inexplicable warming of the relationship between the characters. For example, the affection of sisters Mu Xinlan is described in the article for about three months, which is actually quite long. During this period, there are dramas of life and death, which can really make the characters moved. However, the audience will not feel that just because you said "three months" means three months. The audience will only feel that the description in only 6 or 7 chapters has made the relationship escalate to a life-or-death situation, which is somewhat hypocritical. To put it simply, the complex plot is simplified, and a large amount of omitted writing is used to write about less important audience reactions. Secondly, Mu Xinlan's character design personally feels quite inconsistent. From the moment she asked Xianxian to be the villain and sacrifice herself, I felt that she was a ruthless, selfish and hypocritical person. As a result, there was such a long series of emotional dramas that completely confused me. From here on, the quality of this book drops sharply, but I can still accept it. In addition, after reading the comments, I found that the reasons why most viewers are dissatisfied with it are: delayed updates, hydrology, abrupt plot, broken characters, etc. In fact, I think it's okay, because someone once said: Don't pay attention to the creator of the work you like, because you will find that after you get to know the other person, you will think, "Oh! How could such a good work be created by that bastard!" So I advise readers to pay attention to the work itself and pay less attention to the author himself. Secondly, the collapse of the characters in the work is actually unavoidable. Half of the characters in a novel are successfully created, which is actually not bad, because I have also created novels out of longing, and I know how difficult it is to create characters and prevent them from collapsing. All in all, I found the half book before the so-called ending of this novel quite interesting. Originally, I read novels just for fun, and I read novels just for the sake of reading novels. Don't gradually shift your perspective and go to other places. Personally, I think the plot of this book is good, and most of the characters are vivid and full. I am actually looking forward to the last 200,000 words. It is really a pity that the author did not continue due to pressure. I would like to state again that I have no intention of washing the floor, I am just explaining my thoughts after watching it. I have not even joined the fan group, so those who criticize me for washing the floor should just stop talking.

At least you have a foundation by completing one book normally 😤. Four or five books have already been written. Only the senior brother is barely finished, and the rest are also unfinished.

I feel like the outline is okay, but I can feel the author's casualness in writing between the lines, but it's mainly just for reading, nothing else, so it's okay. I can only say that the outline is logical and smooth, the details are crazy and repeated, the emotions are described in a straightforward manner, and the dialogue is awkward as hell. I really don't know what kind of mental state the author is in when writing a book every day.

Hey, I enjoyed it when I read it before. Now I am too lazy to say anything about the author. In the future, I will still have to pursue an author with a better quality or complete the novel.

Brothers, please read it!

What about the one who apologized and explained the ending? Why was it deleted? It's better to keep that one and at least I can understand it now, but I can't understand the ending at all 😒

So Mrs. Ren still didn't win at the end! Gave a blank

I like Xing'er the most. This cute and astringent character is so great. My only regret is that I didn't see her wedding to the protagonist💒

Recommendation: This book tells the story of the protagonist Bai Feng who accidentally traveled through time and became the villain boss Bai Qingling who was seriously injured and lost all his magic power in the game world. He obtained the Great Love System in a crisis-ridden situation. Let's see how the protagonist spreads love and care. The story between the devil and the righteous fairy is always fascinating, and the sweet love is worth watching. Book title: "I, the Villain, Became Their White Moonlight" Author: Cheese Snow Leopard Ai Tags: Time Travel, System Flow Status: 100,000 words [serial] Recommendation index: ★★★★☆ Recommended reader type: Worth reading if you like sweet love and harem. Reason for Recommendation: The setting of this article is very novel. As a demon giant, he awakened the Great Love System when he was seriously injured. He has to rely on spreading love and care to save himself. This may seem very inconsistent, but the protagonist who has traveled through time not only adapts to the identity of a demon giant, but also perfectly completes the spread of love and care. The mutual reflection of the two makes this book more fascinating. The author depicts the characters very delicately, such as the lovely Cen Xing'er, the arrogant and arrogant Yujie Tan Tailingyin... Each person's personality is very distinct, but they blend together well. It is an article worth reading. ps:The wheel of the car pressed against my face. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

I feel that Xing'er's personality is too different, which gives people a somewhat negative impression.

Are there any extras? I watched the ending in one day today and felt like a lot was missing 😭

I am the audio anchor of this book. If the author sees it, please reply to me.

Can the author write more about the plot between Han Jinniang and the protagonist?

I'm so confused 💔 Why does this book have the same ending as the senior brother? 😭 After reading Chapter 105, I don't know if I should continue reading... (I regret to add one more note in the transcript)

Is the protagonist's figure similar to Doman's?