God Lord: I'll Beat You to Shit!

Warhammer 40k: an interstellar opera. The background is that the universe is about to end. All major races are fighting for life and death. War is the main theme. Many games have been developed based on the world view of Warhammer. Those who like to play games can learn about it. Those who don't like it can also read the background story. Space Opera , also considered a top IP It is set in Subspace: 40k that the emotions of living things will be reflected in the subspace, and subspace creatures will be born. Because the universe is about to be destroyed, there are more evil emotions, and four evil gods and demons will be born, which will attack real creatures. (It's not detailed enough here, so I'll give you a general introduction to this concept.) Greenskins: A race in Warhammer 40k. Background: Created by the Ancient Saints (Creator God level) to deal with their opponents Star Gods and Warp Demons. They are pure weapons of war. They think about fighting every day. The specifics of the race will be written bit by bit in the book. Astartes: super warriors of the human interstellar empire 40k: time unit, meaning the 40th millennium of the human empire Gluts: slaves, farmers, chefs in the green-skinned society. There were several types of grots before 40k, and in 40k they were collectively called grots. If you don't understand, you can kick me again.

I want to see rivers of blood! Please be sure to describe more war scenes😆

At the beginning, the protagonist, a weak and ordinary newcomer, can form a moon in the subspace that attracts the four gods and the emperor. So how do you think this 40k is equivalent to the federation and not the upper world. And Ork is just one of the living biological weapons created by the Ancient Saint. And even the ancient saint and the biological weapons he created were destroyed together. Therefore, I think Orks are just a special advanced race among the four forces, which can help the protagonist quickly survive the early rise. But if the protagonist wants to truly reach the top, he needs to continue to evolve Ork. But later, Ork directly made the core technologies of the four forces inferior? It feels like this Ook has been elevated inexplicably.

"For the Emperor, destroy the aliens." - A counselor from the 13th Consqueit Guards Regiment

Hammer here and there, isn't this how chronicles are written? Those who can insist on reading the latest chapters are basically people who have fun. Author, you just need to stick to your own style. As long as it's not too obvious to eat books, it's OK.

Not bad, but it feels like watching someone play solo, exciting but not explosive. There is no description of the magnificent epic battle, nor is there a detailed interactive plot of various human natures and desperate resistance against the green natural disaster. Very green-skinned, very waaagh, but can be more waaagh, you can refer to: Ork Tyrant

Personal proposal. What you wrote about God is a bit too much. In a world with such eyes, I opened a space and threw some random things in, but it didn't attract the attention of the local god. Personally I feel a bit bad. If you can reach the level of dominating the world, you should be able to detect changes in the world to some extent. And you, the green-skinned one, are too fierce. The original green skin is very powerful. If you add some bugs, it will become even more invincible. If you lower the IQ of the people in your world, they will become even more invincible. Just like that grudge world. The protagonist was green-skinned over and over again, but he didn't even think of other solutions. Say something ugly. This IQ has dropped a bit. Even if we can't find a strategy to deal with it, we should conduct a lot of experiments to see how we can completely eliminate the greenskins. Just rely on the force of force to push forward. You should also need IQ to practice this thing of yours. Anyone who has cultivated to a profound level should not be a fool It doesn't matter whether you adopt it or not. You can also adopt it.

Very well written👍

The more you see behind it, the less understandable it becomes. 😅

This book can be said to be well-written. The narrative is not procrastinating or hydrological, and it is quite creative. You may not be used to the rhythm when you first read it, but you will be fine if you read a few more. It is recommended reading.

It's better for the protagonist to directly travel through time and become a green skin, and a bunch of settings have to be added. A single 40k world is not enough for the protagonist? I think neither the author nor the protagonist is enough waaaaaaaaagh

Why does this orc's words smell like Northeastern slag?

In fact, the author shouldn't add so many of his own settings, Set up an independent space where the Chaos Gods cannot enter, and then set up a system to develop a race, and then bind the green skins, Then the book will be completely popular. Write about the world of lords, so much mess is purely to persuade you to quit, because you wrote it with your setting ability, compared to the world view of Warhammer, it becomes a plastic toy.

No, buddy, why don't you hold on and send two at once? The next month is tomorrow, maybe the monthly tickets will be more, it will last until the end of August, don't be a eunuch

Beast

The subject matter is good, but after reading dozens of chapters, it became boring. Most of the stories written now are about green-skinned battles, and it becomes boring after reading too many chapters.

When I read Chapter 29, I felt that this book had no main plot and was just a hammer here and a stick here and there.

The writing is quite good, but it could be more waaggh. Let's do something more silly. Don't stick to the formality. Just write about green skins. Just be happy and that's it. Just do whatever makes you happy. Don't explain if it doesn't make sense. It's waaagh. You don't need to be too logical when writing about green skins. After all, you don't need to be too clear about green skins. After all, you don't have to be too clear about green skins. That's it. Waaagh.

You can still see clearly from the front. Why is he suddenly invincible from behind?

When I started writing it, I felt that the protagonist's thinking was too out of the ordinary. The following plot is that the protagonist sends various greenskins to fight in other worlds. The green skins in various worlds are constantly switching, and the scenes where the protagonist interacts with reality are becoming less and less. Moreover, when the protagonist appears, he is either thinking about Cao Hunu, or he is on Cao's way. The actual plot is written too little, and I don't see any process. Anyway, the result is there. After the protagonist's divine realm is destroyed, he goes to learn the emperor's golden toilet. I didn't read the rest of the story, but I've always been curious about what the protagonist wanted to do when he pretended to please the female receptionist and then was fined. I didn't see the foreshadowing, but I could tell that the protagonist was written in a very troubling way. 🙂

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