I Am a Ghost Story Witch in Tokyo

I have listened to more than 30 chapters so far. The language is still too wordy, and many similar words and phrases are used repeatedly. However, overall it is better than other light novels. It can be more unconstrained and does not necessarily have to be completely built around the rules of the real world. It can be more emotional and add some tension to the story.

[Book Review][There is a plot leak] This cat was attracted by the label of witch I am looking forward to the sparks of ghost stories and witches I hope the big cat can write better and better Please listen to some personal opinions The current problems of this book Maybe it's because of the wrong rhythm The first bad review of this book is that it's too long The drawn line does not connect the subsequent plot very well The main point of this kind of novel is that the copy and the daily main line are intertwined, and the priority and rhythm are clear Especially in the first part The original intention was to present a staggered lead in the Feather Line and the Alchemy Line. There were too many events in the middle, which made the plot a bit confusing. The crisis at home should be the motive. The awakening of the Kaidan Sword and the Mask should not have to recycle the foreshadowing in such an early line to strengthen the protagonist's combat power (but strengthen the combat power) It's another exciting point of online writing... It's hard to retain readers if you don't add it...) A proper arrangement and combination of plots should make the author more comfortable in writing You can refer to the narrative techniques and story cycles of the Rick and Morty animation

There are many Japanese witches galloping in the air on broomsticks, including young witches wearing formal robes and rushing to participate in events; there are also middle and high school witches in JK uniforms who have just finished cram school; you can even see witch aunts wearing kimonos with a basket full of vegetables hanging in front of the broomstick! Hey! The eighteen-year-old new witch with gray-blue eyes and long black hair is you, Mizuyuki Sakuma! Book title: "I Become a Monster Witch in Tokyo" Author: Zemin Luo Type: Light Novel·Original Fantasy Tags: Time Travel, Transformation and Development, Superpower Magic Easy Everyday Life Number of words: 130,000 words Status of work: serialized Recommendation index: ★★★☆☆ (3/5) "Introduction to the work" The novel tells the daily story of the protagonist traveling to Tokyo, inheriting a dilapidated shrine and a cute and sensible sister, becoming the witch Sakuma Mizuki, and choosing to make money and support his family by accepting orders as an exorcist witch. "Reason for Recommendation" With the detailed development of the witch setting in the novel, a dazzling witch world is presented to the readers through graceful writing, waiting for the readers to embark on a new journey to explore this world. The novel's setting structure is exquisite, the writing style is warm and delicate, and the characters are vivid and interesting. It is a recommended Japanese light novel about raising a witch with elements of ghost stories. "Recommended Group" ❶Readers who like male transformation novels; ❷Readers who like witch development novels; ❸Readers who like warm daily novels. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

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Something was wrong. According to the living standards of witches, poverty would only appear among Muggles.

Very pretty. The author's intentions can be seen from the details. Is there something wrong with the original design? While talking about genius, he also said that the second-level spells are not good and burned the textbooks. It's not so much a witch novel as it is a supernatural novel wrapped in a witch's skin. In my personal opinion, the overall look and feel may be much better if the witch element is removed (this is just my personal opinion, no instruction is intended). Because of the pigeons, the witch was born in my mind, and the king of scrolls... The thought of the original owner makes me laugh. In general, the writing is good but not in my taste {personally}.

The setting is quite interesting, but the problem is that the first dungeon comes too quickly and the plot is too long, which makes it feel too confusing.

This is the novel where the witch is the closest to human beings and the furthest from God among the novels I have read. The writing is good.

Is the author a girl? I feel like girls have a good grasp of psychology.

Come on Ze Lao

I didn't expect to find this at Qidian. You are still writing a book at Qidian.

What, don't marry, No, isn't it good to post?

A lot of nonsense. All booked, but the setting of the witch puzzles me. The biggest difference from most fantasy novels is that almost everyone in this novel is a lovely and beautiful woman. Ahem, to be honest, I'm very interested. (Also, please forgive me, I am really not good at praising women) But sometimes there are some realistic descriptions, such as the plot of the snow swan in the novel, which made me a little depressed. And it feels like many witches are like ordinary people in reality, and sometimes they even feel quite miserable. I feel that the biggest attraction of this book to me is the mutual support of individuals in a race where only women exist. After all, no matter how cruel she is, she is still a girl. (I don't mean to look down on women here, it's just that I like the interaction between girls) Who doesn't love girls' posts? End of rambling.

Great

Cat! Cat wants to know if there is any cat scene! The cat lantern is about to rise! Cat lamp begging for food! Meow Ao Ao Ao

Has the author written a book in Bao next door? The ID looks familiar.