I Became Superman After I Died

When I read the introduction, I thought it was about turning into a superman or something, but it turns out that a person can become a superman by borrowing other people's abilities, and becomes a corpse without others, haha

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Let's make a complaint after seeing Chapter 40. As an agent of the Sky Eye Bureau, Xiao She's father didn't take care of his family after he disappeared for the organization? Not to mention being rich and wealthy, but you must at least ensure that you have enough food and clothing. Forget it if it is a small secret organization, but you are an official organization. This is true for agents who work for the organization. Who will work for you? Don't say that you have to hide your identity. As a national organization, it is not easy to secretly ensure that others have enough food and clothing without being discovered. Other than this, the logic seems to be quite smooth, and I am very happy to read it. I just read this chapter again and said, don't any of you think there is a problem with the logic here?

The setting of Goldfinger is too lame. The protagonist is an ordinary person and is dead. He only came back to life after sharing his life and abilities with the heroine of Superman. Moreover, if you stay far away from the heroine, you will die suddenly. This setting of Goldfinger dissuaded most of the people. No wonder they fell into the street.

[Brief Review] The veteran author of LV5 has a sophisticated writing style, the plot unfolds at a very smooth pace, and the conflicts between superpowers are presented in a reasonable manner. The appearances of Superman, various superpowers and other characters are also arranged very reasonably. In particular, the setting of collecting hope (bank value) is extremely exciting and brings positive energy to readers. [Book title] I became Superman after I died [Author] Name is occupied [Work status] Serializing (240,000 words) [Recommendation index] 4 stars [Tag]Superpower, behind-the-scenes, interstellar [Reason for recommendation] This is a world where superpowers exist. However, the world of superpowers is separated from the world of ordinary people, and the existence of superpowers cannot be known to ordinary people. The protagonist Jiang Bei lived a normal life. After encountering a super person, he died unexpectedly. However, he was rescued by a mysterious little superman, making Jiang Bei a superman. Jiangbei, who became a superman, also started a life different from ordinary people. In order to extend his life, Jiangbei needed to collect people's hopes, which were quantified into a library value. Infinitely strong, as fast as lightning, flying in the air... Superman Jiang Bei used his superpowers to save many people in the supernatural world until he became the savior. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"}

I started watching Duel City. Personally, I think it's better to return to playing cards. It doesn't necessarily have to be a Yu-Gi-Oh World. You can completely create an imaginary world and feel the shock of tears in another world 😏

Personal opinion: The two protagonists have not yet fully realized their charisma as supermen, but they have formed an alliance within a dozen chapters. There is an old problem behind the scenes, the protagonist is too weak, the supporting characters are more solid, and this is Superman,,,

In fact, I had this feeling when I first started watching Invincible Flow. The early plot was quite funny and exciting, but later on the author couldn't continue writing. The plot routines were repetitive, the protagonist couldn't find room for improvement, and it was difficult for the author to maintain a long-term interesting routine and funny pretense. In other words, the author is not good at this aspect. I hope he can be better in the future.

The three golden chapters at the beginning focus on an inexplicable subject, which made me feel uncomfortable and moist. No wonder the fan value is set in the speech.

There is a serious sense of separation and contradiction. The world view setting of the novel says that there are Superman comics and animations in this world, but the author shows that there are no Superman comics and animations in this world. This sense of contradiction is very uncomfortable. Everyone in the novel is also in a superposition state of knowing Superman comics and not knowing Superman comics. Every time I see this kind of plot, I feel uncomfortable. If you know it, you know it, and if you don't have it, you don't have it. It is simply set as if there is no Superman comic in this world. It has to be written ambiguously. I personally think this is a very uncomfortable poison point.

I feel like villains are too cheap. Not all fanatics are afraid of death. I really feel like I need to write about villains well.

It is said that Superman's strongest and core superpower is probably his wide-ranging and boundless biological (anti-physical) stance. However, every time I see fan fiction written about Superman, most of them focus on the Man of Steel or super speed. Maybe it is the omnipotent assist or the lack of intuitive sense of power that attracts more attention.

I thought it was a eunuch, but it turned out to be a mess!

The appearances of Superman (the protagonist) described by the author have a strong sense of film and television scenes, and many times they are scenes that are difficult to see in movies, TV series, and animations due to cost or script constraints. I really hope the author can write an invincible story with a superhuman male protagonist. But only five chapters are available? Who do you look down on?

What, what? ? ? Author, do you want to see what you are doing? ? If you accidentally set the work to the completed state, why don't you say something? !

The author's writing is quite good, and it's not like some peddlers who say "Superman" in the title but ends up being a loser. This book is a real Superman. I enjoyed reading it and ordered it all.

It's not very good. I want to write about Superman, but I don't want to write about Superman, and I want to write about the League, but I don't want to write about the League. Neither up nor down

Go back to writing about playing cards, opening up a new track is not for you.

Come again? Such a bad character? ? ? ?

Superman is a superhero character from the American DC Comics Company. He first appeared in the 1938 issue of "Action Comics" (Action Comics). The character was created by Jerry Siegel and Joe Shuster. Superman's true identity is Clark Kent. He was an orphan who escaped to Earth from the destroyed alien planet Krypton. He was adopted and raised by the Kents. On Earth, he is a reporter working at the Daily Planet in Metropolis. Superman has extraordinary abilities, including super strength, super speed, an almost invincible body, superhuman vision (such as X-ray vision and heat vision), superhuman hearing, superhuman breathing (including cryobreathing), and the ability to fly. His weakness is the Kryptonian mineral, commonly known as Kryptonite. Superman is one of the most well-known superheroes in the world. His image has appeared in various media, including TV, movies, radio dramas, novels, games, etc. His red and blue clothing and "S" logo have also become symbols of pop culture. His stories often contain strong moral themes and social commentary, making him an iconic and idealized superhero. (actor Tyler Hoechlin plays the role of Superman in the American TV series "Superman and Lois")

It looks pretty good so far, but the words are a bit missing Did the protagonist drink the potion? I don't think you need to awaken any messy abilities, superhuman abilities are pretty good. It's normal to have the same mind and body and have the same abilities

The author's two books, whether they are the previous summons or this time's Superman, have no problem with the writing, but the storyline is a bit too bland and has a very strange feeling. Because the settings are based on characters from the DcC universe and the Marvel universe, there will be a certain shadow, but the author obviously wants to set up an imaginary world by himself, and does not want to apply the story in the comic or movie version, but to be honest, the tone of this world is indeed a bit bland, and because of the character's ability itself , the two give me a sense of separation. I personally think that the author can still apply the story of the DC or Marvel world first, so that there will be a lot of energy left in the world view and supporting character creation, and focus on polishing the protagonist and connecting the world view. The previous Yu-Gi-Oh!

It's a good book, but too little😭

Good, good

That, I don't know if it's an illusion. Recent novels are very repetitive. The villain is frightened when he sees the protagonist's power and starts to run away. It's like he doesn't use scouts. For example, Dragon Ball's combat power testing glasses, black technology, the Eye of Truth, etc.

Come on, author! All your books are very good. I hope this one can maintain the same level as before and even break through.

This book is so boring. I was invincible from the beginning. The last book is still better.

I have no appetite after reading the title, so I will continue to wait and see.

"I Have an Immortal Cultivation Assistant AI", 1. The various methods of cultivating immortals in this book are supported by materialistic logic. Tao is born for a reason, this is the view of cultivating immortality in this book. Second, this book covers Shintoism and Immortalism. The two are both connected and very different in this book. Third, this book integrates medical ethics and pharmacology into novel storylines, which will make you feel refreshed and gain something. This book is a different species among the novels about cultivating immortals. Let's see how Xiao Ke writes a novel about cultivating immortals in a materialistic framework...

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