This Summoner Is Outrageous

I can be considered an old reader who has followed the book Duel City. When I first read this book, I felt that it was pretty good. Many places were creative, and there were also shadows and jokes of Yu-Gi-Oh in it, but gradually the taste of this book started to change. The card battle, one of the core of the book, is obviously designed, but it is not designed well: How many cards are there in the deck? How many cards do you usually put? How many cards do you start with during the battle? Is there any way to replenish cards and recover them? Is there a one-time effect? Sustainable effect? What is the linkage between cards? These are not shown. The battle process is basically one party summoning special moves, using magic and traps, and the other party summoning special moves, using magic and traps. Although the shadows of various Yu-Gi-Oh decks can be seen, it does not have that flavor, and the expectations from the beginning gradually turned into disappointment. In comparison, Laoshu is much better at this point by relying on the huge number of decks and relatively complete rules accumulated by Yu-Gi-Oh for many years. Moreover, the decks used by many characters in Laoshu are not common mainstream decks, which is very interesting. In addition, the parts about trolling netizens and the protagonist changing the plot are quite exciting. These are the things I like about old books. Unfortunately, by this book, most of these advantages have disappeared. What a pity. Author, you really don't lack writing skills and flashes of ideas, but if you still want to write original articles, you must first design the foundation and write the core selling points well, at least not like this book. After finishing the book, I still don't know how the deck of the world is composed, how to fight, whether it is real-time or what it is... Really, it's so confusing

The author's first two books are considered fan fiction, and the world view is ready-made. However, for this original book, I hope the author will think about the world view carefully and not make it up later, which will be embarrassing. I support a wave of new books_(:з∠)_

Having followed it from the previous book, I feel that the supporting characters and plot are a bit silly. After all, readers who can follow anime like Yu-Gi-Oh should not be too young. Novels that fans can easily follow are called respecting originality. If originality uses this kind of plot and routine, it will be boring without the emotional bonus. Especially this novel is extremely silly among the original novels. I hope the author can add more elements and full-fledged characters. He really won't randomly add the seven deadly sins. The characters can overcome the past through seven virtues or the like. Of course it depends on the author whether to change it or not. No matter what, I will continue to follow it. Of course, if this plot is the same, I will probably click on it again for a long time.

I won't say too much, I just want to treat your cards well. There are very few protagonists and even villains in the history of Yu-Gi-Oh who use cards as tools, but you are just the opposite. Regardless of whether they are strong or weak, whether they are bound to you or not, they are just data to you. And the world you describe is not the real world we live in, but a world dominated by cards. How can a person like the protagonist you show be worthy of talking about destiny, drawing cards, and talking about the king? That's an insult to Kaiba, Yugi, and everyone who loves cards with all their heart. To be honest, people are the product of the environment, just like after you become a girl, your thinking will definitely turn to female thinking for a long time. In an alien environment like this book, the protagonist, who has got rid of the interference of the players in the previous book, still wants to play tricks without having a partner and has no love for the card. That is really funny.

This kind?

I see that there is a problem now. The protagonist only has 2 epics in Chapter 65, and now everyone else is shocked. Is it too exaggerated? How to pretend to be cool in the later stage? I feel now that there are not many epics in the entire country. In the later stage, the supporting players should be more epic. Isn't the combat power collapsed? Is it necessary to integrate multiple dimensions and multiple planes in the later stage? Otherwise, I really don't know how to improve the combat power.

I've finished reading it... Although this book is said to be a relaxing book, it's too easy, isn't it? The cost of plug-ins is basically zero, and everything can be learned instantly. Is it really just a matter of forcibly cutting off the IQ of the supporting characters? The card effects are all borrowed from Yu-Gi-Oh's... So why not write a Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic? Or just fuse several Yu-Gi-Oh worlds and write a semi-original one. Why use the gimmick of originality and then put on the skin of Yu-Gi-Oh? Other aspects... The characters who appear are basically used as stepping stones and shockers. So far, there are only a few characters that can be remembered in the entire book. But can a few characters support a book? (Ps: I have been following this book since the beginning. I have not commented before. It is because I feel that the author is in a transition period and needs transition time, which is understandable. However, from the opening of the book to the release, the whole book has a sense of being read by a fan, so is this an original work?)

Anyway, don't learn from the unscientific beast control next door, or you will leave. Really, the unscientific beast control is really speechless. I started this book, and the leader has a warm place. The beast control is too pretentious. Anyway, I quit after reading a few. I feel that this book is good in the early stage. Don't learn the chapter next door. There is nothing but pretense. Anyway, I can't stand it.

Does this book have a female protagonist?🤫

Although it's a little late to say it, you can actually learn how to write the Elf Master from Qingquan Ryuxiang and use an original world view, but still be a fan of Yu-Gi-Oh. This is actually better. This is a direct fan-to-original version, which is a bit embarrassing.

​ ​ Okay, it's not as serious as the title says, but after seeing the few chapters I subscribed to, I'm really not in a good mood right now. As I said before, I think the author did not grasp the rhythm and atmosphere well. The narrative seems protracted and detached, there are too many meaningless jokes and descriptions, and the detailed arrangement is not appropriate. Then I discovered a new problem, that is, in terms of system setting description, as a work with an extraordinary system, the system setting is a bit too shallow and fragile. I won't talk about suturing, but let's talk about the simplest question, why is the magic spirit's ability value only described in terms of attack power? Where did the defense go? What about others? Although the author has explained that it is a combination of the basic values ​​​​of all aspects, but in this case, why not just use the basic value or combat power directly, but use the somewhat unclear attack power to describe it? And until 20 chapters after it was released, I didn't have a specific understanding of the general structure of the entire extraordinary system. Even the second-level silver was a little unclear, so I was very confused. And to be honest, confrontation should be the core element of this kind of novel, but the battle scenes in the novel are seriously lacking in expressiveness, and there is almost no tension and passion. To be honest, I feel that even the expressiveness of the duel between various monsters in the previous book far exceeds the various battle scenes in this book. The combat performance of card games is actually higher than that of RPG games? That's probably what it feels like. To be honest, the author has filled this book with too many meaningless jokes, pornographic waste, and psychological descriptions, and the homogeneity is very serious, and it does not fit well with the article. If there weren't too many things going on recently, I actually wanted to pick a plot in the book and rewrite it, but unfortunately... That's not to say that this book is not good, it is still readable, and it is even relatively good-looking, but compared with the reading experience of the previous book, it is a bit inconsistent.

It feels like it's already g-rated, and it's a bit mindless and cool. I feel like the setting wasn't done well from the beginning, and the plot is thin.

It feels a lot worse than the Yu-Gi-Oh!

It's okay as an original work, and it's the kind of book you can read in new books. However, I personally feel that hydrology and colloquialism are a problem (frequent slurring while driving is also a side effect of the aforementioned problem); in addition, the so-called system is thin (like a game setting that is not very careful, isolated), the depth/thickness is still insufficient, and the "world" does not rotate, so the look and feel is not very good (it always makes people feel I wonder if the author doesn't have a comprehensive world and power system setting, and has the illusion that it will collapse in a second...) After all, I am not writing a fan novel. No matter how light-hearted and enjoyable the work is, the author should still have a comprehensive grasp behind it, and only when the framework is set up can he go far (of course, if you want to write short stories and paragraphs, that's another story).

With the cards in hand, I have o(＊＾▽＾＊)o♪

I didn't know much about Yu-Gi-Oh before, but the author's last book was included in Yu-Gi-Oh. Let me share my thoughts on reading the book. Is the author writing a card novel or a development novel? Just like the original beast-bending novel, the master can be powerful, but the whole article is about the master fighting back and forth, which goes against the theme. The same is true for current card novels. The best ones are often about making cards. The only good way to write battle scenes using cards is the author's last book. Unlike other genres, card novels are about reading. Under the complete rules, the pleasure of defeating the opponent through the ability of the cards, rather than relying on some super model to play cards. I think the author's last book has a very powerful setting. Well, it should be said that that setting can be used as the basis of all card novels. The power can be increased through the bond with the card. I think this can be used as the basis of extraordinary abilities in card novels. The setting of the destiny is good, but I think the destiny in the card should be like a mortal bone like the Blue Eyes White Dragon Black Mage, and then the exclusive card of the Horse Armor Seal. This is what I want to see.

Alas, I still like Yu-Gi-Oh novels.

At present, it seems that the writing style is more relaxed and the writing style is acceptable. There is no poisonous point for the time being. It is my favorite style. Good luck, author.

To be honest, it's a bit unfinished. Looking forward to the new book

Is this the end? It's not as good as the previous one, but the writing in this one is really not very good, the combat power is poor, and it can't have a lot of surprises like playing cards.

Although this book is short, it seems to be a big hit in terms of writing about niche books, so what about the new book?

Suddenly I had an idea, what would it be like if the protagonist brought those fake cards printed by zz Youth Hall to play cards with the original characters?

I feel like I am almost invincible in this map after just over 200 chapters... The timeline in the story is only a few months old, right? It feels like the plot has just started to advance... People are almost reaching the full level. Although there is a sense of imperial approval (referring to the protagonist), he is really too fast (referring to upgrading)

Good guy, I just raised it for a while and it was done.

There is too little interaction and bond between squid and cards. The character is basically a tool man.

Blind guess that this is the final form

The plot promotion method is too rough. Even the upgrade stream does not directly package the upgrade materials at once. Now that the protagonist has upgraded all the way, other characters' roles have been reduced, and now he is invincible. Then, wouldn't it be necessary for all the protagonists to clear the level later?

This plot is so fast that I'm a little scared. Is it almost over?