Once Upon a Time in America 1999

Is the author writing novels as a hobby? Before you wrote about American business, you didn't check it. What content do readers of novels in this field want to read? Stop grinding on about the Commercial Investigation Bureau, endlessly. With the protagonist's wealth, you can make an appointment with a high-ranking person, and the ghosts will check you out. A clown who wants to be in a position of power is messing around here. It's annoying to watch, and the writing is also messy. It gives me a headache than reading European and American novels directly.

Advantages: 1. It has the flavor of a traditional physical novel 2. At least up to the latest chapter, the character of the protagonist is still good. 3. It has the style of European and American detective novels Disadvantages: There are many, but they are not bad points. They are just problems with the author's ability 1. There are many typos and omissions in every chapter. 2. There are too many interludes. Strictly speaking, this is not a shortcoming. The problem is that the author failed to control his writing style well. The novel seems a bit confusing, and you have to read it very slowly to sort out all the relationships. 3. The starting point of the protagonist is the ceiling level of American businessmen. It is too high. There is basically no money problem for writing business later. The conflicts that can be written are basically 404 common problems. Summary: Injecting non-violent blackness into common American business themes. If you like the Blackstone Code, you will probably like this novel.

A crappy Chinatown plot. A white-skinned person treats the Chinese elites in Chinatown better than his own parents. He cares about ordinary lower-class Chinese people more than these Chinese elites.

It has the flavor of an American drama, with some confusion or jumps, just like the American drama, which is not edited well or the screenwriter did not handle it well 😂😂

The daily life of Jane Hawke and female stars

I just read a few chapters, and I feel like the writing is very un-internet-like. The protagonist traveled through time, and instead of starting from when he started to become successful, he went directly to start writing more than ten years later when he had become a big boss, which was a lot less fun. Second, the protagonist is reborn with a cheat, gets admitted to a prestigious school, and earns tens of millions of dollars early. I don't understand why I dropped out of school and went to Afghanistan to serve as a soldier. If you were targeted because you played too much before, why don't you pay attention? The reborn people shouldn't be so stupid. Third, why do the people inside like to talk so much, having long conversations...

How to say it? The opponent is so powerful that it makes you feel powerless. The protagonist is rich and has superpowers, but he is still led by the villain. . You have always been plotted against, why do you want to play tricks with the villain when you have superpowers?

It's too stream of consciousness, a lot of content that I don't know why appears, and there is no explanation. I won't talk about the jumps. It is tolerable and has a bit of a solid style, but it is too messy. It might be better if it is polished. Another point is that pig's feet look very awkward, but why do others want him to do detective work? I can't understand, what kind of detective is this? American capitalists are the worst.

With this writing style, I can only say that the author is very good, but if you look at the monthly tickets, you will know that in the current online literary environment, most readers cannot read your novels. If you write them for a few people, only an old bookworm like me can read them. If you want to make money, I suggest you change the style of your next book.

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I don't know why, but the plot is too long-winded and the dialogues are all filled with riddles. Even the readers can't understand them. This kind of writing style is really not suitable for online writing.

I don't know what to say about this book, but the plot and characters are too abrupt, and a person suddenly appears out of nowhere. If it were a movie or an American TV series, it would be very good, but if it were a novel, it wouldn't have much of a visual feel. I personally think Black Gold Code is a good book in this category. I hope the author can refer to it.

Some of the plot reminded me of Billions, but I only watched a little bit of that show before giving up.

Waiting at the pizza place

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This is written as a sitcom 😰 It's so confusing that I can't even figure it out.

Are you sure many people will read your writing this way?

Who can read the beginning of such a whiny episode?

The author is knowledgeable and suitable for readers who have read physical books before.