I'm Really Not an Evil Demon

It's well-written, but I copied it. Readers on other platforms are urging me to update, so you'd better hurry up (ꐦ°᷄д°᷅).

I give up. You're not a physical entity, and you can take it back anytime. Are you just playing dumb and trying to outsmart me?

What you're doing is similar to a celestial demon, evolving from evil thoughts to the seven emotions and six desires. Like the Evil Sword Immortal, wherever there's passion and desire, your power will be inexhaustible, and you'll continuously strengthen those evil thoughts, lovers, or miscellaneous desires.

The beginning states that the protagonist is merely an incarnation of evil and will not die; if he dies, he can simply be reborn into another body. I could accept that the protagonist is cautious and prudent, but the overall impression he gives to readers is that of a cowardly coward who is afraid of death, lacking both sophistication and intelligence.

Initially, his fearlessness stemmed from malice, but later, when he started fearing everything, including the gate he was supposed to be guarding, he became terrified of everything. Can't you write something interesting? What's the point of having no real goal and just playing the coward?

As I read on, I noticed the protagonist seemed inexplicably cowardly, and I lost interest. What's there to be afraid of? He just dies and someone else takes over. This whole psychological development is a waste of time. Don't you even consider how many people will actually read through all that psychological stuff? It's a waste of time.

It's well-written. Your grades shouldn't be too bad. What a pity.

Keep writing! It's really good! I love it! I feel like there are still several more storylines to discover! The hidden secrets of the Daoist sect's journey through the world, the little girl and the Daoist sacred texts, the fate of the demonic sword, the end of the era of gods and humans, the final form of evil, the closed loop of time...

Oh my god, my brother. You can't write this kind of setting. There's an evil swordsman you could copy, but you wouldn't. You just had to restrict the protagonist, and the worst kind of restriction is his personality. My god. What were you thinking? The diversity of life is truly amazing.

Wow, you're so rich! You're spending so much on yourself.