My Years Teaching at Hogwarts

In fact, the heroine that I liked later was Tonks. I think you should know that she has everything you want in Metamorphomags, but when you think about it, she is still too young. It is almost like raising a daughter.

In order to forcefully point out the topic, the protagonist is made to look like a rat. The protagonist's deeds during school days are closely related to Professor Minerva, and he is a frequent visitor to the principal's office. With this condition, it is difficult to directly write to Dumbledore and ask to observe the Phoenix Rebirth?

I can't stand it at all. I don't know what will happen next. Anyway, I can't stand the first part. They are force-feeding poison and insisting on imposing some nonsense Chinese elements. Chinese food and Chinese wine are simply highly poisonous. British people drink tea with milk and sugar. How can they love Chinese food? The UK can even get tea seeds from China. If you like liquor, why don't you get it there? Does the author not know that Hong Kong was once a British colony?

The character creation ability is so poor. The personalities and performances of each character are almost the same, as if they are all carved from the same mold. Can't they even describe the character of Filch, a character whose personality is so obvious in the original work?

I didn't have the desire to read Chapter 6. I originally thought that the protagonist could defeat Quirrell, but in the end, two people teach the same class, right? It really deviates from the original work, you can't write it, right? You can't use your brain at all, right? Isn't the protagonist a big fool? He's still a bitch, can't he live without Hogwarts? At the beginning, the protagonist was described as so awesome, but in the end, he couldn't live without Hogwarts. I was really convinced. I always felt that the protagonist's IQ was a bit incomplete.

Four chapters into school and we haven't arrived at Hogwarts yet. The protagonist has never appeared once. The plot of the original novel is not that slow. If you have to follow the protagonist group, then why are you innovating the character? Why not pierce the protagonist group with your soul?

Just looking at this Granger makes me want to vomit, I've seen too much! Sometimes I think that even if the heroine is a pig, she is better than Granger, at least she won't make people sick after looking at it.

It's quite nice, but it has too much Eastern culture. It feels like there are mice in a rice vat. How should I put it, it's like a fairy tale telling you about Einstein, it feels out of place. The novel feels quite immersive until Eastern culture is mixed in. ... I feel like every time I try to imagine myself in the story, I get slapped back by the Buddha. Overall, I give this novel a 7. The missing three points are that there is too much Eastern culture, and it always feels a little out of place in a Western magic world novel. Overall, it's a pretty good-looking fanfic.

Don't always brag about technology. Your original purpose is to write about magic. Why are you always bragging about technology?

Just try to stick to the plot, the logic doesn't work.