My Years Teaching at Hogwarts

I still like wizards to exchange things of equal value, nothing is free. Anyone who can learn witchcraft and magic is not a fool. There is a magical contract in the extraordinary world. The writing is there, the characters are there. That's too righteous. Read more about Mortal Cultivation of Immortality and the Wizarding World. I've moved this book off the shelf. It's really disgusting.

In fact, the heroine that I liked later was Tonks. I think you should know that she has everything you want in Metamorphomags, but when you think about it, she is still too young. It is almost like raising a daughter.

In order to forcefully point out the topic, the protagonist is made to look like a rat. The protagonist's deeds during school days are closely related to Professor Minerva, and he is a frequent visitor to the principal's office. With this condition, it is difficult to directly write to Dumbledore and ask to observe the Phoenix Rebirth?

I can't stand it at all. I don't know what will happen next. Anyway, I can't stand the first part. They are force-feeding poison and insisting on imposing some nonsense Chinese elements. Chinese food and Chinese wine are simply highly poisonous. British people drink tea with milk and sugar. How can they love Chinese food? The UK can even get tea seeds from China. If you like liquor, why don't you get it there? Does the author not know that Hong Kong was once a British colony?

The character creation ability is so poor. The personalities and performances of each character are almost the same, as if they are all carved from the same mold. Can't they even describe the character of Filch, a character whose personality is so obvious in the original work?

I didn't have the desire to read Chapter 6. I originally thought that the protagonist could defeat Quirrell, but in the end, two people teach the same class, right? It really deviates from the original work, you can't write it, right? You can't use your brain at all, right? Isn't the protagonist a big fool? He's still a bitch, can't he live without Hogwarts? At the beginning, the protagonist was described as so awesome, but in the end, he couldn't live without Hogwarts. I was really convinced. I always felt that the protagonist's IQ was a bit incomplete.

Four chapters into school and we haven't arrived at Hogwarts yet. The protagonist has never appeared once. The plot of the original novel is not that slow. If you have to follow the protagonist group, then why are you innovating the character? Why not pierce the protagonist group with your soul?

Just looking at this Granger makes me want to vomit, I've seen too much! Sometimes I think that even if the heroine is a pig, she is better than Granger, at least she won't make people sick after looking at it.

Don't always brag about technology. Your original purpose is to write about magic. Why are you always bragging about technology?

It's quite nice, but it has too much Eastern culture. It feels like there are mice in a rice vat. How should I put it, it's like a fairy tale telling you about Einstein, it feels out of place. The novel feels quite immersive until Eastern culture is mixed in. ... I feel like every time I try to imagine myself in the story, I get slapped back by the Buddha. Overall, I give this novel a 7. The missing three points are that there is too much Eastern culture, and it always feels a little out of place in a Western magic world novel. Overall, it's a pretty good-looking fanfic.

Just try to stick to the plot, the logic doesn't work.

I can't quite accept the plot that follows. The protagonist tries his best to teach, teaches various unique magic spells, and helps others. What's the result? Oh, the protagonist has been to Albania and is suspected of being a dark wizard. It remains to be seen, so we are not allowed to watch Fox's rebirth. After reading the title of 153 after 152, I thought there was going to be a fight, but it turned out that Dumbledore and Neville's parents wanted to wait for the protagonist to treat the protagonist, so they let the protagonist go. The protagonist is not a good person. That's great 🤔. Also, Dumbledore wanted to pay the protagonist for some things before, but the result was the same. He was suspected of being a dark wizard and deducted some of the reward. Then, as if giving alms, he said that the protagonist's suspicion was reduced and the reward that should have been given to the protagonist was given to the protagonist 😒

I didn't like the Defense Against the Dark Arts course at the beginning, but it was a bit awkward to push through it. It's not necessary.

The more I read these chapters, the more uncomfortable I feel. Although I know that the author wrote the plot for the sake of learning about the academy, the reason for returning is really too frustrating. The protagonist is completely suppressed and manipulated by Lao Deng. It is too uncomfortable to watch, and the transition is too frustrating. From these chapters, it is obvious that Lao Deng deliberately suppressed and threatened the protagonist because he was too strong and could not control himself. But as a protagonist and a time traveler, being manipulated like this is too much, and it conflicts too much with the early character design. As a time traveler, when I know the plot, it is too outrageous to threaten me like this. I know there are too many ways to counter the blackmail, such as hiding a few Horcruxes, leaking the plot and flipping the table. Really, Lao Deng obviously wants to slow down the development of the protagonist. , To prevent you from losing control. As a time traveler, if you say you are still studying, I will respect you three points. You are a coward. Now you have graduated, your body is covered with magic patterns, and you are among the top three in the world. After a few years, if you patiently engrave a few magic patterns, you will be invincible. Why are you a coward? I'll give you face by calling you professor, but if you don't give me face, I'll just lift the table. If he threatens, you should counter-threat and just say, Professor, are you sure you want to threaten me like this? It is Lao Deng who should be afraid. It takes just a few years to develop his strength. Now, just one year is enough to completely engrave the magic pattern, and a few years to crush him with the world's best strength. Time is completely on the protagonist's side. Even if he doesn't agree, won't the phoenix also achieve nirvana when he fights the basilisk half a year later? Anyway, the protagonist of the academy can come and teleport directly if he wants. As a time traveler, who is about to achieve great feats and has the ability to protect himself, how many books can he kidnap? Believe it or not, it will take a few years to engrave all the magic patterns, flash to your side, and directly use Legilimency to strip away all your memories. Having said all this, I am not criticizing for the sake of criticism, but this is indeed a major problem with this book, which makes people feel frustrated. This is also a common problem in the humanities. In order to forcefully connect with the plot, it leads to the separation of the front and back. It's not that you can't follow the plot. After all, what else can you write about fan fiction if it doesn't follow the plot? But I hope the author will polish the plot of the transitional section well, and not make it so awesome at the beginning, but then have to suffer from Lao Deng's fart later. I have followed this book from the beginning to now, and I like it quite a lot, so that's why I say so much.

From the writing style, it can be seen that the author is a novice. I was persuaded to quit by the plot in Chapter 6.

Hermione?

What the hell? The first five chapters were awesome, but the sixth chapter faltered? ? ? In the first five chapters, I thought it was an invincible and enjoyable journey. After reading the sixth chapter, I felt that after reading the sixth chapter, I would find various reasons to make concessions and be manipulated with the plot.

Didn't the author look at the purchasing power of the original work Jin Jialong? It can range from thousands to tens of thousands. . .

Why is it full of the feeling of being earthy and middle-class😅

I still support the author Except for the protagonist at the beginning, you can say it directly without beating around the bush, unless Dumbledore makes it clear that if you want to read it, you have to be a teacher. It seems that the protagonist's reason for becoming a teacher is somewhat untenable. I don't really like the follow-up version, it's too pretentious If the content of traditional elements is not exaggerated or obtrusive, then it feels okay. But it looks too fake, and some of them have minor mistakes, which make them exaggerated, outrageous and embarrassing. I couldn't stand it when I saw the Magic Stone level. Some people may like this kind of blind pretense, but I feel like I can't bring it in. I feel like the protagonist deserves a beating.

After reading about 15 chapters, there are both big and small poisons Mysterious animal professor turns into defense professor Mysterious oriental mysterious wines and delicacies that keep appearing Then there are Chinese proverbs Read a few more chapters, and if there are more, continue to add

Why did I have the urge to delete the book after reading Chapter 6?

I feel a little aggrieved. Well, I have a double standard. I just can't bear to see the protagonist get angry and not come back with revenge. If you like me and only like to read cool stories, you may feel a bit guilty.

Chapter 6 Explosion😅

Pure rubbish, the author must be a woman, the protagonist is very girly

The recommendation votes are great, and the monthly pass is also given. As long as you write well, I will give it to you if you subscribe. Come on, do you know how difficult it is to find a good and appetizing novel? As long as you maintain the standard and update it, you can read as much as you write 🙏

I've only read less than a chapter and already feel that the author is a bit too greedy.

This thing can write 1,000 chapters. It will take at least 600 chapters to defeat Voldemort, and it will take hundreds of chapters to win. It's so boring. Most people who write about Harry Potter are not as boring as you.

The beginning was good, but the end was a bit hasty.