I Became a Sage by Writing Novels

As of Chapter 22, I still feel something is wrong. In this kind of world, capable ministers and Confucian ministers should work together, nor should they look down on each other with various prejudices. If you want to fight against the enemy, you have to rely on high-level Confucianism cultivators, farming and praying for rain to ensure smooth weather. This proves that the two are inseparable from each other, but the author forcibly separates them and creates opposition and contradiction. It is really incomprehensible.

It was good at first, but when I saw modern poetry, I was really a bit overwhelmed, and suddenly it felt boring. If you ask the top authors of ancient poetry to accept modern poetry and think it is good, it is very frustrating. A group of people who are accustomed to concise words, deep meaning, concise word count, and sonorous rhythms think your modern poetry is good? I don't deny the excellence of modern poetry, but taking this poem of yours as an example, you made writing this sentiment a memory, but Li Shangyin, who was already at a loss at that time, felt that your "open the door and help me cover the quilt, you are still beside me" was well written. You said it yourself, in terms of rhythm and diction, how can your so-called modern poetry meet the aesthetics of those people? They are afraid that they will think that your stuff is not as good as the lyrics they wrote when they were drunk in a brothel. I don't deny the significance of modern poetry, but I can honestly say, after so many years, how many modern poems can you remember? On the contrary, how many ancient poems can you remember?

The timeline of this novel is not logically consistent. Since all literati in ancient times lived for hundreds of years, there should be many excellent poems and articles. Since poems and articles can be converted into force, judging from the situation of Chinese culture crushing neighboring countries, even if Daqian has internal problems, it should be the most powerful in terms of force value externally.

It's too sewn. It's both copying and sewing the actual history of various dynasties and various administrative reforms into the novel. It would be better to just throw it into an imaginary history without any autonomy.

Don't expect the ancients to appreciate modern poetry. This is the first time I have seen an author copy free verse in the ancient world for the ancients to appreciate. Personally, I think modern poetry is the product of the invasion of modern Western culture and the promotion of vernacular. In addition, the emotions that modern poetry wants to express basically require me to write an appreciation of the poem. Modern poetry is too obscure and difficult to understand compared to ancient poetry. Just like this modern poem copied by the author, if the author himself did not say it, who would know that it is about maternal love? Moreover, modern poetry is a typical literary expression of Western individualism and liberalism. In ancient times, without the impact of Western culture, it was basically impossible for anyone to appreciate and resonate with it.

It turns out that 🤫 Xu Qian's soul traveled from Blue Star to Dafeng and became a watchman and was responsible for the national destiny of Dafeng. However, by chance, Xu Qian's soul traveled to the sage world of Confucianism and Taoism again. The exit was the certification of heaven! 😥😁😁😁

If someone reads an article and contributes, it will be amazing. But then, he forgot that he had read this article. After reading this article for the second time, can you contribute a second piece of praise? If possible, can a big family specialize in raising a group of forgetful people, so that they can rack up the number of auction cases? The navy of the talented world.

I become a saint by reading books. I become a saint by reading books. I live forever by writing books.

The writing is not bad, the writing is smooth, there are no eunuchs, it is just a bit short. Summary: The writing is okay, but short and weak. I hope the author will keep up the good work!

If you write like this, it will be difficult to end it without revolution.