
Naruto: Life in Konoha at the Beginning of Time Loop
火影:时间循环开始的木叶生活
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- Completed
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- 1.3M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 2y ago
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- Qidian
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This is a sadistic article, with almost no fun points. There is only a bitter and resentful person who tries to save him over and over again in reincarnations, and is played and applauded by high-end players. Well, actually speaking of it, as a college student who has never watched Naruto, it seems that he can achieve this level. However, these days, there probably aren't many people who like to read sad stories about two creators who don't know the plot, especially watching the protagonist being treated like a monkey by Danzo Sarutobi, being cursed by Uchiha Madara, and finally getting Hinata to recommend White Fang as Hokage, but White Fang withdrew from a group of supporters because he was afraid that the Third Generation would be unhappy. The key is that there is actually a third-generation conspiracy behind this matter. White Fang went to report early that someone recommended me to be the Hokage. Haha, as for the vulgar thing about falling in love with a girl from a rival family, not being able to fall in love, being turned over and over, and being worried and sleepless are not considered poisonous.
Would Kushina still like Minato without a hero to save her? In the original work, he hated Minato before graduation, but after graduation he became desperate because he excluded Kushina. I was desperate, and then Hero Minato saved the beauty, and Kushina was with Minato. Why do you like Minato here? Unlike the original work, the second design must also conform to common sense. Why was Naruto in the same situation as Kushina, desperate first? How to successfully brainwash Naruto with sunshine?
The timeline written by the author feels wrong. First of all, it feels wrong that Nagato was born before the Uzumaki clan was destroyed, and he was still studying in the Uzumaki ninja school. Let's put it this way, if Nagato knew chakra before meeting Jiraiya, the plot should not have developed to Jiraiya accepting a disciple. In fact, Nagato could still endure being born before the Uzumaki clan was destroyed. At most, it was the transfer before the destruction that the author said. But it is impossible to learn Chakra. The prerequisites for Jiraiya to accept a disciple are not enough. The three people Sannin met were children who were not threatening at all.
It feels like the male protagonist is playing a one-man show so far. One person faces Danzo, and the other takes care of the family. The clan members are just tools to promote the plot and know nothing. Moreover, the male protagonist is a bit idealistic in his behavior. He knows that Danzo is one of the enemies who wiped out the clan and yet he despises his enemies. The Uchiha here seem to be brainless and arrogant. No wonder they were exterminated in the end. I don't want the male protagonist to end up with an Uchiha. With his IQ and temper, I feel that the male protagonist is like a wronged creature and will affect the next generation! However, the male protagonist is a child. I don't know if the plot is good enough. The key is to improve his strength. Personally, if I can't find a shortcut, just study the whirlpool sealing technique. It feels like there is a lot to do!
There is a problem. The premise of Minato's training is that he and the Jinchuriki are lovers, and he is used to tie the Jinchuriki. I seriously doubt that the Minato hero saving the beauty in the original work is fake. He must be a powerful character to steal the Jinchuriki, at least a Jonin. Whether the three parallel imports can escape is a question. Minato was able to defeat three jounin after graduation, and the three of them in the original book were like trash, one sword at a time. The civilian ninja had no bloodline, no resources, and no training. He was stronger than Sasuke who had opened the Sharingan and had family education for a period of time. It was so fake.
Is this protagonist used to being abused? That Uchiha woman treated him so well and he still fell in love with her, could she be less cruel? Women in reality are indeed stingy, but look at Sakura, Ino, Hinata and Tenten in Naruto, which one is not hundreds of times better than this Uchiha woman? Even Sakura, who was scolded all day long, was much better than this heroine.
I just want to say that the author has never watched Naruto
I thought I was going to reopen it, but it turned out that I just finished the abuse and then suppressed it.
Has this author watched Naruto? I'm convinced that Konoha's forehead protection symbol is related to whirlpools. The Uzumaki symbol is the pattern on the back of the vest, and the Konoha symbol is the leaf in Madara's hand.
I read it and the author's writing is good. It's a pity that online articles are too voluminous now. Come on.
The concept is very good, but please be more accurate in the time of the historical events of Naruto... (The more I read, the more...) 😒
The protagonist knows nothing about Naruto, so what kind of Naruto do you write about? I might as well go back and watch Naruto.
Another author who came to write a novel after seeing Naruto with only half-understanding. Nagato's reincarnation eye was given to him by Madara. When will the Uzumaki clan be able to activate the reincarnation eye?
Re: Life in the Naruto world from scratch😃
The first volume was very interesting, The Undead of Infinite Reincarnation, but after the first day I didn't want to read it and joined Konoha again. This is just my personal dissatisfaction with Konoha. This book is still excellent
Is Mito dead? When did he die
Is the protagonist a time traveler? Why is there no common knowledge about Hokage?
Regarding the timeline issue
Every Naruto fanfic has discussions about timeline bugs, and there are different opinions. The reason is simple, because there are inherent problems with the timeline of the original work. The bugs in the official setting book are the most serious. So some people push the time and age from the beginning back, and some people push it from the back to the front. The result is that it doesn't match up at all. If you don't believe it, go search the Naruto timeline and everyone will give a different answer. Only the timeline after the beginning of Naruto's story is the clearest. The further this problem is pushed forward, the more serious the problem will be. Just like Kato Dan's death time, it is set that he died at the age of 27, but if you calculate according to the setting book, you can even calculate that his death time was before the rope tree, which is completely inconsistent with the original plot. Another example is Kushina. The book says that she came to Konoha after becoming a genin, but according to the original plot, she was in the same class as Minato at that time, and she should have been only 6 years old. Are you telling me that she can be a genin at the age of six? Besides, she also attended Konoha's ninja school. So unless the timetable is completely clear, I give a vague time range, and then determine the age according to the needs of the plot. Nagato is slightly increased by two years for the needs of the plot and does not affect the plot of the original work.
After reading your novel, I instantly felt that Haruno Sakura in the original novel was really a good woman.
Self-recommendation "Konoha's Uchiha Begins as a Medical Ninja" The plot is interesting and the writing is smooth. Friends who like Naruto fan fiction can give it a try. Click on the avatar to read directly.
I'll say goodbye directly to the author. I read novels to relax my mind. I don't understand what kind of gods are those who read novels to make themselves mentally exhausted 🤔
Brother, your golden finger is just like a fake. None of the damned people are dead and they are living according to the original story time. Danzo Hiruzen is immortal, and there are many tragedies that have happened. Your time backtracking is a joke, any other system is better than this👍🏻
With "Starting from Naruto to subvert the world!" Come and read this excellent work. The author has good writing style and great imagination. I have collected it!
[Naruto World]: Can sacrificing Uchiha maintain peace in the ninja world? If my last name wasn't Uchiha, I almost would have believed it! You can call me traitor or executioner behind my back, but in front of me, you have to call me clan leader, or Hokage-sama! [Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba]: Mukai, I don't know what you regard life as, but I regard the blue Higan flower as a pickle! [Giant World]: It's not Jike or Allen who realizes his wish, but me! Titan power? Oh, Susanoo! [Inuyasha]: Kikyo, your biggest weakness is your kindness towards human beings. Now I want to forcefully kiss you. If you can, beat me to death! [Pirates]: Pirates are not allowed in the world of One Piece! This sea belongs only to navigators and adventurers! [God of Death], [Magic Forbidden], [Red Eyes], [Conan]...
The protagonist's life is a tragedy. In the last review, many people from the Uzumaki clan died. The protagonist just vented his anger and destroyed a few unrelated small ninja villages. Some cannon fodder ninjas died in the five major countries. The culprit was not eliminated at all, which was not in line with the protagonist's character, and he died in a hurry. White Fang, Kakashi, Naruto, Sasuke, Itachi, and the Uchiha clan, including family ninjas and civilian ninjas, were still played and applauded by Hiruzen according to the original conspiracy theory, and had to rely on the correction power of the original plot to take Hiruzen offline. Obito, Nagato, Madara, and the heroine Chihiro were still at the mercy of layers of nesting doll conspiracies. Their lives were tragic, and some people even died without discovering the black hand that caused their tragic lives. The ending is better than the original version of Naruto, except that it has an invincible protagonist and some Uzumaki clan sealed on the island. Basically nothing has changed about the protagonist. Even because of the conspiracy theory, it is less passionate than the original work, and may actually be more tragic.
I have read Chapter 90 and just finished the first volume. Let me talk about the advantages of this book. The plot is excellent and the story of the protagonist struggling to survive and trying to save the village is very interesting. Next, let's talk about the shortcomings. The first volume has 90 chapters. The protagonist struggled to save the village for 90 chapters, but finally failed. All the protagonist's relatives and friends were gone. Even the save point of Goldfinger's "infinite rebirth" was covered. All the previous efforts were lonely, and the protagonist still had nothing in the end. After reading Chapter 50 of the second volume, the author decided to destroy the Uzumaki clan and let the protagonist join Konoha. He has fallen into a cliché. He inexplicably fell in love with a hostile Uchiha girl, not to mention his life and death, and left a large chapter to fight with Danzo Hiruzen. The cliched plot of characters and power struggle has long made me vomit after seeing it🤮 In short, although the story in the first volume is well written, this book is undoubtedly a sadistic novel. You will not be happy after reading it, but will be very uncomfortable. It is not recommended to read
It's weird and frustrating to watch, but it's very good. After watching it all, I found it was a mess, which is a bit outrageous.