The Other Shore of All Worlds

Let me tell the author a little trick for writing novels. The more you write, the more you earn, and the faster you write, you can finish the book as soon as possible and take a long vacation. So, hurry up and update 100 times a day to skyrocket!

The writing is very good, the stitching is very dense, and all kinds of allusions are mixed in. There is nothing poisonous, but there are too few updates, but it is better to slow down than to feed S.

What's the problem with this book? The reason is that the pace is too fast and the content is not substantial enough. At present, almost all character creation and task growth in sequence stories are staged and dungeon-like. The climax and foreshadowing are distinguished through stages, and the growth experience is enriched through dungeons. The book's seven-day meeting is a growth stage. Each meeting recruits a new planet, which is a copy. It looks like it fits these attributes, but it actually doesn't handle the details well. One of the problems is that the growth stage is too short, and the time to develop the main characters and supporting characters is too short! If the time is short, it will cause all kinds of abruptness. One is that the different participants are not well represented, the other is that the protagonist's growth line is not shown, and the world as the background is not shown. As a result, the protagonist is invincible, but it neither has the mindless excitement of the invincible flow, nor does it reflect the weirdness and horror of the sequence world. The second problem is that the dungeon setting of each new planet is very good, but except for the Dashang World, which has only a brief taste of the exploration of the new world, the other planets are just like the protagonist's heaven, a background board, which makes the content become empty. Many people are saying that the author is stupid, but in fact, it is not the case. In my opinion, it is just a content that fills the framework of the article, which is not substantial enough. Even if the author's arrangements for each planet are actually as they are now, he can still try to make the content more realistic. After all, more detailed growth routes and attempts to explore the world can make the content more detailed and enrich the content, and this book will be even better.

What can I say about this novel? It's an invincible novel. It feels like anyone who travels through time can reach the height of the protagonist if he has the protagonist's golden finger.

When I read Chapter 5 "National Library", I had a question that I couldn't help but ask. You must change to a larger size and spray it here. As mentioned before, the 12-year compulsory education is implemented, which is 3 years longer than the rest of us. And yet, oil lamps are still used in cities? Let's just say that when we first established nine-year compulsory education, oil lamps were no longer needed in our city, okay? How many years have you been promoting it for the past 12 years, and yet the city—this is the National Library—is still using oil lamps? ! Can we contact the actual person? The gap in real life is huge, but it's not that big, not to mention that the library is different from home. Let's put it this way, if the National Library cannot afford new lighting, then at least 95% of the places in this city cannot afford it. It is unimaginable that 12-year compulsory education can continue to be implemented in such a financial situation.

To be honest, the author doesn't know how to write emotional dramas, so there is no need to forcefully cast a female protagonist. From the beginning to now, I haven't seen who the protagonist really likes. Maybe the author has set it up, but I really don't see it.

How to write this is a refreshing article about the recovery of spiritual energy in Chengdu

Now it's really like that. When I read the chapter title, I was either shocked, petrified or frightened. I thought it was going to be a mastermind behind the scenes to save the world...

The protagonist was promoted too quickly, which resulted in many characters becoming useless, such as the elder sister, her golden finger, and the team that all had the characteristics of the protagonist, but they were all gone after the protagonist made the incarnation. This is at least two hundred chapters fast forward

Here is a conjecture: 1. Li Suyan's father is Emperor Tongjing. 2. Baozong No. 2 Is unpopular and a group of people hope to overthrow Emperor Tianshun. 3. The protagonist intends to collect all the emperor's books. 4. The emperor's book means imperial power and destiny for people in this world. 5. The protagonist can collect the information in the emperor's book through Li Suyan The following is the conclusion. The protagonist can support Li Suyan as the empress and become a prince himself 😜😁