After Maxing Out the Hatred of the Heroine, I Traveled Through Time

I read the first 68 chapters in one go, and the overall reading experience was good. The author has not read many Japanese novels, and does not distinguish between serious literature and popular online literature. I only comment on it based on my personal feelings. From the perspective of character creation, the characters currently appearing can all leave a distinct and unique impression on people. This is already rare in the online articles I have read. However, many female protagonists often cannot escape the stereotypes of templates and tools. The female characters that appear are all beautiful and sexy, with outstanding talents and strength. They have fallen out of the strange circle of female character creation in online literature. The imbalance between power and depth of experience is essentially a vulgarization of the characters. Characters must have priorities, which makes people worry about whether the author's writing power can support the tension and coordination of five or more main characters, as well as the balance between relatively unimportant characters. This is a big challenge to complete the work. Another point is that the process of transformation between the so-called "love" and "hate" of the heroines is also difficult to explain simply. If it is not grasped well, the whole story will even collapse. In addition, the overall depth of the characters can be further explored. In addition to the entanglements between the male protagonist and various women, the male protagonist can also explore elements such as friendship with the second male protagonist, so as not to appear monotonous and boring. From a plot point of view, the current pace is relatively fast (I don't know how long the author plans to write it. I think that with the current development speed and the number of early foreshadowings, the ending can be seen in about 200 chapters). The plot line is relatively clear, but the connection between stages is loose and the main line is not prominent enough. Although these are regrets, the plot serves the characters, and it is successful to create vivid characters through the plot. The last point is the author's writing style. This work contains a lot of Japanese history and myths and legends, coupled with an unclear hierarchy, it is easy for readers to feel at a loss. The complex information of the background requires a large amount of plot as a basis to be easily accepted by people, otherwise such works can only be appreciated by a few people. One thing that surprised me about the author was his sense of proportion in using Internet memes. He used them in a way that would not make people feel stiff or vulgar, but could fit into the situation and make people find it interesting. Generally speaking, this is a good novel with multiple female protagonists. The characters are still self-consistent at the moment. I hope to see the complete development of the story.

It looks good from the beginning, but it looks a bit awkward. Personally, I feel that the starting point is not suitable for the "Ni Qing" style, such as the character or behavior of "Asashi", and the male protagonist is always embarrassed by girls...

The plot is pretty good, but the details are a bit lacking. For example, the age of the characters. In thirty years, the little loli has become an aunt.

I'm ashamed of you, what kind of Asasi behavior 😰

Why is it that the more I write, the weirder it gets... Is this protagonist useless?

Now there are four female protagonists: Renge Utsunomiya of the Unified Society, Sakuraya Fujiwara of the Kyoto Imperial Court, Shirogiri Asagiri of the Everlasting Sect, and Shiori Shimizu of the Golden Light Daimyojin. The threads buried in the early stages are almost complete. Are there any more female protagonists?

My opinion is that it would be better to change the main character's character to

It's so pitiful to be played around with applause and have to run away every time😇😇😇

It's better to have the setting of a useless person at the beginning. Now there are too many buffs stacked up. The protagonist should be a person who is purely at the top. Although he will die many times in the game, in the eyes of NPCs, he is a ruthless person who can clear the level in one life.

I just look forward to the day when the pig's feet are cut with a hatchet!

Grandma's writing is so good, but no one has read it. I'm so angry.

How many heroines are there in the back? If you look at the first few, you can hook up with four more after about thirty chapters, or are they all supporting roles? Isn't it a little bit toxic as a supporting role? Puzzled. . .

The feeling has collapsed, Wang Zha came up, and now it is up to Genyoko to take action. No matter who helps him, he feels like he has lost his autonomy. Is there a sudden breakthrough?

Give me some support😁 In addition, there are quite a few readers who want to read books with male chauvinistic ideas.

It's really well written. I kept reading as the author kept writing.

One thing to say, there are no new books in the same period that I can read. There is no big problem with the writing. There are no shortcomings in not looking at the plot from the perspective of a post bar. Moreover, Qidian is very restrictive for authors who write about harems (not as popular as fl, cyj, etc.). I feel that there is nothing to criticize for writing at this level... I really can't find anything good in Qidian (only Qidian, other website styles are not suitable for me).

As we all know, no book can be written without abstraction

Did only four of the five great gods appear?

Hey, Modo Modo, keep going

Am I watching female videos? I actually finished reading it, and sure enough, The Overbearing President's article still has merit. Slipping away.

It's not bad, but it's a bit bad. It refers to the characterization and psychological changes of the characters.

I read it again and I still think it's pretty good, but it's a mess at the end. Does the author have a group? Is there any new book? Has he been reincarnated?