Family Cultivation: There Is Something Wrong with This Magic Weapon

A diaosi wearing a cultivating jacket and writing erotic articles?

The subject matter is good, but the problem is that the author's writing skills are seriously insufficient. The first few chapters directly dig up the graves of the ancestors, which is like a stick in the throat when reading. The protagonist cannot take revenge, but also wishes to bless the grave diggers. He was served by water and fire again, which is aggrieved My evaluation is that it is far better than transforming into a magic sword.

It's too out of the ordinary, and I think it's humorous

The subject matter and imagination are okay, but it is too vulgar and pornographic. Although it has a comedic effect, it is inferior and it would be more profound if it were not pornographic jokes

The further I get to the back, the more excited I become, feeling like the female author was at the level of the previous few years.

I feel relieved when I see you are at LV1

Some plots are too poisonous and inconsistent with the three views, which will affect the mood and easily scare away readers.

The introduction seems to have been changed?

In the first chapter, I put poison and dug my ancestors' graves with a smile, but on the next page, I immediately felt sad

It disappoints me so much. It seems like you can't get out of the book since our ancestors. No book can surpass it. Even if you finish writing, you will give up when it doesn't work. I trust you, encourage you and support you again and again. For your sake, I will switch from pirated copies to genuine ones. I will spend money to read every one of your books. I just want to help you. I just supported you a while ago. Now you come to do this for me. You have disappointed me so much. I have never been so disappointed with a person. Maybe my 18-year-old enthusiasm has already been fixed at the moment when the ancestors ended. Now it is all my own wishful thinking. I will never trust you again in the future, nor will I read any genuine books at the starting point. I am so disappointed.

Funny writing doesn't require too much logic, but it does have a serious IQ deficit.

The idea is indeed good, but if it is too strong at the beginning, it will collapse later on, so do it step by step.

It smells like the spirit of the ancestors in heaven. Are you the vest of that author? No matter how you change, I will still recognize you.

I think it's okay for such funny and nonsensical novels to have some flaws. Look at the movies of Stephen Chow and Jim Carrey, even they can't guarantee that they're both funny and logical! If you don't think it's good, you can only say that the novel isn't suitable for you, but you can't say that the novel isn't good.

It's good-looking, but it's not exciting and not fun enough to watch! Please explode

Zhu Huanhuan's writing is very good and very funny.

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I heard that the author likes King Kong Barbie🤔

Not bad, come on (๑>؂<๑)

It's okay Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It is not good to let the magic weapon be used directly. I think it is more reasonable to let the descendants take action and reward the descendants.