Beast Pirates: Kaido's Wish-Granting Dragon

Author: Have you watched One Piece? Can a general defeat Rocks and Whitebeard? Are you sure your keyboard isn't broken? The original book has already written it very clearly. Rocks destroyed the entire navy, and all the navy suffered heavy casualties. In the end, it was Garp who broke out and joined forces with Roger to defeat Rocks. Whitebeard and the others were not united, and the so-called overlord of the sea was Rocks. It was not until the Valley of Gods War broke out that Rocks died and the sea overlord passed. When it comes to the Navy, Garp recalled in the cartoon that Rocks was unquestionably the strongest at that time, and it also happened in the comics, and Rocks ate the Darkness Fruit. Whitebeard didn't know the weakness because Whitebeard couldn't beat Rocks. How could you know the weaknesses if you can't beat Rocks? You, a navy admiral, can defeat Rocks? You didn't write it like this

The current timeline is 1480. In the original book, Charlotte Lingling only gave birth to one son in 1481, and he had little role and could be replaced. So I want to ask everyone's opinion, should Kaido and Big Mom have a baby? If I give birth, will it be a boy or a girl? What do you suggest for a name? Or it's okay not to give birth. I choose the one with the most likes.

Seeing that Zefa and Zefa are much older than Kai, they are from the Warring States period. The author wrote that Zefa was a small soldier, so I knew that there was no need to read this book. It was too forceful to accept Zefa as a subordinate. Maybe you want to make Zefa a strong enemy, but it's too forceful.

Is the plot about Kaido acting as a mount for that woman serious? Since writing about Kaido focuses on the tyrant style of training, fighting, violence, and ruthlessness, writing such a domineering story makes me sick to my stomach.

Why is there an original character or a female protagonist? This is just the biggest poisonous point in fan fiction.

People gradually progress from babbling to running and jumping. I am a new author. Although I have barely written two or three books, I still don't understand many things. You can feel free to express your opinions about this book. I also want to know what is wrong with my book. As long as the greetings to my family are not mindless, everyone can speak freely. Note: I will definitely delete any curse words.

What Kamen Rider, what will of the planet? Are you sure you are writing a pirate fanfic? You might as well write about Kamen Rider. Don't you feel uncomfortable if you can't understand how two works with such different painting styles are stuck together?

Personally, I feel that the most toxic ones are Kamen Rider, the heroine, and the One Piece Consciousness. I shouldn't write about these.

Is this written about Kaido? Haha! Let's just write about the days when the system took away Kaido's body😄!

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