When the Cherry Blossoms Fall, a Beautiful Girl Will Express Her Love

It's so pretty, why isn't it popular?

You are a man who wants to be the God of War in double updates.

Is Kirite really trying to persuade him to quit? A group of schools that are either chaebols or aristocrats. The male protagonist comes from the countryside and has no background and no influence. How do you want to get involved? You continue to write back to the school and report that the teachers and security are reasonable. You will help later and you can barely increase your favorability. But you have to stop. Are you still taking advantage? Same ? I think this logic is too far-fetched. You don't have anything to rely on, so you keep dancing like crazy to death.

Generally speaking, it gave me a good impression. What attracted me to read it was the interesting writing and various complaints. The style of the light novel is obvious. I even felt surprised when I first read it. The writing is really interesting. It is a little regrettable that the excessive complaints still affect the normal plot advancement, causing the already weak plot to be filled with all kinds of complaints, making it seem dragging. If you read the first few chapters, you feel amazing and interesting, but as you continue reading, you will feel tired. Too many jokes affect the expression of the plot, and the lack of plot and unclear story context lead to a loss of expectations for subsequent development. This is probably the feeling Finally, the writing is quite interesting, enough to be emphasized, and the character portrayal is also quite good The story and the overly simple setting are slightly lacking Very good Riqing

It's not good to watch, the writing style is okay but the main character is really bad. If you have a system, you don't need to buy skills, just buy an appraisal certificate. No strategy, no points earned, no idea what I'm doing. In Chapter 30, I saw gangsters surrounding my gay friend. He said he would go back to school and ask the teacher to hit him in the face with his schoolbag.       ，"，"，buff，， The intellectual level required to enter an aristocratic school based on grades is "My gay friend is surrounded, I'll go and save him" or "My gay friend, save me". I looked at the title of the book "Beautiful Girl" and the content: "Gay Friends". The character and arc of the protagonist are completely lacking. Really Four

Come on, author. Although my grades are not very good and I can't help much, I still tried my best to give a chapter recommendation. I wish you a good flight By the way, is this your first book?

The author's writing style is good, but some of the plots are really shocking. First of all, the male protagonist forcibly wrote a letter asking the female protagonist to owe the president of the Go Club a favor. He knew that the president liked the female protagonist. It is reasonable to speculate that the president used this favor to invite the female protagonist to dinner or other unfavorable readers. The second is the most rebellious Oh my god, I want to introduce the female protagonist as a dance partner to the male protagonist. I want to write a funny feeling here, but it is very low-key to be a real ex without the consent of the female protagonist. As a person with normal views, I can only consider the female protagonist as friends at this time. How could I think of introducing the male protagonist to the female protagonist? It's such a wretched and responsible person to be a dance partner. Here I can only think that the male protagonist did not treat the female protagonist as a woman he likes, but a prop that can be used. It is very low. The second thing is to discuss the female protagonist's figure with gay friends outside the door. I can only say The author has read a lot of Japanese comics and has not imitated the good ones from the bad ones. I can only say that the plot of the male protagonist is an unruly guy (I can't think of a more suitable word). Generally speaking, it is like a clear stream that was messed up by the male protagonist, an octopus from the sea, spraying ink randomly.

Just endure the humiliation and join the club for the scholarship. Why do you insist on attending this dance when you know you don't have the conditions? Introducing someone to a dance partner for a piece of clothing? This shows that the protagonist has a poor character and is greedy for money and betraying his friends. One is knowing that this man has a bad reputation. Wouldn't introducing a woman as his dance partner harm other people's reputation? Second, I came from a noble school in the countryside. Why should I introduce a dance partner to others and agree to something I am not sure about? What should I do if I can't finish it? If you are short of money, you can work part-time. If you are good-looking and lively, you can hand out flyers and work as a cashier without starving to death, instead of letting others fiddle with you just to attend a dance. The plot is very blunt. The protagonist has no emotional intelligence, no ability, no hard work, and a powerful system. He is bullied in real life and bullied by the underworld in various ways. He has no anger at all. The panel system is given to you. Wouldn't it be better to go back and exercise and use two fighting skills to protect yourself? He deserves to be bullied by the underworld, ignored by the heroine, suppressed by tens of thousands of yen, and a social beast. Also, the protagonist's character is really bad. The movie tickets given by a gay friend were resold and given to others as gifts. The gay friend was labeled as a disservice and even beat up a girl, causing subsequent troubles, etc.

I hope the author's plot can be half as good as your writing. Your plot always gives me a premonition that it will be poisoned or NTR, and then you still think it's okay and continue to go your own way. I hope I'm just making a malicious attack out of nothing and not a prophecy.

It started high and went low. The narrative rhythm and character interactions are well written. I really didn't understand the scene where my hand was almost cut off later. The logic of the story was too far-fetched. It's not that it can't be cut, but that the focus of the narrative is distorted. If the relevant settings and character personalities can be laid out in advance, the plot will be okay. Secondly, many of the actions the protagonist does later on related to the heroine are very strange, such as finding a dance partner for this Yu Ye and finding the heroine. First of all, this character is quite disgusting. He is just a tall boy with a spermatozoon and no charm at all. Ordinary girls avoid her, so why does the male protagonist still want to find a female protagonist to be his dance partner? If someone else rejects you, just say so directly? Secondly, and what made me most confused, the three men's reactions to the heroine were so inexplicable, as if they were writing about three clowns. There is no real role in the plot between the male protagonist and the female protagonist looking for a dance partner. Readers will find that there is no difference in deleting this plot about the male protagonist looking for a dance partner. The dialogue is also boring, and the male protagonist always seems to only dare to talk about the female protagonist behind her back. What about the shamelessness and jumping out of the game at the beginning? Comedy is not comedy, love is not love. Who is the author's intended audience? Wait and see for a while

The two new chapters are too outrageous I won't say anything about misunderstanding that this thing is a common routine, but whether you can fight with a wooden sword has anything to do with being friends😅 Look at the plot for yourself. The male protagonist's brain is not normal when he plays the gangster. The male protagonist also followed this outrageous logic. You just wrote that he didn't communicate well after the first wave of fights. When he got angry, even if he wanted to fight again, it would be better than this The entire plot of these two chapters makes people speechless.

This is a common situation for authors. They fail to write a good outline and just write whatever comes to mind. The writing is messy and the updates are unstable 😐 The readers have lost their grades and the author has no motivation, and finally falls into a vicious cycle. If it weren't for the author's excellent writing skills, I would have run away. If the author plans to continue writing books, I hope you will take it seriously, and I also hope to continue pursuing your books 😢

Supplementary character drawing

Character drawing supplement 2

Chapter 49: Death due to poison. What was said in the comment section is right to go high and go low. The first few chapters are indeed humorous and interesting, but it is a pity that the male protagonist becomes a retarded plot-promoting robot with no bottom line and no dignity.

Let me write down my thoughts. From the last book to the present, there has been a slight improvement. The advantage is the description of daily life. The best part is the chapter about the sister (doubt), and the emotional scenes are actually real. The male protagonist pretends to be stupid a little, and many plots are a little bit toxic. People who follow the update feel average, and there are updates. The overall feeling is that it starts high and goes low, but it is worth reading in the Qidian light novel area.

Alas, the best plot is the sister's subplot

How to put it, this book is like giving you a full banquet but adding a little condiments to disgust you, and then you are reluctant to throw away this table of dishes.

Why is there no author blocking function?

The author writes very well, and the update can be completed as long as there is no supervision (more updates is better) Don't be affected by some comments, the old readers of the light novel section affirm it: the writing is comparable to all first-class light novels, there are only a few monthly tickets, but I will not forget the recommendation vote 👍👍👍

This book should be used as a writing practice. I hope I can summarize my experience, prepare an outline, and write better.

First of all, I want to finish spreading flowers, and thank you for this book that has accompanied me in 2023. When I first read this book, I was really surprised. I thought I had encountered a treasure. But since the first update, I have become more and more disappointed. The unclear meaning of Hua Jiumei may have started from the previous conflict with Changfeng. . . I don't know when it started to become boring. Of course, it doesn't mean that there were no problems in the beginning. At least I read the first few chapters with anger. From the beginning to the end, I just muddle along with Wu Zhihua Xi. Then there are four heroines with emotional lines, Tian Yuqin, Kirizhi Hanaxi, Ogawa Yukito, Kato Ai. Why do I only see two and a half? Even including Hana Kumi, there are only three. Rounding up, it's four. Where is Yuqin that day? I don't want to talk about the system anymore, benevolent people have different opinions and wise people have different opinions. I just want to say that sometimes there is really no need to mess with this. The system may not necessarily make people watch, but a system will definitely dissuade many people. The same is true for the system, and the same is true for time travel. The campus festival, how should I put it, was not particularly amazing, only the confession of love was remarkable. Then there are the poisonous points interspersed from time to time in the article, all about Ogawa Snow Rabbit, which can be said to have persuaded two large waves of people. Alas, that's all. Happy New Year. Poor Wuzhihuaxi.

Saw Chapter 32 and retreated. Newcomers can just read chapter 32. If you can bear it, I will obey you.

I feel like you should have just cut it at that time. I don't understand the rhythm of the plot. The heroine who has been determined for a long time just disappears. The update is not fast. It is all supported by one-handed writing.

If all four heroines were to be accepted, it would take another seven to eight hundred thousand words. . . Come on, author, I will subscribe as long as I continue to update. I hope every character can have a happy ending.

Appendix is ​​appendix, don't pretend to be dead, you just owe it to the hero of the universe to kick him

I want to say a lot about deletion and deletion, but it ends like this. It's a pity.

"When the cherry blossoms fall, a beautiful girl will confess to you" "What do you mean there are no cherry blossoms here" "So there are no beautiful girls" "No one will confess to you"