Fu Shifeng

The author of this novel is a relatively traditional magazine author with sophisticated writing style, and the protagonist is also an indigenous person. Advantages of this book: 1. The plot structure is clear. I read 60 chapters and the main contradiction that drives the plot is already clear. 2 The protagonist and supporting characters have distinctive characteristics and are flesh and blood. Whether it is the background or personality of each main character, they are all clearly rooted and vivid on the page. 3 There is no intelligence, and there will not be a sudden appearance of a flat tool man, just to promote the development of the plot and forcibly interrupt the reading experience. Every transition is natural. I will only talk about the shortcomings: The coolness is not clear. The author's writing skills are not inferior to those of "The Strange Fairy", the plot concept is complete, and the characterization is also very good. Why does it read so poorly compared to "The Strange Fairy", a work of the same writing quality that I recently finished reading in one sitting? I think it's because there is no clear point of enjoyment. The author has more than enough technique but not enough resonance. To sum up the reason, I don't think it's just because the protagonist's perspective is not modern. When I read "Zhu Xian", it was clear that all of them were indigenous people, and it was quite emotionally satisfying. I think it must be because the author pays too little attention to the characters' inner thoughts. He only talks about motivations and little about emotions, which really doesn't work. Overall, it's pretty good and you can read it with your head in mind.

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This book is quite suitable for seasoned readers. The lack of popularity does not mean that the book is not good, but that times have changed. Fast food novels need to be colloquial, large-scale, and need to be bloody and novice from time to time. The author does not meet any of the requirements. There are fewer and fewer old-school writers.

I feel that Cheng Sanwu has a very contradictory personality and is very flexible in adapting to changes in battle. He is bold and careful, but his daily words and deeds are very reckless and rough, as if he is deliberately acting stupid and mindless.

It's so hard to feel colorless, so hard. I have written four books and it is still only LV3. I have not discovered colorless for a long time. The writing style and writing style are very suitable for my appetite. I'm afraid that if I don't make money, I'll stop writing in the end.

Why do you, a desperado, help others to seize relics and send them to Chang'an? Something wrong?

My book review suggestion is not to just read Xi's book reviews, it's better to read Deacon's book reviews. After all, reading more will give you more say, right? There is no doubt that this book is worth reading.

It's so good, I'm confused. What kind of books do people who say this is not good or that's not good usually read? Isn't this level good?

I very much agree with the author's portrayal of Cheng Sanwu's character. Without this character, some of the plots surrounding him are rootless. Some people have read too many novels and always think that the protagonist must be perfect and have the power of heaven and earth. It is very boring to read too much.

This book reminds me of the days when I read ancient and modern legends. I hope the author can persevere in this impetuous environment. If a physical book is published, I will definitely support it again!

I don't understand why the main character is such an idiot...

Opened a new book again? Has the problem of literary youth been cured?

The writing level of the physical book, the first big chapter is "Guard Style". It is very different from the fast food articles on the market. It has a style that combines martial arts and court 20 years ago. Also, the character creation is not like that of today's online novels, but the "brainless" and straightforward protagonist and the "unhappy" supporting characters are also classic combinations of martial arts novels of the time. What is good and what is bad is a matter of opinion. This book is not a fast-food Internet article to please readers, and it may not even be called an "Internet article". Of course many young readers today have objections, but if you are older and read martial arts weekly, you will definitely have a similar delicacy in your memory.

Is Cheng Sanwu the male protagonist this time? A brainless fool becomes the male protagonist?

I hope the author will write another book like Fang Waizhiyi, which combines Chinese and Western elements without belittling either party.

Can you post a single chapter of the old book and tell me that you have opened a new book? Every time, I don't promote the new book.

The author is really very regular. The new book has started to be the same as before, updating a chapter on time at 11 o'clock every day. I thought that the new book would have more updates, but I was overthinking it, hahaha

Although the story is not my favorite, Cheng Sanwu has been my favorite protagonist in recent years. I hope the author will release a new work soon, and I am looking forward to it.

After the protagonist enters the court, he loses the innocent and Li Kui-like temperament at the beginning and disappears into oblivion.

At least leave a clue😭

Is there any news about new books, comrades😍

The first few chapters were quite good, but after a dozen or so chapters, they stopped working. As a protagonist, he didn't have a unique temperament or charm that attracted people. He dealt with problems in Li Kui style throughout the whole process. When he encountered something, he only knew how to ask Brother Song Jiang. If it was a supporting role, it would be great to describe it like this, but it would not work as a protagonist.

After reading the entire book, I felt a bit pity. The whole story, both in terms of plot and characters, has a common problem, which is that it starts but ends at the end. The so-called snake tail does not mean that the writing is bad, but that the author seems not good at pushing the plot to a climax and bringing the characters to a highlight. Plot If the plot is just laid out slowly in the early stage, and then the plot is pushed to the climax step by step, then the overall feeling is still okay. But it is a pity that when the main characters appear on the stage, the plot unfolds in unit stories. When a unit story reaches its climax, it ends immediately and moves to the next cycle that is very slow. This gives the reader the feeling that it doesn't scratch the itch. Anshi Rebellion In the early stages of the story, many readers have already guessed that there will be a "Anshi Rebellion" plot, but unfortunately the story unfolds in the most mediocre way. It would be better to let Cheng Sanwu highlight the conflict between the two gluttons by having An Lushan raise an army in Hebei to defeat the saint, and then push Changqing to the bottom would be more in line with the proposition. Or wait for Kang to capture Chang'an and let Changqing raise troops in Jiangnan to regain Chang'an. Firstly, Changqing is good at the art of war, and secondly, he is also developing power in Jiangnan. This will be more reasonable than the current plot. Taotie The question of Taotie is actually quite high-level. Saint, Cheng Sanwu, Taotie, what exactly is Taotie? It was a good proposition, but unfortunately in the end it was raised high and lowered gently. Originally we thought Taotie was the master of power, but later in the story Cheng Sanwu mentioned that he was the source of power. The real evil in ancient times is that you have ruthless desires and have become a glutton with human desires. With such an awakening of love, it is enough to suppress it directly to Taotie, but a final battle happens later in the story, which actually lowers the tone. Wen Fuzi I find the character Wen Fuzi very interesting. Obviously the author could simply satisfy Wen Fuzi to sacrifice himself for the world and unfold his highlight moments which would be very touching, but the author just wants to resurrect him and die again silently. As mentioned before, it neither brought the plot to a climax nor moved people. Shi Tai Sui and Fu Shi Feng Shi Tai Sui and Fu Shi Feng have the same problem, that is, they create many characters, but in fact they are all reduced to scenery boards. Shi Tai Sui only has a name but no story, and the most terrible thing is that Ren Fengxing, who was originally the strongest chief, was reduced to a handyman in the later stages. The words are gorgeous Another problem is too much literature and art. You can be literary when writing about emotions and scenes, but it is a problem if you write about fighting and the words are gorgeous. In the end, the battle between Cheng Sanwu and Taotie was the hardest hit area. In fact, it is the depth of love and hatred.

Very pretty! Very feeling 👍

It would be great if I could write some extras about Sanwu and Afu's European honeymoon 😁

It's still not finished, and the pace is a bit faster later on, but it's already a masterpiece. Loneliness, pain, regret, and joy are always around us. They are all markers from birth to death, from back to front.

The only flaw is that the number of words is too small. I finished reading such a good book in a few days. It would be great if it could have more than 2 million words. Ahhhhhhh, why doesn't the author write more 😭

The book is very interesting, but it's a pity that it's not suitable for a layman like me. After reading it, I felt that Cheng was still like a savior (not quite appropriate). The organization's transformation of him was still too profound.

Is Wandering the World of Immortals, The Immortal Road of Domination a book by the author?

New book coming? Didn't you say you won't write fairy tales?