Dream of the Red Chamber: Born with a Jade in My Mouth from the Start

I think Baoyu doesn't need to be written, haha, the original ending is pretty good.

Being born with a jade in his mouth is fine if no one knows, but if anyone finds out, it's a crime. If there's any possibility of rebellion, it's a capital offense. That's why there were almost no fanfictions featuring Jia Baoyu as the protagonist.

My personal opinion on the issue of age. In the original novel of Dream of the Red Chamber, the characters are all rather young. Lin Daiyu is only six years old at the beginning of the story, and she is only fifteen or sixteen years old when she passes away. In ancient times, the average lifespan was very low; living to fifty was considered a rare achievement.

I was really put off by the start, what a pity! I was hoping to see Jia Baoyu as the main character.

How much does the author like Qingwen? She's a maidservant with ambitions far exceeding her abilities, utterly ignorant of manners and etiquette, incapable of caring for others, and has a face that surpasses her mistress's. The author really gave her too much credit; it's disgusting.

The protagonist, Big Face Treasure, has a predetermined ending in this book.

Ruthless and drawn-out; various artificially degraded logic and forced rebuttals are boring and a waste of time. 😰

You need to think more about its logical consistency. Go to a kindergarten and see what children are like; see if you can still write with such smug confidence! In ancient times, parents were advised not to travel far while their children were alive. Besides, would parents allow a 5-year-old son to travel far without a major family crisis? That's logic. Even the best books have logical flaws; good books minimize those flaws!

I don't believe this kind of guy can rebel. He keeps talking about taking the imperial examinations, but who in history has ever succeeded in rebelling by passing the imperial examinations? What an idiot!

The initial setting of Jinling is terrible. In the book, Lin Daiyu enters the Jia family at a very young age and practically eats and sleeps in the same bed with them from childhood. Why is Daiyu missing in chapter 80? Why not write about all the other Jia family members, such as Daiyu, Qingwen, and Xiren, and instead go to Jinling?