King of Daan

I read twelve chapters, and it was uneventful, with no ups and downs. As a historical traveler, I should be well aware of the rules for the replacement of various dynasties and the general development of various dynasties in the early and middle periods. Various officials, nobles, and generals are not as good as one generation after another, and the administration of officials is getting worse and worse. You must have some idea. But the pig's feet you write about have no fluctuations and no planning. Your knowledge is far inferior to that of the ancients. You have learned history in vain, and you feel a bit like an outsider. Then the various dynasty issues are not clear at all. Under the emperor's feet, people's lives can be taken lightly, there is no way to report it, and people are forced to die. How dare you boast about the prosperous dynasty, the political leadership and people, and the unparalleled one in the world? Isn't this nonsense? As the author himself, do you think this kind of problem is a minor problem in his own dynasty system? Obviously not. There should never be a conclusion about pig's feet. What is the story of the novel you are writing? In the story about the heir apparent, you made Pig's Knuckle look so Buddhist, so brainless, so politically minded, yet still a good old man, what do you think he could be into? And there is no plan at all, and I have not seen any ideas and steps to take the initiative to learn and enrich myself. Why should I win the throne? If I just fight for it, I will be killed in minutes. Take a look at the time travel background at the beginning and the game of seizing the direct descendant. After listening to it, you will know that it is necessary to seize the direct descendant. How can you continue to play this pig's foot with a character and IQ that you wrote? What do you rely on to write it down? Does it depend on luck? Isn't this funny! The most basic thing is to at least write down the mentality of working hard and making progress. You can learn to enrich yourself, do business to get some capital, and improve your own palace. These can be obtained, such as military power, making friends with ministers and generals. It is necessary not to write down, but running the palace generously will not make anyone think too much and guard against it. After all, the rules and regulations set by your own background are allowed. You write like this Is it going to be much better, and then something will definitely happen, and I will take advantage of the trend to join the heir apparent. In addition, will my business advantage in the early stage be greater than that of other princes? In the future, will it be more reasonable to join forces or develop various relationships? Is it possible to read more and add more useful words to make it more attractive? To put it bluntly, seizing a legitimate son means money, food, the support of ministers and generals, money and food are the first choice. Without these things, you can't do anything. After all, you can't win people's hearts or anything like that if you don't have money. So in general, it's a pity to discard it if it's tasteless. If you're bored, read it to pass the time. No matter how good the writing is, it has to be interesting to read. But the author is also very good, and he is able to persevere even though so few people read it, which is better than many people who have entered the palace. I hope it will inspire the author to write better stories.

It's 100,000 words long. It's a short historical article. The writing is a bit rough, but I just express my thoughts for you to read. If you have anything that you think can be improved, please don't hesitate to give me some advice! 😊

Alas, some places are too taken for granted, but you can still watch it. If you are interested, you can try it.

The story and the author's writing are both very good. I just want to ask why the author made the protagonist's IQ so low?

I got mad after reading the third chapter. The setting is too spicy and I can't stand it. .

This book is very good from writing to story, but the main character has such a fucking lack of IQ that I won't read it anymore.

This prince has no reputation at all

What are you writing about? A person who travels through time is afraid of everything! You'd better write a history. Stop writing about time travel.

Why! I'm dry! Have you eaten the collection? Three hundred is fine too!

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Your paragraphs 😓 are too long. It dazzles me and makes it difficult to receive the key information.