The Classical World Begins with the Red Mansion

The biggest failure is that the entire Jia family is dedicated to cultivating immortals. Even Mrs. Wang and Wang Xifeng, who are illiterate, are worthy of cultivating immortals. Can they understand Taoist scriptures and Buddhist scriptures?

Good guy, is the starting point so wild? I haven't seen any promising ideas. No wonder no one has

Even a pear seller has some cultivation. This is a bit ridiculous. Why is there no ordinary person? You have incorporated so many classical novels into it, and this book will collapse sooner or later!

What the hell is this thing written? Whether it's the character of the protagonist or the realm of the book, the logic is completely messed up.

This whole issue feels quite big. It's a good idea, but it feels like there's something wrong with the setting. First of all, the main world of Red Mansion. The original main plot of Red Mansion, apart from love, is the political struggle in the court. The civil and military struggle itself is an unavoidable core. However, in this setting where everyone is basically practicing, civil servants not only have etiquette, which is a big stick that can still exist for some reason. Then there are the martial arts that match the generals' cultivation, and the martial arts school means there is no way to get ahead. Moreover, in this setting where all members are practicing, it means that all members are soldiers. Men and women are equivalent to the fact that in Israel today, all members are soldiers, and the basis of ancient etiquette in which men were at home and men were at home and men were at home was no longer the basis. I will only name a few minor issues. Mrs. Wang and Sister Feng are both illiterate themselves. You have used half of the original settings and not used half. It is to forcefully raise the opponent's level. Sister Feng's shrewdness and Mrs. Wang's shortcomings and weak skills are due to the fact that they come from low-class martial arts families, two of them are illiterate, and their tutors are not good. Then the reason for the decline of the Jia family was essentially due to the failure of the previous head of the Ning Rong family to switch from civil to military. These things are actually impossible to establish in this book.

The level of power is set too high! Can everyone in the Jia family become immortals and ancestors if they mess up? Isn't this nonsense! What do you think spiritual practice is? ! In a world where thousands of powers belong to oneself, a person who can become an immortal or an ancestor would care so much about trivial matters? Can one achieve immortality without a transcendent state of mind? ! The setting is too disgusting. After looking at it, I was almost poisoned to death, so I gave up quickly! ! ! !

With the layout of the Jia family, you still have to practice a lot. Look at other people's Journey to the West. Isn't it more high-end than yours? Li Shimin didn't even cultivate to immortality, so the Jia family's bullshit structure still allows everyone to cultivate? What's going on in your head? If you assume that immortal cultivators dare not easily confront the royal family and nobles, their humane and royal energy is still about the same, the backlash will be huge! This is reasonable!

A cultivator at the level of a ditch, refining the gods cannot break the ground

It's a useless book, even Red Mansion can't write Caijia with so much rubbish

Rubbish. You have such a big world view. This is the result.

At least there is a realm of cultivating immortals. How old can you say? It won't be the same age as ordinary people!

When can I feel good? I'll watch it when I feel good.

I have written a lot, and after reaching chapter 40, I can't stand it anymore. It's so different.

I took the exam, and there are too many things to teach you.

With the two-way foil (spiritual dimensionality reduction), I defied the sky, the earth and the air in Xian Xia Dream of Red Mansions.

It's so rubbish. He's cheating and playing house with others. Isn't it going to be over if I kill them all?

What the hell are you writing! What kind of bullshit is your original creation? The family's carelessness is useful to ordinary people, but it is of no use to those who are cultivators!