The Perfect Savior

Don't rush to ship Lu Yuan and Aldair just yet. As we all know, this storyline is a dream, and a dream of dead people in a dead world. It's bound to be fraught with angst, but I don't care. Let me ship them first. — (Screams) (twisting) (dark crawling) (crawling) (writhing) (darkly writhing) (rolling) (crawling violently) (twisting) (spasming) (roaring) (wriggling) (eerie growling) (crawling)…

These books are all quite good, but they just can't seem to be finished. The author's skill level is inconsistent; if it were at the level of the first "Dreamscape" story, it would definitely be a hit, but at the current level, I bet 50 cents it's impossible for it to be completed.

I predict this book will be a hit!

I feel the author would be better off writing a romance novel. The story of Lu Yuan and Alda was absolutely stunning, so well-written! But precisely because of that initial breathtaking moment, I found it hard to continue reading later on.

Actually, I really liked your previous book (especially the God father and son and Cat Sister). I personally felt it was very well written (for example, the part where humans only needed to provide a little hair and nails for the old creatures to survive). It's just that later on, due to updates and various other reasons, many people were left out. I hope you can have more chapters in this book, just one update a day is fine, as long as you don't stop updating.

Sigh, another abandoned book. The author's writing quality is inconsistent; there are moments of brilliance, but also moments of criticism. Why did they suddenly switch to a "trash-to-riches" story? "Trash-to-riches" is supposed to be a feel-good story, dude! This is an ensemble piece set in a post-apocalyptic world; how can you write a sense of crisis about a trash-to-riches story?

Overall, it's pretty good, but the author needs to brush up on common sense. Reading more of "100,000 Whys" would have prevented so many common-sense errors. For example, a sniper position at 3000 meters... Currently, there is only one person in the world record who has reached a distance of over 3000 meters.

I don't really like the dream-entry chapters; I prefer the reality chapters. So I skipped the dream-entry chapters when the author wrote them, and I'm completely indifferent to them.

After taking a look, I found out the author has a history of abandoning projects; he's a repeat offender.

I've come here to read the official version, don't you want to check what you're writing? The Antarctic project has inexplicably been going on for 7 years. Do you even know what you're writing?