Immortality Begins with Making My Beloved Wife an Immortal

How can you say that he is also a cultivator of immortality, but he still lives in a shantytown? It's not like you are a poor beggar. You can just give a little gold to others or ask others to help you build a better house.

They are the kind of people who live in shantytowns to cultivate immortality. Why are they also cultivators of immortality?

The writing is okay, there is nothing poisonous, but I feel that the protagonist's own Talisman Master does not play its role. When writing this kind of craft, why don't Talisman be used in fights? I don't know why, I feel that the normal way is to use Talisman to kill. One is not enough for ten, ten is not enough for a hundred, and there is only one life. Personally, it feels a bit pity. And the protagonist has this kind of cheat. Stability is the most important thing, otherwise it is better not to write this kind of cheat. In my humble opinion, I still hope that the author can write better and better.

Author, are you too poisonous? Several Shen Nong Chapter 10 can't resist your poison. In the first chapter, it is said that the protagonist went to a monk's brothel and the female cultivators practiced evil methods, which resulted in loss of vitality, depleted cultivation, etc. Later, the protagonist traveled through time and practiced for a year and returned to normal, but in the later chapter, the protagonist went to a mortal brothel. After all, buy A woman who can compete for the appearance of an oiran only has a few hundred taels of gold. The protagonist uses spirit stones generously. Let's not mention this. The mortal wife he bought has a life span of 130. Later, he meets an old man with a sixth level of Qi training who has a life span of 177. The life of the protagonist is 50 years old. Hasn't it returned to normal? , Your life span is more reasonable, okay? There is no explanation, price issue, 10 first-order low-grade cleansing talisman for one spiritual stone, and one first-order mid-grade magical talisman for 2 spiritual stones, a 20 times difference? Does the first level high-grade only cost 40 spirit stones? Prices collapsed at the beginning, and prices also increased later. The protagonist went to the market for the first time to get the panel, and the price of the cleaning talisman increased by 20%. After seven days, the magic talisman doubled to four spiritual stones. There are still people buying the 5 spiritual stones sold later, which continued to increase. Prices have collapsed, the rent has increased from one yuan to three yuan, and the price of setting up a stall is still two spiritual stones without increasing. This is not to mention the 500 spiritual stones for the first-level high-grade skills. There is also the problem of cultivation speed. The old routine of the protagonist who must be a genius to pick up a girl will not be discussed here. By the way, the protagonist has four spiritual roots, and his wife doesn't know how many spiritual roots she has, but she has a water spirit body. The protagonist spent 16 years practicing the first level of Qi from a mortal, and the wife directly practiced the first level of Qi in two hours. Not to mention that the protagonist has no one to guide him in his cultivation. The protagonist's father felt that he died not many years ago, otherwise the protagonist would not be able to draw symbols and have no income. He would have been driven away long ago. 16 Years is close to 6,000 days. A day without eating, sleeping, cleaning, etc. Should be at least four or five hours, right? In other words, the difference in the time it takes to practice the first level of qi between the protagonist and his wife is more than 10,000 times. Even if the water spirit body is more powerful than the Tianlinggen, it is not more than 10,000 times more powerful than the Four Spiritual Roots, right? You might as well write that the protagonist is stuck in the third-level bottleneck. After all, it is normal for the bottleneck to be stuck for several years. The original host's friends visited the brothel before the protagonist and did not die. The original, a latecomer, died, isn't it strange? Later, the original owner's friend asked the protagonist to borrow the spirit stone for gambling, but the protagonist did not borrow it. Seven days later, he was killed by Jie Xiu while gambling in Mortal Town. The disciples of the sect in the shantytown went to the protagonist to trouble him? I was able to investigate the protagonist seven days ago, but I couldn't find out that the protagonist and that guy were prostitutes for many years? Also, he must have borrowed spiritual stones from others within these seven days to be able to gamble, but what was the sect investigating? It's true that there are big poisons and small poisons all over the chapter. If you get married and have an affair, prices will rise, the market will be chaotic, and someone will cause trouble. . . . .

It's a bit new. It's very popular nowadays to cultivate immortality by marrying a wife and having children, but the main subject is still the protagonist himself. This is interesting, relying on his wife's cultivation of immortality to attract the protagonist.

It's so well written, with three golden chapters, I immediately persuaded you to quit.

😠 I finished reading it.. The writing is okay.. There is intrigue but I feel like there is no sense of existence.. There are only two girls... In the early stage, it was like a vicious circle. The advantage is that the male protagonist is still a bit social... But I still can't escape from this kind of vicious male protagonist. Wherever he goes, disaster will happen...

It feels okay. The author works hard!

It's well written. Come on, the author. Please update it more when it's on the shelves.

It's a pity that this book doesn't get enough exposure