Mechanical Overlord: Starting from Seeing the Giant Planet Battleship

This start can only be said to be extremely stupid.

The opening is too depressing and nerve-wracking. It's not what I'm interested in. It really discourages me from quitting. Come on.

If it weren't for the fact that the protagonist must die in this opening,

All partial, concentrated in a small base. Being used as a test subject and abused by others. It's a standard dog licking. How can I write such a licking plot?

A scientific researcher and a guinea pig are in love, what is this?

It's not like you're a pervert and you can leave after reading the first chapter.

The type that sees a woman unable to walk.

I couldn't stand the first part, and the later part, it's useless later.

Hey guys, are you writing a paper? Why do I feel like it has nothing to do with the novel?

It is not in line with human nature. An experimental subject has a good impression of the experimenter, and the key researcher still falls in love with the experimental subject? It's really a forced intelligence, it's really hilarious, and now that you have the ability, why don't you control these people and influence them with love?

You're just looking at a diao at the beginning Slip away This is the first time I've seen such a stupid beginning It's not as good as the Hedong thirty years ago more than ten years ago.

When will we start doing this? I can't stand it.

If nothing else, author, at least let the protagonist group write about the things between men and women in a safer place, okay?

The title of the book is much better than before.

Pin it to the top and answer the questions raised by book friends. 1. The start is so bad that I can't stand it anymore. At this point, the author also realizes that some book lovers may want to read some books that are invincible at the beginning, but the protagonist of this book grows up slowly. Of course, the author does not think the beginning of the book is very good, but it may be contrary to the original intentions of some book friends. 2. The start is too depressing. The beginning is indeed because the author is not very experienced and throws in a bunch of villains, which makes everyone feel more depressed when reading. This is indeed proof that the author is immature in experience, but book lovers can actually play the author development game and do some follow-up reading to see if the author will grow up. 3. If the start doesn't work, cut the book. As for book cutting, there are still readers who are following up on this book. Although not many, it can let the author know that this book is not hopelessly bad. Moreover, the author is very fond of the two heroines in the book and really can't bear to part with it... 4. After reading more than ten chapters, I feel that the author is completely enjoying himself. The author admits that the first dozen chapters are indeed a bit self-pleasure, but not completely self-pleasure. But this point was quickly corrected later on, so subsequent book friends should rest assured. 5. After reading dozens of chapters, I kept wandering in the same base. A bigger stage is already being set up, and it has now entered the prelude to the big plot. (The author's quibble: In fact, this base is just a school. It's okay to grow in the early stage, right?) 6. Is the author writing a thesis? The author himself feels that it is unfair. It is like reading a fantasy novel, and there are descriptions of those exercises. Just because everyone understands the meaning of these words, you cannot think that the author is jeopardizing the thesis. 7. The beginning is a bit abnormal In fact, the protagonist was only shocked a few times with an electric baton, and he even fought back. Throughout the plot of this book up to now, the protagonist has almost never been beaten by anyone. If this is still considered perverted, then... The author has nothing to say. 8. The protagonist is too licky If helping each other is considered licking, then let's let each other go. 9. What is pursuit reading Pursuit reading is the number of readers who track the reading after the author updates the chapter. Because the recommendation requires follow-up reading, many authors will ask for follow-up reading, such as newbies like the author. Finally, thank you all for your recommendation tickets and monthly passes. As for other complaints, the author will not reply anymore. It is entirely a matter of personal taste.

I've read ten chapters and haven't left the base yet. Goodbye.

Chapter

Black Star: Is the Mechanical Overlord strong?

After reading one chapter, this standard routine can only be said that the protagonist will die if he doesn't find it.

After reading more than 30 chapters, I simply don't know what it means, Holy Mother + Love? I'm going to find Qiong Yao's novel 88 now

It's been more than fifty chapters and they still haven't been dealt with.