My Life of Immortality

It feels a bit confusing when I read it. . It's just that my writing is clearly neat and straight, but it sounds crooked when I read it. I don't know if you are like this, but I am anyway. The plot is very cliche. Several books start like this. First, you are at the bottom of society, then go to a martial arts school, your status rises, and you gradually practice, then you reach the peak of martial arts, encounter an adventure, and start to practice immortality - it is almost the same. I feel that the author must have read a lot of books, otherwise he would not be able to write such a good writing when he first wrote it. It cannot be said that it is very good, but in Xiaobai, it must be above average, but it is too confusing to read. Why don't the author try to settle down?

Is this the first one? Girlfriend and sister, you've already done it. I'm speechless. You have bad views. Goodbye.

If there are any parts that don't look good, please don't write them off. You can spray them here. The author will carefully absorb opinions, improve his skills, and write better stories.

It is said that this kind of novels are becoming more and more exaggerated, and a few gangsters are killed at every turn, which is known as decisive killing. It looks like each of these little gangsters is responsible for several lives. The public security is so bad, how can there still be city-states? It's so stitched together. It feels like we're not in troubled times, but in a primitive society in the tribal era.

Thank you readers for your support, and I also have many great collections. I would like to ask you not to keep books, or you will die! Woohoo, please read the latest chapter, just stay for two minutes and turn to the reading ranking! The author guarantees that the plot will become more and more exciting! As long as the elder dares to chase, the younger sister will dare to update!

The first part is pretty good, but the last few chapters about the fight over medicine are too ink-stained and not easy to read at all.

The setting is modeled after Dayu's book, but the author's choice of words and sentences make it read strangely in many places.

The novel contains ten chapters. It is a good book that can make the main character unique. I hope the author can persevere. Come on, author 🤭👍

Can you carry a cauldron weighing only 200 kilograms?

Pretending to be weird? Keep the protagonist alive?