Start from the Prosthetic Shop

Here is a picture of a colleague for you to take a look at. Of course I am just asking for it, because if you don't read it, it must be because my writing is not good and the plot is too bland. But the author has just started to engage in this industry, and his writing style is a bit lacking. I still hope everyone will give me some room for tolerance, and I will grow! Above

The writing of this book will gradually reveal a strong personal style... If you feel uncomfortable, please feel free to comment.

You can sew the characters from Ghost in the Shell Cyberpunk slightly and sew them inside Ghost in the Shell Story

To be honest, after reading dozens of chapters, I felt it was quite boring. I was saving money to open a shop and practice my skills. The boss died and the shop was gone. Then I was saving money to open a shop and practice my skills. Then the boss died again and the shop was gone... It was a lot of matryoshka. The whole story frame was too monotonous. It was not so much a seggar punk as it was an urban leisure with a bit of technology.

Under this background, it is very dangerous to go out of the city, and the male protagonist would not survive a day under normal circumstances. Cyber ​​is not cyber, urban is not urban, it's like a hodgepodge

Why are you so stupid when you join the company? And if the company has the guts to arrest a prosthetic doctor, who gave it the courage? The prosthetic doctor can be said to be the doctor of the entire dark world. How can you repair the prosthetic body and cure diseases if you capture others? Going to buy a second-hand prosthesis that is reliable and reliable? Isn't this seeking death? How many mercenaries can your company have in the Wilderness and Dark World? Why don't people praise your company for beating up your branch every day? It's ridiculous. They can fail countless times and how many times can your branch fail?

That's too much, brother. Where are the villains, conflicts of interest, and enemies? What's your world view? Why don't you kill people? I would like to recommend a few animation movies to you. You can refer to them for their elements, plots and villain creations Hunter (Chimera Ants, Sky Arena, Greed Island) John Wick, Resident Evil, Underworld The text alone is quite smooth and vivid, Platinum Capital

Why is the protagonist always being plotted, joining a gang, joining a company, joining an evolution club, paying no attention to anything, believing what others say, and just running away?

Cyberspace is close to technology, punk is close to rebellion, and wasteland is close to survival. Almost everything but a little bit of everything

There is something to investigate. There is probably no emotional line between humans in this book, but that doesn't mean the protagonist has to be a eunuch. Do you want to see the main character who is a eunuch, a non-eunuch, or a promiscuous one... This is honestly a bit important, and I may use this to push the plot in the future. 🥱

Neither cybernetic nor punk, but still watchable

It is bland, tasteless to eat, and a pity to throw away.

It's not bad, it doesn't have a strong cyber flavor, it has a bit of a magical reality feel

It looks like ordinary, solid food, a little poisonous, but it's okay. The author likes to make fun of jokes and write down his own thoughts, and he likes to satirize what he thinks is reality. That's it.

I was confused after seeing Chapter 51, bye bye

6. The writing is obviously very good, why is it missing? Hold on, this is not how mortals achieve immortality.

On the day I cut the book, I created a communication group. If you are bored, you can add it: 656016968

For a newcomer, the writing is pretty good and can be read at a glance. However, the cyber flavor of your book is not too strong, and it is worse than what I have seen in similar genres.

Under the control of the company, he still dares to mess around casually. Is it because the protagonist is drifting or the company can't afford it?

I thought I joined the company to learn technology and then find the opportunity to slip away to other places. The result is really true. . . It's boring to write.

The front is okay, but the back is a mess. Not so attractive anymore

I think it looks pretty! Why do so many people say it doesn't look good? There are too many sunspots

I saw Chapter 80. Very exciting.

Let's look at Chapter 218. It's a bit slow but I still prefer this to mindless cheating.

Song Jiang's imperial edict was successful and he went to conquer Fangla. He left at 108 and came back at 36. Song Jiang: It's a pity that many of my brothers, sisters and loved ones have lost their lives! Zhang Taiwei: Today I have achieved great success and fame, and I have been awarded an official title. Who wouldn't admire me! Don't worry about other things. Is that just idle business? That's seventy-two brothers' lives! Song Jiang didn't dare to say anything, so he just nodded in agreement. After thirty-six people were appointed officials Lu Zhishen died after listening to the tide The martial artist broke his arm and went into seclusion Lin Chong was paralyzed in the hospital bed Lu Junyi fell into the water and died Guan Sheng fell from his horse and died of illness Hua Rong hanged himself in front of the tomb It is a pity that heroes are tabooed, traitors are arrogant, spirits of heroes Finally dissipated next to Liao'erwa. The imperial edict is safe, the imperial edict is safe, the bird is safe! Chao Yao smashed "Water Margin" to the ground and cursed: If I were the Qing Emperor in the future, how dare I laugh at Huang Chao for not having a husband! Suddenly, a big book fell from the sky, and it said: Give it a try.

The writing is very funny. If you didn't have that exoskeleton, how did you take it away? What about your assets? What you think is just what you think. Does the basic logic work? Let me tell you a reality. At a certain stage, some people exchange their own things for others. Even if they are recruited, there will be replacements.

The gold finger is too small and boring to look at.

Alas, I originally thought it was about selling prosthetic limbs with Cthulhu abilities in the Middle Ages, but it turned out to be cyberpunk. To be honest, cyberpunk is not as good as Star Wars, or even inferior to the world view of the super god mechanic.

The later it gets, the more boring it gets. The first few dozen pictures were a bit interesting, but they slipped away and I didn't get to see them on the shelves.

. . Personally, I feel that I can only read the first chapter.