Killing America Terror Starts at a Fatal Turn

What can I say, the setting seems quite comfortable, but the pace is too fast, and the protagonist is like a spinning top, and it doesn't stop. It's better to add some dialogue and details to buffer it. Others talk about one thing in one chapter, or even one thing in several chapters, but you talk about many things in one chapter. Old books are fast to begin with, and then you rush the pace again. The result is that when I turn over a chapter, it feels like nothing is happening! It doesn't require you to design the plot of the story very elaborately, at least it has to be relaxed and relaxed! It feels like someone is putting words into my head!

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This book is quite good, but the author keeps feeding him poison. Everything is fine. The author's brain circuit is not in the same line as the reader's. As we all know, time travel is equivalent to seizing the body. It is just a non-subjective It's a subjective act. I don't know the inexplicable feeling of taking someone else's body and then perfectly inheriting the original owner's body. It's like you change your body and naturally regard the parents of this body as your own parents, and the friends of the body as your friends. Then there is the inexplicable tolerance. He is obviously a FW who is holding back, and he likes to speak out without any shame. He is a beautiful and normal young man who wants to commit suicide even though he has no ability. Although I don't quite understand what the author is thinking, there are not many books that are good at writing about time travel and identifying one's parents, and those who are good at it are masters. The result is that the parents are inexplicably added as backgrounds. Even if there are no subsequent appearances, it is still a thorn in the side. Why do people like to write orphan protagonists? It's not because there is no need to portray the two characters of the wife. No matter how well the portrayal is done, it is just a background, and the supporting roles cannot be compared. If the highest score for a book is ten points, and the basic score is zero, five points will be added to the book for good writing, three points for the book that suits your taste, and two points for the book that is not poisonous. According to my opinion, this book scores seven points, but it only scores four points for portraying some inexplicable family members. In general, this book is okay, but old bookworms still like orphans and protagonists. To me, parents and friends are a little bit poisonous, because the parents and friends depicted in these portrayals are all originals and have nothing to do with the protagonist. It feels like being assimilated and terrifying, just like seeing Mr. Ke become deformed and thinking that there is nothing wrong with him, but normal people will think there is something wrong when they see it.

Just like the atmosphere of American dramas where hormones are high and you can just do whatever you say, with a single female lead? It's better not to have a harem than not to have a heroine, just a woman.

I have never understood why a protagonist with such abilities is short of money? You keep talking about the lack of money. Is your ability just for looking at? Your crows can be used to scare people but not to make money? Will the gang be short of money? Why don't you ask them for help? I'm really convinced. I never thought that I would dare to scare gangsters and not raid my house.

After reading Chapter 113, I wanted to give up the book. Most novels written about wizards mentioned one thing, that is, the value of knowledge. Knowledge needs to be paid to obtain. But in this book, others have fed extraordinary knowledge to the protagonist. The protagonist is afraid of trouble and does not want to learn. He thinks that a golden finger is enough. , I planned to learn it after Goldfinger couldn't make any progress, and I thought it was funny to say that I have no time to learn now that I am pressed for time. What is so urgent about this protagonist? He wanders around like a fool every day, killing monsters everywhere, and there is nothing to force him to do. The end of the world has not come yet, so why is it urgent? What you learn is yours. Goldfinger doesn't know where he came from. Everything is given to the protagonist by Goldfinger. He has no abilities himself. He has the opportunity to learn extraordinary knowledge but does not cherish it. This kind of protagonist is too dissatisfied.

I ran away before finishing the first chapter. Let me tell you the reason why I ran away for future reference. I don't mind jokes in novels, but I do mind using memes as a solution to problems, because memes are normal online, but when they fall into reality, they feel that this person is seriously ill. As a result, in the first chapter of the male-hating female ghost, the protagonist plays the Western buff joke, in which biological men recognize women. This suddenly loses the atmosphere of horror movies and exorcism novels. The reason why I ran away is not because the book is not good, it's just that it's not to my liking. If you like it, feel free to read it.

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The wind of dimensions blows, the different-colored universe is saying, each other's sweetness, just want to be tight, to be together forever. The unlucky souls are washed away in the wind, the sad past is renewed, gained new opportunities. Oh, recognize yourself and say goodbye to the past. Oh, I experienced novelty, no words needed. Lift the miracle high and reflect the heaven and earth in the mirror. You should firmly remember your dignity and kill all enemies in your domain.

Let the protagonist take a break. He is either fighting monsters or on the way to fight monsters. It feels a little boring to watch. Can you intersperse some other plots? It would be good to set up a second-hand market to find treasures.

In fact, I just now remembered that the protagonist is a ghost. He is white and his parents are farmers. He can definitely join the Republican Party and then hang a Jesus pendant. It's God's power when people ask, and believe me, it saves a lot of trouble.

Personally speaking, I saw that the main character began to significantly intervene in divinity at the end of Seven Deadly Sins and started to abandon the book. The previous writing was really good. But the biggest difference between horror stories and superhero stories is to maintain a sense of urgency. I know that the author wants to write about high-level powers such as Cthulhu, heaven and hell, so he constantly upgrades the protagonist. But now the protagonist is too strong, even if the villain looks very strong, it can't put any pressure on the protagonist at all. As for Seven Deadly Sins, if the protagonist and the villain's combat power are reversed in the end, I think the ritual used by the protagonist will have the atmosphere of a horror movie. A mortal who experiences these is called a horror story, and Chaoying is called an experience baby. This is my personal point of view, but I can see that the author put a lot of thought into this book, and the writing is really good.

I know why I like reading this book. Your book is indeed about a Chinese person who travels to other places and solves problems in a Chinese way. Instead of forgetting that he is Chinese after traveling through time and how the Chinese solve problems, he suddenly becomes a local and integrates 1000%. I don't understand how he completely forgot that he is Chinese? Especially when encountering ghosts, if no one has ever used thunder, lightning, or fire, the protagonist will definitely not be able to use them. He will only defeat ghosts based on the methods of the world he is in. Without exploring at all, is it okay to use thunder and lightning or fire?

To be honest, I have just read dozens of them, and I don't know if they are different in the later ones. Is the author playing with the jokes in the right place? I'm really speechless, and I really can't get into the story. If you are writing a joke or a comedy novel, it doesn't matter if you play with jokes. If you write about supernatural beings, you can still have fun.

If you hold a gun in front of the American police, if they can't cure the devil, they can't cure you?

After playing with it, I felt like I was about to collapse. There are too many abilities, the protagonist is too awesome, and now the horror story is not scary at all, it doesn't have the original flavor. The problem mainly lies in the setting. The mage does not even have a skill pre-swing or CD. Anyone who has played the game knows that this wave of enhancements is an epic one and a sign that the story is about to collapse. In the early stage of the fight with the ogre, I stepped on my shin and almost fell over. This was very real. Now one person can't defeat the Human Centipede in a single RPG. To put it bluntly, the protagonist has been upgraded to the end. No more fun.

Your fighting stick skills at least persuaded most of the people to retreat. It was really embarrassing. You were the only one who played tricks until you jumped. It was out of character.

Why is the protagonist always an afterthought? You can identify the monster before starting a fight, so you can understand the monster's abilities before taking action. But the protagonist doesn't do this. He must identify the monster during the battle. Please, the protagonist is distracted during the battle. Just like the crow before, if the protagonist first identified it as having the ability to transform reality into reality, would the protagonist still waste bullets on it? It must have used psychic powers from the beginning.

Are there any similar novels or American dramas with a hint of Goldfinger?

What kind of time traveler doesn't know the plot? It's better to write about an indigenous person. It's like an alternative way of writing amnesia. It's a huge pit. What do you think, author?

There is a logic problem at the beginning. After killing the female ghost at the beginning, you have to continue to look for ghosts. Who the hell would a normal person look for ghosts?

Over 20 chapters, he is poisoned to death, his friend drags the oil bottle with him, the protagonist is a loser and still pretends to be a bad guy, his intelligence is severely reduced, and the plot is ridiculous. Obviously these poisonous points can be easily avoided, but the author insists on writing disgusting things

I'd like to share my thoughts so far and some suggestions. Let me just say it, and everyone just listen to it. The first point is to write about American horror, just write about American horror. Don't rush to write about Hong Kong drama, Hong Kong horror and the like. The writing there is already bad. There are many unpopular movies in American horror. I can't stop it even if I write 1,000 pictures. There is no need to write a hodgepodge, just concentrate on writing. Second point, because there were only a few pictures at the beginning, I didn't know if it was a supernatural recovery or if it was just my own method. If it is a recovery, then there are official organizations and the like. My suggestion is not to join the official, because if you join the official now, people will say that you are being used as a bastard, etc. There are many such gangsters. If you are a lone ranger, then your profession should be a detective or someone who can run around. Then you should meet partners, because they will help you manage the office. So there is a lot to write about. The partner is not too smart, because don't disappear again in the end. The same goes for women, either one or two will do, or a romantic relationship, but if the heroine is determined, she must write it well. The third point is best to have an outline, or the protagonist accidentally destroyed a cultist ritual, a demon is targeting the protagonist, and can cause him trouble along the way. Or the boss of a less popular horror movie is the devil's subordinate. Because the devil doesn't know that the more the protagonist kills, the faster he will level up, because normally, a lot of troubles will cause damage to people and lead to mental breakdown, unlike fighting monsters to level up. Finally, I wish the author a big blessing and thousands of high-quality products (a small goal)

Open a collection post~ Readers, you can leave a message here which drama you want to watch. The scope is limited to European and American horror movies, TV series, and folklore.

The jokes at the beginning can attract viewers, but you will get bored after reading a few chapters. There is no background at all. The so-called original plot is just to add the name of the protagonist. Too many jokes can easily lead to drama.

After watching it, it's okay, but the harem is too small.

The advantage of the author's book is that it has a structure and rhythm. Easy to read and easy to chew on. Disadvantages are a bit boring and the theme is confusing. In terms of story structure, the connection between the DND series and American traditional horror is not very good. To be honest, it was a bit of a drama. There are too many jokes, which is personally annoying. The appearance of some memes is really out of time or too common, which affects the look and rhythm too much. . American horror movies and general categories are rarely written. Many people probably came here for the American movie fandom, and they did it in the beginning, involving some fans, and some firearms. It can be seen from the speeches in the early books that everyone liked it more during this period. The speech is also active. It should be said that in the early stage, the plot arrangement of this kind of American variety show was okay, although it did not provide a more realistic experience. But it's like watching a popcorn movie. But a little bit later. That is to say, before and after it is put on the shelves the author begins to introduce more original elements or traditional elements. There are mage streams, various schools of thought, and spiritual energy is revived. God, The result is like you are cooking a pot of braised pork. Suddenly some cream and milk were added. He said he wanted to learn how to cook red-painted pork stew. You can eat it as well as you can. The flavors don't match and they really don't match. From an American comprehensive novel to a traditional urban fantasy novel. It feels a lot like watching the beautiful vampire cultivator ten years ago. The wording and characters are indeed American stories and some folklore. Also references a lot of movies. But it's just appearance without spirit. The performance of the core has completely changed into the traditional monster-killing and upgrading flow and fantasy cultivation text. In this case, the look and feel and expressiveness of the book immediately dropped. Just starting gunfight flow, Indian shaman war sticks, American traditional monsters and myths. These elements are quite attractive. As a result, it turned out to be the traditional blue-striped mage routine, which was no longer interesting. In the future, new monsters and monsters are constantly appearing and upgraded. There is no way to change the map like a fantasy story. A quasi-double in the American variety genre should have been more about communication between characters, but as a result, the author kept upgrading and defeating monsters like fast forwarding. In the end it became a hydrology. After writing it, I can't take it back at all, that's why it's finished so quickly.

Although the writing is mediocre, the system is concise and clear, and the pace of upgrading is well grasped. The most important thing is that it is a refreshing novel. The background is the United States where shootings happen every day. The protagonist should go up and kill. It is very good. There are not so many restrictions as in the domestic background, and there are no poisonous points. What else can you ask for. Suitable for friends who like to fight monsters and upgrade cool stories.

In fact, we can learn from the feeling of The Devil Next Door, which is very similar.

Well written before. Then fuse the Wen family's twin evil spirits, and this is still acceptable. When I finally saw Underworld, I couldn't accept it. Because the world backgrounds of these film and television dramas are completely different. The author's blending made me uncomfortable. It's not that you can't accept a hodgepodge, but the plot needs to be well connected. Hong Kong variety shows such as "Feng Chao Huang" have a good connection and don't seem abrupt. That's all. I wish the author better and better as he writes.