Scroll of Witchcraft

The speech is too Chinese, what about a master disciple, a senior fellow apprentice, is the author writing about a fairy? I suggest you change it.

The unreasonable level of difficulty is forcibly increased again, and the world view has been shattered. Your B qualifications are so bad, and you take drugs every day, but you are not as good as A qualifications? How can you practice if you don't die? Are all wizards fools? Why are you still recruiting apprentices with qualifications below Class A? The wizarding world's resources are running out? All over the streets? Is it a waste of resources to recruit rubbish apprentices with no hope of promotion? Just playing?

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The characters have no characteristics at all, and the writing method of wizard writing is extremely traditional. Who will read it?

2023.4.20

The sense of déjà vu is too strong, the western fantasy setting is in the style of cultivating immortals, and there are all kinds of tricks. . . There are loopholes in this. Forcible explanations, forced settings, and fantasy events are turned into Western fantasy. Hey. I don't want to argue too much about what loopholes there are. Looks twisted.

I feel that the biggest problem with this book is that it is neither Chinese nor Western. It is too dramatic.

The iron-clad time traveler, the flowing Levi.

Looking at the catalog, it looks like a city, an island family, or a secret realm. It feels like a fairy tale (of course, I only looked at the catalog).

I feel that the protagonist upgrades a bit too quickly. In other wizard books, only two hundred chapters are required for level one and level two wizards. Here, the level is directly up to level six.

The content of the book is dry. The protagonist himself has no crisis. Why is he so stubborn? The teacher of the protagonist is too normal. There is also a senior sister addicted to erotica who appears from the beginning. I think it is too strange. They are obviously superior and no one can play with it. And has it been decided that the wizarding world is based on strength? This level is not reflected and there is no contrast. For example, old wizards enslave and exploit their apprentices, just like graduate students in today's society work for free for teachers. They have to be grateful and dare not publish some achievements. It is better to have some otherworldly version of academic institutions, or graduates must have achievements, and how many achievements need to be published in a certain academic field, etc. Otherwise, you won't be recognized by other wizards. I also read wizard novels. Generally speaking, if you don't have your own innovation, you will definitely be unattractive. For example, in The Witcher, the protagonist comes from the bloodline threat, such as the nightmare world from the back of the body in the Super Dimension Warlock. There are also some important supporting roles of the characters. They will meet during the journey and become friends, and they will also be opponents. They compete for resources and use all means. What's the use of drawing a map and running around? The protagonist's advantage is the chip, so he needs to go to the place with the most knowledge. He feels like a fool.,,, In general, it's too normal and not good-looking.

A classic routine! Levi+Chip+Wizard

The author is definitely a fairy, right? It's really sad that the wizard's novel is written in the style of a fairy. I suggest you revise it. Many of the words in it are out of place.

The first ten or so chapters feel very familiar, especially the part about selling the vitality potion and the plot about the ruins. I have read it in some wizard article, and it looks very familiar. Is this a reference?

I hope there won't be so many female protagonists. Write fewer women, be colder and colder, stop meddling so much, don't force things to happen on the protagonist, and be more decisive on the couch.

Personally, I think it's pretty good. After reading Chapter 50, I hope to write more about farming, soil attributes, cultivating various spiritual plants, making potions, and then blindly guessing about secretly digging ancient ruins underground and farming in them.

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The copy I wrote recently is really rubbish... I have no desire to subscribe at all.

I don't know what I'm writing, I don't have an outline at all, I'm just like Dandelion, I just write randomly, wherever I go.

I enjoyed watching it in the beginning, but I couldn't stand it anymore after it was released into the world 😵

This book is tepid, tasteless and a pity to throw away.

It feels like 60 million words have become 600,000. The whole novel seems to be an outline, neither salty nor sweet, the creativity is good but the writing power is not enough. I have read Chapter 49 so far. The plot is actually okay. But I seem a little tired from watching it. Give it a month first?

The Witcher Chip stream written by Lao Lang was discontinued at that time.

There are not many wizard novels left, I hope the author can stick to it

Well written, keep it up, I gave you the vote

I couldn't stand it until I finished the first chapter, it was boring.

How come a third-level apprentice wizard doesn't even have a single spell?

The author's shaping of the protagonist's character is different from other wizard-style novels. It is very novel. However, the descriptions of battles, breakthroughs, and daily life are not detailed enough, which makes it seem a bit hollow. You can refer to other wizard-style novels to describe the details, which will be better.

I feel that the writing is very good and has great ideas. I have been ordering more. Please keep writing.