Douluo: Take Huo Guarun to the Sun and the Moon

Could the author please make the story more miserable first? Also, I want the protagonist to change into a girl for a minute. After all, Huo Yuhao has already changed into a girl. I also want to see the protagonist change into a girl for once. 😌😌

After identification, it is a book written by a hardcore fan of Tang Buddha. Although the writing style is not good, all the points that should be written are covered.

The writing is okay, but I don't understand why the author is so obsessed with tails. Angel martial arts and fox tails don't match at all. Later, Huo Yuhao also added a scorpion tail, which is just one tail with a soul bone attached to it per person.

The prototype of the little angel's appearance: Tachibana Sou

Almost all Douer fans in Qidian have a curse: once the book reaches one million words, something unexpected will happen. Either something happened to the author that led to the eunuch, or he suddenly disappeared from the world and never appeared again. 😭

A few questions: 1. The protagonist's past life strength is a mystery. It's outrageous that the Earth can practice telekinesis and realize two moves with Douluo. The realm of strength for practicing in the Douluo plane is not very clear. It would be easier to follow the original work and create a grading like Mustard Seed Vastness, and at the same time explain the approximate combat power of each realm. The protagonist is now in his thirties, but his strength is still very confusing. I feel that he can win even if he fights with the world of mortals. I hope there will be explanations later 2. The strength gap between the major levels is not obvious. The protagonist can kill more than three soul masters when he is just out of level 10. Even if he has a gun, it still feels quite outrageous 3. Guns, which involve technology, are very interesting. Some people think they are refreshing, while others think they are poisonous. Anyway, I think it is a little poisonous, so it's a matter of opinion 4. The progress is currently very slow. Although being slow is not a bad thing, I suggest that the author make an outline and think about how the plot will develop later when he has time. The biggest problem with Huo Yuhaorun's departure is that the enemy level in the later plot is too low, which is easy to be written as a crushing game (although this is considered more enjoyable?), And the level of Tang Fozu is too high, and it will be impossible to end the game personally for a while, so he can make a fuss about the evil soul master. 5. Sometimes the progress of the plot is a bit abrupt, such as meeting Jing Hongchen when encountering an evil soul master. Although it can speed up the progress, I still want to see Xiao Huo become famous in Sun Moon College 😌 In addition, Jing Hongchen believes in these two brothers too quickly. For example, the original Shrek also relied on soul bones to tie Huo Gua up. Although the two brothers said a lot, they are from Xingluo after all. It should be a better way to observe it for a while and give some not too much resource tilt. But it doesn't matter that the plot is over 6. I hope the author will include less private stuff, such as voice actors' dubbing or move names in other works, etc. It seems a bit dramatic, and it's okay to complain once in a while 7. Why is Douluo Consciousness raising Huo? Yuhao, the son of luck, still has the energy to find the protagonist. You must know that Tang San is probably starting to let his parents take over his body (I haven't seen the later, I'm not sure). Douluo's consciousness should be in a situation where it is difficult to protect himself, and it is outrageous that he can cheat the system for the protagonist.

The author's creativity is very good, but it contains too many private goods 1. The two worlds have different flow speeds, so it is better to reborn directly 2. The characters appear too stiff 3. The levels of the Hongchen brothers and sisters are too outrageous. In the original book, they all took medicine to upgrade before the game, so the appearance of the characters was too stiff. It was too high in the field 4. Angels and fox tails really don't match 5. Huo Yuhao's sudden sexual transformation, even though it's a transformation skill, I still feel... If you like Lolita, it's better to just create one 😭😭😭

I really can't stand Chapter 30. I think it's great that you re-created a woman of ice and snow, but in the end, Yu Hao was given plastic surgery to become a woman. It's unbelievable.

This book should be called Nanny Life in Another World

I feel that some readers think Yu Hao has too many scenes, and some readers think that Yu Hao has too few scenes. Personally, I feel that there are less scenes. After all, I came to search for Jueshi fans because I have a hard time with Yu Hao. So rather than watching the protagonist slap a certain three in the face and kill everyone (this part of the readers would prefer the protagonist to have more scenes), I prefer to see Yuhao's brilliance after being freed from the control of the certain three (this part of the readers would like more Yuhao's scenes as much as I do).

Young Huo Gua

At present, I feel that the biggest unreasonable thing about the setting of this book is that the protagonist's combat power in the previous life is too high. According to the Douluo formula, the Douluo world is full of hydrogen people, and the God King can only survive with the power of two tractors (Earth standards), and the protagonist can be attracted by the will of the Douluo star, which means that the upper limit does not exceed the God King. Calculated by the protagonist's strength on earth, he can destroy the God world alone. It is too unreasonable

Could it be that this book was also deprecated by Tang Fozu? No

Why treason? I really don't like traitors as protagonists

I suddenly realized a problem. Regarding the Sun and Moon Empire and the original Three Kingdoms, it was obviously more like the relationship between Qin and the Six Kingdoms at the end of the Warring States Period. Their war was more of a annexation war than a war of aggression. The relationship between the Douyi Spirit Hall and the two kingdoms was actually similar. But the original work intentionally guides readers to think in the direction of the Sino-Japanese War of Resistance, just to create a strong enough villain? Is this way of writing too low?

Why do so many people like the character of Huo Yuhao? He is kind-hearted and kind-hearted. Tingfeng is an indecisive person like Yu. There are several things that he wants to do in his life and he succeeds. He is either being manipulated by others or on the way to being manipulated by others. Compared to Tang San, Huo Yuhao had too many flaws.

Everyone, please complain more, otherwise it will be like being on a single machine

It's broken, it was lowered 😢😭

This is unjustifiable without adding more details

Sweep Wakaba Mutsumi

So what should we do with the ten thousand year ice marrow in Dilongmen?