After I Transmigrated Ninety-Nine Times

This protagonist is so weak. If the author doesn't want the protagonist to be so awesome right from the beginning, don't write him as a Kryptonian. General Zod is a fighting Kryptonian. A day on earth, he will gain all the abilities of flying, heat vision, freezing breath, and a body of steel. Your Kryptonian physique can't beat a Goblin Warrior.

It's this kind of plot again, can't the protagonist not be Xiao Bai? He has traveled through so many worlds and is still like a person who has just emerged from society. Ordinary people have already experienced so many worlds. Not only to eradicate the weeds, but also to at least hide their identities.

The dog-licking protagonist, Japanese official, and a burdensome teammate. 6

Seeing this kind of official member reminds me of the TPC in Ultraman Tiga. The one who always ranked first in the exam could not join the winning team, but Horii who was below him did. For a team like this, there should be personality tests and psychological tests. People with such psychological problems and unhealthy outlook can actually join this special team. How short of a job is it? Also, it's been so long, and the authorities don't even have a polygraph device.

It's back to the previous style of a good-for-nothing protagonist. What follows is the old cliché of the villain trying to find trouble with the protagonist, pretending to slap him in the face, and then having to clear the secret realm to protect the real world in order to eat, drink, have fun, and have no future.

I'm feeling frustrated again. The official villain is grabbing things and making a bet. He will definitely win, and then that person comes to cause trouble again... I can almost think of the follow-up development. I feel that this book is a bit overwhelming.

It is recommended that those who are new to online writing should read it. Old readers should not read it. The author is estimated to be no more than 12 years old.

It can only be said that such a good outline is in vain. The characters are so downcast that it makes people look disgusting, and the pacing is particularly bad. There were more than 20 chapters in a secret realm before, but now a secret realm has not been finished. The current events are the Cao family's revenge. The secret realm has been stretched for so long.

No way, after being attracted by a good subject and reading 65 chapters, I was finally persuaded to quit by the incredible Pu Xinnu. If you don't know how to describe female characters, don't write them. They are pure disgusting people who are strangers to each other. Why should the protagonist take care of these sisters as his father? Did the author put himself into Zhang Aileen, so he asked the protagonist to take care of them like a dog?

The setting of this author's book is very attractive at the beginning, but after a while it starts to fill up 😂