
Something's Wrong with My Narration.
我的旁白不对劲
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 335k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Superpowers
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Is the city where the protagonist lives called Los Santos, and is it a police-free version?
The author went too far with the narration, making it look like the protagonist had sacrificed his brain for the appearance of the narration. There can be a narration, but I hope to add some brains to the protagonist Protagonist: My narration is better, my brain is changed.
"There's something wrong with my narration" "There's something wrong with this narration" Appeared in my guide on the same day, a studio colleague?
Nice! It's just that the introduction is not very attractive.
After reading the previous ones, one question is, is this a miniature Gotham City? So messy? The background was not introduced, I was automatically brought into the present, and then the more I looked at it, the more things seemed wrong.
Dude, stop it. She's the school beauty from the moment she comes up. I can't stand it.
It feels a bit like a cultivation chat group
Isn't this just a low-end version of the cultivation chat group?
This is Gotham, right? There are no police! And according to this approach, even if the parents die, the problem may not be solved!
Don't miss it if you pass by~ If you have seen the chat group, you can come and take a look The narration is very well written, not abrupt and the rhythm is comfortable Looking at the sky...~ Waiting for updates ε-(´∀`;)
The writing style is a bit like a cultivation chat group, but the setting is a little off. I don't know if the author can save it, otherwise there may be a risk of being banned. The social order seems a bit stretched.
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Is there no police in your world?
It feels similar to a cultivation chat group. It seems to be okay so far, but it ignores the official power. A little bad.
Can there be someone named Audebiao next to me?
There are supernatural elements in it. I originally thought it was purely urban writing.
Where to live? Los Santos or the music scene?