Use the Game to Open the Full-Time Mage

Talk about your thoughts after reading it First of all, I have not read the original work... So I am not very clear about the system structure. Please forgive me if I am wrong. As a fan novel, I think the beginning is too ordinary... There are no key points, and the main line is not clear enough. But after all, the number of words is still small, which is understandable. The character of the male protagonist is a bit difficult to describe in one sentence. This can be said in no hurry. After all, there is still a lot of content to enrich the character. Why is it said that the start is ordinary? One is the rhythm... What story was written in the first three chapters? It seems not. To put it simply, it is just one sentence. The male protagonist went to school in time and participated in the awakening ceremony, and then it was gone... Would it be different if we could add some highlights at the beginning? For example, Mu Ningxue should be a popular character in the original work? If so, wouldn't it be better to have contact at the beginning? Of course I am just giving an example... The main thing I want to say is that the fandom starts, and it always feels uninteresting to explain it step by step. It is better to read the original work. You don't need to write a chapter about time travel. You can just introduce it later. Enrollment + Awakening. It is recommended to complete it in one chapter. Ability enhancement and other things. The golden finger setting is also a bit ordinary. Also, the title of the book makes no sense. The game mode is full-time. I thought it was a game mode, but I didn't expect it to be the protagonist's state of mind. Finally, let's change the introduction. It's too long and not attractive. There may be some things that are not good, I hope the author doesn't mind. And I rarely read fanfiction😂

Is anyone watching? Can you please let me know if you are watching? It's a bit hard to stand alone 😓

I haven't read any fanfics, but I have read Versatile Mage. This is my first time reading fan fiction, and my feeling is that I want to see the characters in the original work appear more, and I hope they have more roles. I feel that the main purpose of reading fan fiction is to see the characters in the original work appear, and to see how they will spark under new opportunities. There are also things like making up for the regrets in the original work, such as Feng Zhoulong and Mu Bai (I haven't read it for a long time, so I may have remembered the wrong names). I also filled in some holes that the original author didn't fill in. I read Versatile Mage a long time ago, and I remember that he didn't fill in a lot of holes.

Come on, the word count is a bit short

I'm watching it, but you update it once a day, which is a bit incompetent.

Why is the Versatile Mage book gone?

The shadow system can add an additional effect [randomly contract a dark creature to fight for me]. I recommend the top ten shadow troops from Jackie Chan's Adventures: Night Bat Group, Shadow Eater Group, Hunting Pincer Group, Troll Group, Samurai Group, Alien Group, Thorny Claw Group, Ninja Group, and Mantis Group!