Start from Qingyun Mountain

Sorry author, I really don't understand what to say, so I gave up.

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What the hell is this writing about? As an immortal cultivator, with the ability to travel through time, he must experience various cultivation systems in various cultivation worlds, find a cultivation path that suits him best, and achieve immortality. Why do he go to urban dramas? What else can you do besides show off? And just pretend to be cool, and write it without beginning or end, and you don't even know what it is about.

After reading the introduction and the beginning of cultivating immortality, the following is filled with the world of technology and I can't figure out what it is.

I don't understand the use of the small breaking ball at all.

I wanted to give up when I saw the inverted cross. It belongs to Jesus Christ. In Buddhism, it is the swastika, which is called the 10,000-character sign.

It makes no sense. At the age of 13, after learning many skills and practicing many things, I went down to travel in the mountains. The dogs all know it doesn't work. Mess around for the sake of plot. Poisonous

Chapter 11: It's amazing that I,,,, have already cultivated immortality, not to mention fasting, but I still have to look for toilet paper. Where is your spell? What about spells? Just use a purification spell, and you don't even need to take a shower, okay?

I personally think the setting of Wandering Little Breaking Ball is too crude! The people of the earth have not yet explored alien planets, nor do they have the technology of manned spacecraft and anti-gravity guidance, so they have just stepped into planetary transformation and planetary engines! Too big a step! It's better to discover a new element that can "space jump" and "plane teleport" after activation! It's more reliable than turning on the engine of the earth!

Traveling from the world of cultivating immortality to the world of science and technology, if you don't know how to write, don't write

I don't have a good title for the book, it should be called Madman's Ramblings.

What the hell, if you immediately want to rob Tian Linger, just say so. If you insist on talking about your age, people don't mind you. What qualifications do you have to say?

What are you writing about? Give up, give up

It's too poisonous, please don't watch it

I've only read chapter 18 so far. The first part is fine, but I don't understand what the author is going to do when he reaches the point of breaking the ball, so I'm going to leave now.

Hey

After cultivating immortality, you still go to the zombie world. What the immortal absorbs is spiritual energy and clean energy. If you go to a collapsed world full of death energy and dirt, will it be irreversible? What idea? I didn't look at it and thought it was highly toxic.

The first few chapters are okay, why did the cultivator go to the world of film and television, and it was really a drama?

Alas, it's not as good as a small piece of writing and a running account? I don't even understand what you are trying to write!

Queen Keisha is difficult to conquer. It won't be too difficult to give Carl some knowledge to conquer her.

Originally, this book was readable, but unfortunately the writing was so poor.

A mess, no brains, inconsistent views, mismatched brain waves, farewell!

Why are there no heroes from all over the land of China? Is it because the Confucian king Feng Tian is not strong enough or is the Confucian emperor Lin Tianxing not qualified? The invincible Jiutian Xuanzun Jun Di Hong is not strong enough. Wu Tao is unique in his literary skills. The most mythical Abandoned Emperor in Heaven

You can strengthen Atuo, he feels a little weak.

Sure enough, novels all start with satisfying your own fantasies. After reading more than 30 chapters, I can see the author's fantasies. Come on, you can do it. I will give you spiritual encouragement.

The main line setting of Stitch Monster is too messy

It's such a mess, come on

The donkey's head doesn't match the horse's mouth. Give up.

Cover, is this a stone man?