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I think the heroine is pretty good. It's very true. A girl whose family has money and no worries and is pampered by the stars is a willful and kind-hearted girl. It is easy for her to get pampering from others, so it is also easy for her to pamper others. Just as she offends others abruptly, she is also defenseless against others. To me, her personality is like a little sun, a very bright girl. (Some people may be allergic to ultraviolet rays) I can accept the most criticized intellectual problem. The stupid funny girl is very cute! I have seen people do even more stupid things. That is, everyone gets into trouble sometimes. It is not a matter of principle and there is no need to hold on to it. Treat her as a girl, not as a "heroine". Besides, besides letting the male protagonist stop pretending, what else did she do wrong? Who stipulates that she must help the male protagonist accomplish something? Isn't it romantic to occasionally make a little mess (from the perspective of a little girlfriend who often gets into trouble and loves to act coquettishly) She is the male protagonist's boss and also his companion. I really like this kind of relationship. She is not a heartthrob, some people like her, and some people hate her, which makes me feel more real. I don't believe I'm the only one who likes Chi Zhenzhen.

After reading it all, the book has a good balance between reality and the game. The plot description is very rich. The game settings unfold slowly without being abrupt. You can feel that there are many different types of players in the game world, and they can all have their own fun and their own track in it The protagonist returns from the peak to the tranquility of daily life, and gradually reveals his sharpness. The funny clips are constant and very reasonable. Not only is the protagonist who is a top player re-exploring the novelty of the game, but it is also the protagonist's legendary journey from one peak to another from another perspective and with his true will and ideals. What is more criticized is that the heroine is indeed too outrageous in nature, but you can feel the author's intention for her arrangement, which is innocent and charming, Being self-centered and kind, and still being the boss, this is how the protagonist can once again make up his mind to embark on his own road to championship (maybe not?) The author's matching of the characters' emotions is relatively restrained and strong, and the different characters are all described very fully. It is probably a single heroine. It's not that it's not good, but the heroine currently seems not strong enough, which is equivalent to the protagonist's emotional line and transformation. One foot stood up, but the other foot has not yet risen. Maybe this foot was replaced by a male partner (laughing), maybe the author has more plots to flesh out this part It is strange to read all the way. In a novel that usually has dozens of chapters to be released, I actually saw more than a hundred chapters of no money, large amounts and free whoring, and I was very dissatisfied with how it was only so little! ! The author should update soon! ! ! Too little!

This book is indeed a rare subject these days and deserves attention. Overall, the writing is passable and the plot is smooth. Although there are not too many explosive points, it is relaxed and enjoyable. Anyway, I read it with gusto. As a newcomer with a new book, the shortcomings do not hide the good points. Be patient and it will definitely get better in the future.

Pure joy is over! People who find fault with novels will really miss out on a lot of fun! Everyday lovers should not miss it! I think this is a game article that is very in line with the public's taste. It has the feeling of a normal person playing a game, just playing whatever is interesting and dawdling to pass the time, but you can also see the future direction, which is very hopeful and refreshing! OK OK! {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial"}🆕{"TopicId":"880918936614076416","TopicName":"Children's Heart Protection Association"}

Meng Xia's perfect man includes but is not limited to good looks (look at the illustrations without explanation), high intelligence (study, invincible in duels), reliability (diligence and stability, love for apprentices), high moral sense (repaying kindness, loyalty to duty), perseverance (being a cook), righteousness (what he didn't say to Xiao Yu), talking less and doing more (silence is the best medical beauty for men).

After reading it, let me say something. So far, except for the update being a bit slow, there are no major problems. There are no major flaws in the plot. The setting and language are also quite interesting. The writing is neither awkward nor too artificial. The main problem is that there are too few updates. Come on, write well

I happened to see the introduction at noon and was a little interested. I just caught up with the progress in the evening. [Conclusion first] Hay/grain, looking forward to progress. [First impression] Tragic protagonist and disgusting boss. It can be seen that many hooks were carefully set up at the beginning of the chapter. Unfortunately, the villain's aura was too strong at that time, and the effect of convincing him to retreat was excellent. [Advantages] Harmonious environment, daily content, various characters with rich personalities, dungeon mechanism design, strange gameplay [Disadvantages] The characters are deep and complex on the surface, but relatively stiff; the dungeon has mechanics but no content; The Riddler [Impression] The negative characters are "whitewashed". It can be seen that there are many good ideas, but the actual effect is not ideal. Don't be too serious about many basic gameplays of the game, as they are very difficult to design and perfect. When recommending it to book friends, you can include it. Looking forward to the author's continued progress. So sleepy.

(Spoiler warning for previous chapters) x x x It's actually pretty! After reading four chapters and looking through the comments, I saw that the author said that he has been unable to sign a contract, and he pointed out a few points that made me feel. The first chapter is absolutely fine! It's very exciting to see it from a reader's perspective! The protagonist is also very fleshed out, a game boss who doesn't say much in return for gratitude but is very skilled! But at the beginning of the second chapter, I suddenly felt that the main line was a little skewed. Usually the first chapter tells about the protagonist finally regaining his freedom, and the second chapter will start to explain the first step of his becoming a boss in the future, or there will be some other attractive conflict. The author first wrote about the e-sports commentary profession. I thought you would start some conflicts about this, but I didn't believe it after mentioning it (although I saw that it might be foreshadowing, and the protagonist might end up being a powerful commentator). Then I started writing about kl's game (that's okay, but the protagonist is not him, and the various fighting descriptions are very exciting! It's just that the protagonist is not him! Maybe it's better to introduce the protagonist later and describe it in such detail). Although I finished it wonderfully, it didn't promote the plot. Generally speaking, it was good to watch, but not exciting enough. Jpg btw Ten Thousand Malaysian Monkeys really made me laugh in a strange way, and I almost carried it away while lying in bed in the middle of the night. Although I don't know what the sound of the monkey's cry is, I think it's amazing that the protagonist can become desensitized, and the fact that you said it seriously made me feel seriously funny... My thoughts on the above four chapters! Come on, author, if you can fix it, fix it, maybe there will be a chance to sign a contract! I think your writing style and scene control are very good! If you can't sign this book, you probably need to pay more attention to the structure. With your ability, you can definitely sign the next book! Add a bookshelf, come on

To be honest, I have good friends like Chi Zhenzhen around me... My family is very rich, and my personality is also carefree and careless, and I spend a lot of money for my friends. In fact, the background of the heroine in the book should be a little more outrageous. If the parents are more enlightened and don't have to be a socialite, it is really easy to become like Chi Zhenzhen hahahahahahahahahahaha And such a character is really a treasure in a world full of i people. She is straightforward about what she says (except for love thoughts), and cares about everyone around her. She can remain enthusiastic about many things, and at the same time, she has stable emotional management and is not very difficult. It can only be said that this kind of heroine setting may be very abstract in the eyes of older people, but now it is quite common for people in their 20s because everyone's living conditions have improved.

This is the first time I spent money to read. I don't know whether to be happy or worried, because I found out that it only costs 3 yuan to read this book for a month.

Zhao Xuyu really knows how to behave! He yelled and yelled, and what he showed to others was that he faced off against KL, broke away from the team to form a one-man team, was of low quality and extremely arrogant, and was almost unpopular except for his ability to hide his strength. In fact, he was silent: his teammates gave in to him, changed jobs for the sake of his teammates and victory, and abused the big anchor to scold him to vent his anger on his brothers. As a result, his irritability, competitiveness, and calculation were exposed to everyone, while his dedication, love, and loyalty were only understood by those around him. At the same time, he knows very well what he wants. Is it just a name? Is it gratitude? Do you understand? No, the only thing he clung to was his original desire to win. For this, he gave everything, but he still couldn't get enough. He wanted to burn his heart until he won the trophy🏆

This article is signed! Friends, on this beautiful Monday, I suddenly received a website message, filled out the contract suddenly, and signed the contract suddenly. I didn't expect that one day, more than 200,000 words would be found by editors. It's simply a miracle! This would not be possible without the support of every friend. Thank you for your gentle encouragement, and thank you for your persistence in reading every day! Reading really makes me motivated! Reading creates the future, reading saves the Arctic, reading repairs the hole in the ozone layer, and making the world a better place! Thanks! Now that we have signed the contract, future updates will be... Stable and short. Sorry everyone! (Kowtowing crazily) Give me some more time to improve, and I will definitely write faster and more in the future. I hope that one day when you want to recommend this book to others, you will also be able to say "a large amount and a sufficient amount"! But at least the contract is signed now, it looks like that. (I'm embarrassed to advertise without signing a contract. If I say it, I feel inferior to others) If you want to praise, you can praise it freely. Don't be afraid of the author being proud. The author has a very stable mentality! Of course you are welcome to find faults! I have to ask everyone for help with typos in the future! It takes me two hours every day just to correct typos. The author is illiterate and can't see it. Please bear with me😎 Let's make it bigger and stronger together!

😅 It's really a newbie and a new book. It puts me too much pressure to say this. Some people read the comments and rush to watch "Fujishi", and then find that this is not like that, they will start to criticize, and they will say that it is not as good-looking as "Fujishi". I feel so wronged. Isn't this nonsense? A masterpiece with more than 5 million words, let me compare? And some people may think it's like a full-time game, and that's not to say in terms of setting and plot. The background time of the game is completely different, and the focus is also different. The similarity here should be the game attitude. (I have to say that the settings of homestays and Internet cafes are the same, but I have no idea) · People who love to play online games and socialize have many of the same feelings, and things about the real-life background are also common, so they will have the illusion of "seeming to be the same". Actually, the protagonist of this book is not a textbook character. He is exposed to many things for the first time. He was once a person who only pursued winning. So this kind of game was boring to him and he didn't love it. He just needed a job and happened to be exposed to games, so he left later without any intention of becoming a professional. The core of this article is to find the love for games in free games, and to find ideals in a life without pursuit. This is the realm of freedom. · This is also what I want to write. Instead of pushing the plot, in each chapter I am thinking about how to express it, what things should be done, what kind of subtle changes have occurred, and then how to describe this change. So I write very slowly, very stupidly, and very difficultly. I say this not to praise myself for writing thoughtfully. I just want to say that if you find it interesting, touching or resonant, just read on. If you don't think it looks good or interesting, or if you don't like watching it, then don't watch it. Or skip and watch, don't take it seriously. Don't be reluctant to read hard. You skip to read and miss the details, but you still question what I wrote. What can you gain by torturing me? · If there are bugs that can be corrected if they are reported, who plays the game without bugs? The plot that causes discomfort will also be corrected. To put it bluntly, anything can be corrected. All old friends who follow the update know that I can make corrections super fast. But other than that, we really shouldn't force it on taste issues. Don't just start complaining if you don't like it. We are all scholars, so be civilized. You want to read books happily, and I also want to write books happily. If you insist on criticizing me, then I can only criticize you. I will also delete the comment and ban it permanently. Because respect is mutual, I don't have to swallow my words and be submissive. The author of the online article is not an online beggar. I didn't hold a bowl and beg you to give me food, I hope everyone knows.

Li Kaile is like a cartoon character, dragging children, secretly frying fish, scolding KL, and Meng Xia hides his fanboy. Several plot points make his image vivid and super interesting! The author is so good at playing with people's hearts. He made KL look so pitiful and tortured by Li Kaile every day, but don't forget that he made all the money! ! Continue to strongly condemn! ! !

Friends, can you give me a follow-up reading? Just scroll down after reading the latest chapter, and the upper right corner of the screen will display "Update x to the latest chapter" Please, this is really important to me. After reading it, let's go back a little bit. Thank you all. 🥺

Meng Xia gives people a sense of reliability and security, which stems from his lack of aggression in dealing with things. He is almost resigned to the point of being submissive when getting along with others. Coupled with a dedicated personality, when facing Chi Zhenzhen and Zhao Xuyu, the equal friendship will be cherished by each other; when facing KL, people will repay their kindness by kicking their noses in the face. But Meng Xia maintained a high degree of self-consistency when getting along with these people, talking about feelings with those who talked about feelings, and talking about interests with those who talked about interests. At the same time, his daily nourishment and lack of attack power are in contrast to his powerful performance on the duel field, so his usual power-saving mode is understandable. In short, perfect Meng Xia, refreshing and handsome guy

I have been looking for a word to describe the special appeal of this book, and now I have found it, it is pure charm. Pure freedom, the purity of freedom. Everyone who has solved the last big problem in mathematics can understand Meng Xia's pride when he developed the power-up props; everyone who tries his best to do what he loves most and works to the extreme can empathize with Zhao Xuyu, who becomes more and more excited the more he fights; everyone who has his own niche hobbies and enclosures can see that Chi Zhenzhen is reluctant to hand over the rare fish she caught, but will also smile knowingly... These characters meet in the vast world of freedom. The virtual one is a game, the real one is the heartbeat of always wanting to win, the irreplaceable true love between companions, the precious memory of fighting side by side, and the joy of getting stronger little by little. So I can't help but be moved by Zhao Xuyu's excitement during the duel, and be impressed by Meng Xia's courage as he gets more frustrated. If he wants to win, he will win at any cost. If he wants to develop a recipe, he will study until the end of his behavior. Everyone is free to do whatever they want. How calmly they respect their own hearts! I'm really happy for Meng Xia. He can still get so much fun from this game, purely playing, purely happy, purely devoted to it. The more he understands the difficulty of reality, the more he understands how rare such freedom is!

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It's so hard. I always think about what to eat every day. It actually takes several hours just to order takeout, wait for takeout, and eat! If you don't eat, you don't have the energy and brainpower to write updates. The author is clumsy and slow. It takes a whole day to deal with daily chores and eat, resulting in coding and updating every night. So now we are solemnly soliciting! Breakfast for everyone! Lunch! Dinner! What did you eat! And you can eat whatever delicious food you usually eat. Please share it for reference, thank you! Let the author eat quickly and update quickly😟 In the future, when you are developed, you can hire a chef to cook at home.

This book is so beautiful. It was dug out from shit, and the purity of the gold was actually quite high.

100 chapters including pictures!

From the time I started reading the novel "The Wilderness" in junior high school to now, among the many books I have read, this one is considered a rare good book. I only regret that I discovered it too early and didn't read enough.

It was originally a very handsome man holding a Tang sword, but the human body is in poor hands and only the big head is left

Come on, Baozi, code words, this is my first time for you. I just finished reading it at noon yesterday, and in the afternoon you posted a chapter saying that it will be put on the shelves today. It must be a special fate. I was not a logged-in visitor at first, so I logged in to the account to contribute a little bit of reading, and then contributed the first deposit. Congratulations again for it being put on the shelves ξ(✿＞◡❛) I haven't seen such a book that I like in a long time. , The way the characters are created and the words and sentences are used, it feels like a young lady, and each character is well shaped, and it doesn't feel like it was written by a male author. But I'm a little worried about the back, I feel like you don't have an outline. The interesting points of this book are more interesting than the plot. The dialogue and the interaction between the characters are more interesting, so I can't guess what is going to be written later. This is a surprise. Unlike some books, I know exactly what is going to be after just one sentence (I really like game plots, so be sure to read Modu Modo!!) One last thing, I feel that the introduction of the book is not attractive (if you have any ideas, you can change it) and it has not written the highlight selling point of the book, etc. (I was scanning the list and looking at the collections one by one. The introduction did not attract me. I read it if I was interested in the main subject matter.) Speaking of the first chapter, the first paragraph is okay, and then it starts to introduce the game. This kind of writing method of going straight to the settings in the first chapter. Anyway, I don't have the patience every time I read this kind of book. Although I will read it, I will give up later if it feels boring or boring... Integrating the setting into the content is a better way to handle it. I also feel that there is a little bit of online content. As for various game plots with a lot of people, there are no recorded videos online. It's not necessary to have a video every time, but it would be unreasonable not to have one for so long. There are also frame-by-frame comparisons by the masses, and various analyzes by senior bloggers.                                                                                                                                                          But the latest chapter finally have the content of the uploaded video, which makes me feel relieved. Just finished watching

After searching for a long time, I finally found an online game novel that I like! I have read more than ten chapters, and the pace is very good. The author is already on his way. I don't know why I thought of "The Dragon Crossing the River". It was probably the first online game novel I read in 2006. Although there are some differences (that one has many female protagonists, what about this one?). I haven't seen the rest of the content yet. I wonder if the protagonist has found his own way. Are you still confused? In short, come on, author! You are great! (Confirmation from a seventeen-year-old bookworm)

Come on

Why is it not updated?

Zhong Wanqing first met Zhao Xuyu on a rainy day. The sun is shining, the wind is blowing, and the rain is pouring. Shengxia loves to change her face so much. Go through the arcade city, run two sections of open-air passages, and get to the subway station as quickly as possible - this is the route with the least amount of rain. Zhong Wanqing hurriedly hid in the video game city to take shelter from the rain, but she heard someone laughing happily, "It's raining! It's raining! Tell my mother I can't go back." "Let's go to Meng Xia and get on the machine." Zhao Xuyu hugged Meng Xia and went to play the game, his face full of joy. Hearing the cheerful male voice calling the name of the God of Study, Zhong Wanqing couldn't help but look back. Raindrops hung on Zhao Xuyu's hair, and his face was extremely bright, making him look more like a little sun. "I am paying homage to the God of Learning." Zhong Wanqing said to herself, walking behind them to watch them play games. Zhao Xuyu locked in the role of a muscular man with brown hair and side bangs and urged Meng Xia to choose a person. Meng Xia ordered random. Zhong Wanqing was curious about the outcome of their battle, but was too embarrassed to get close. Look at the game screen from a distance. Meng Xia 1:0, 2:0, 3:0. The wind and the remaining clouds. Zhong Wanqing: ... Pretend not to see it. On the contrary, Zhao Xuyu became more and more courageous, and became more excited to study the successfully executed tactics and combos. I enthusiastically used Meng Xia as an operating model to test the actual results. The fourth game took significantly longer. She thought Zhao Xuyu would quiver with joy. Zhao Xuyu said nothing and continued to study the details and perfect the tactics. Zhao Xuyu noticed that there was a girl behind him watching them play games. He looked back and saw raindrops rolling down Zhong Wanqing's hair. The water crossed the eyes from the eyebrows and slid down the cheeks. Only then did Zhao Xuyu realize that he was distracted and covered up Meng Xia to continue playing the game. Zhao Xuyu turned around, but Zhong Wanqing didn't notice that he was blushing. He was suddenly in a daze like a downtime hamster. Zhong Wanqing complained silently. She was suddenly very upset. It rained suddenly today. She was so embarrassed, but he happened to see her. She became frustrated. The operations of Meng Xia and Zhao Xuyu quickly attracted some serious players, and a small circle of boys quickly surrounded them. "Great God!" From time to time, some people marveled and discussed combos. "I probably won't survive twenty seconds under this big guy." "Twenty seconds..." Zhong Wanqing calculated in his mind that Zhao Xuyu played nearly three minutes in the fourth round. "He's pretty good." Zhong Wanqing felt better. She couldn't see any of the screen now, and could only barely see the tip of Zhao Xuyu's hair moving. She truly envied Zhao Xuyu's vitality. If she had a genius friend by her side... She had already endured a lot of expectations, and she didn't dare to imagine the light of a genius friend. The rain curtain became smaller, and the background sound of the arcade was particularly harsh. There were too many boys, and Zhong Wanqing was not used to being outside crowds. The sky became brighter, and Zhong Wanqing slowly walked home along the eaves of the shopping mall. In the video game city, Zhao and Meng ended a fierce battle, and the boys watching applauded. Zhao Xuyu looked back and saw that there was no girl behind him. Apologies written at the back: I wrote a fan clip a long time ago. I originally wanted to wait for Nidie to finish the plot of the two high school and college before revising it according to the original text, but... Can I really see that day? When that day comes, I may not want to write fanfics, or I may no longer have the energy to pay attention. Please forgive the untimely release of this fanfic. The characters and the author's preset personalities are highly likely to be OOC. I hope you will forgive me. {"TopicId":"1173964539965472768","TopicName":"Rainy evening and sunny day"}{"TopicId":"1173964603303657474","TopicName":"OOC apology"}

I got a bean, and there is an update