Blade of Time

Some suggestions for making the Fate Egg works more enjoyable (2): Strengthen, or strengthen! It would be terrible if you can't feel the pleasure of watching the characters grow. Danger! 1. Let's talk about the big picture first. Do you still remember how we were moved to tears by famous scenes such as Mo Fan summoning the dragon that protects the country in Full Time, and Xiao Zhou transforming into a steel giant in Endless? One of the things good works pursue is that moment that will never be forgotten. It's been a long time since Fate's works had such a meaningful moment with a big cast. I think it doesn't matter if the entire work is used as a plot point just for this moment, so Fate Dan, you have to rack your brains in every work to design a classic enhancement that makes people kneel down on the spot with their mobile phones. I really look forward to it. Second, let's talk about the small patterns that enhance the coolness, such as Mo Fan's demonization, the demon transformation of the members of the Broken Blade Team (especially the demon statue where King Kong uses Boluo blood for the first time), Han Paopao's transformation into a giant The happiness that hits you directly in the head, such as the Geng Sword Formation, leaping through the ranks to kill the Nascent Soul, etc., Are due to the fact that you have a level beyond your peers that makes people unable to look directly at you, and you also have the super cool killing move of violence/power/bullying/torturing others. Strength is given to entertainment and distinctive settings, which are rarely seen in Yuatedan's recent works. If you can't win through enhancement, there are only cold data improvements, cold descriptions of skill text, and instructions for replacing shotguns with cannons. Enhancement must bring about meaningful changes in image and specific strength (important). Provide one, humorous: The Herrscher's natural bloodline transformation: the outlaw Zhang San. Ignore the rules of this mission for three days, but you cannot be caught by law enforcement units, otherwise the penalty will be doubled and the death-avoiding skills and props will become invalid. If you are still alive after three days, all attributes will be reduced by 50%. Laws and balance are paramount: if you fail, you will go to the cell, if you succeed, you will be admitted to the ward: don't commit crimes easily. 3. Finally, let's talk about the basics of strengthening the cool points: it is the brainless violent output. I will not forget the King Kong Demon God's transformation and burning the ant nest, Shen Yi's Diamond Dragon Fist critical attack on the Evil Emperor, the Broken Blade Team's torture/killing of generals in the interstellar world, and the shocking madness after the first kill of the Fortress Giant. The violent thrills of roaring, etc., These pure emotional stimulations seem to have become less and less in recent works. For example, Zhuo Junyan's battle in the Gatlin Fire Realm was occupied by too many words explaining the battle, as well as text descriptions that had nothing to do with the battle. It was not pleasant at all. Give me scenes of wanton violence; Give me a screen full of damage output; Give me the constant wailing of enemies for mercy; The most important thing is, show me the disgusting, shameless, and arrogant face of the winner, and let me feel the sense of superiority that comes from standing high and trampling people underfoot, hurry up! What! ? Destiny cannot write these mindless and vulgar word counts. I'm wrong, everyone. It's sad. Only authors of this type have the ability to turn these contents into rich embellishments and flesh and blood of their works. The cold-blooded genes in their bones will quickly bring them back to their original style. The above, we look forward to making it more and more enjoyable in the future!

If you feel confused, it is better to make yourself happy first. It is real happiness, not simply satisfying desires; Looking back on the past, every age group and every new environment has your different expectations and pursuits. That is the source of your happiness. When you write them freely, the resonance you bring to everyone may be the eternal cohesion. Come on!

It also has to be a book as big as an egg that looks refreshing without ink stains. It's just painful to read a few chapters a day😣. I want to keep it but I can't. . . . . .

I have read all the updates. How should I put it? It may be a bit offensive to the seniors. You are an author I used to particularly like, but since returning to the starting point, new books always feel less interesting. Let me tell you my personal opinion after reading the seven chapters. I apologize for any offense. First of all, in terms of setting, judging from the current content, the protagonist is a native of the dimensional world. The changed world has been alienated from the laws due to the "cultural invasion" of the earth. This way of writing will make it difficult for readers to substitute and feel the "information gap" when reading, because all the protagonist's knowledge of the earth comes from devouring the memory of that "earth person". In fact, it can be written in another way. As long as the world framework remains unchanged, the protagonist is actually a time traveler from the earth. Under this premise setting, whether it is "Date A Live" or other film and television dramas invading the world, the protagonist can understand the strategy mode immediately. Instead of explaining again and again, it is the corresponding knowledge obtained after swallowing a certain "Earthling". Perhaps the big idea is that the protagonist can later swallow the consciousness of other "Earthlings" so that the indigenous protagonist can obtain more information and swallow whatever he lacks. But everyone seems to have forgotten that the readers of this book are people on earth. No one wants to read a novel in which "one of our own people" is played by the indigenous people, just like being Chinese doesn't want to see Chinese people being bullied by foreigners. This writing method may be unconventional and create an infinite flow novel similar to "anti-travel", but it will cause more readers to abandon it. Then there are some inconsistencies in the advancement of the plot. For example, after reading the first chapter, my first thought was that the protagonist was deliberately "rebellious", which is also a bit out of the ordinary. The reason why he did this was to do a big thing. However, the next development has nothing to do with the "big thing" that the protagonist is going to do. The only thing mentioned is the female corpse. As a result, the plot with the female corpse was interrupted again because of the sudden entry into the "dream world". This makes people feel very uncomfortable to watch, at least I felt very uncomfortable while watching it, because it is not clear what the protagonist wants to do. As for another golden finger, the protagonist only gained something related to golden finger by devouring the consciousness of an "Earthling" in Chapter 4 or Chapter 5. But even in the era of wireless literature many years ago, there was still the saying of the three golden chapters, which used just three chapters to clearly explain the characters, background, golden fingers, etc. Under the current impact of new media and imaginative writing, the three golden chapters seem outdated. If it cannot be explained clearly in the first chapter, readers will not want to read it at all. Even the great masters of Qidian and Platinum, under the impact of new media and imaginative articles, have to adapt to the trend, such as Xinfeng and Feng Lingtianxia. The big golden finger appeared too late, and this is not even a golden finger, because except for the protagonist who has swallowed the consciousness of an "Earthling", he has not shown any more prominence than others. So, can it be understood that other indigenous people can also swallow it? If other people can devour it, is it still a golden finger? Then there is the level setting. The sequence setting is not clearly written, so that when readers look at it, they have no idea what this "sequence" does. This point can be greatly referred to the secrets of Squid Girl. The secrets add up to hundreds of sequences, but each sequence is expressed very clearly, and the abilities, advanced routes, and restraints are all expressed clearly. So although there are many mysterious sequences, readers will not "understand" them. In addition to guessing the nine levels of the sequence and the names of several levels of the seventh sequence, the previous article knows nothing about anything else. It even fails to express clearly the ability to practice the sequence. It is okay to dig holes, but it cannot be left to the readers to guess. Then there is the problem of world line chaos. The world of the first movie is still an unknown plot. Suddenly Tokisaki Kurumi appears to steal the scene, causing the tense atmosphere that has been foreshadowed for so long to disappear. Because what I expect is for the protagonist to defeat the BOSS alone and level up infinitely, instead of suddenly falling in love with Kurumi Tokisaki. This is my first long review in ten years of reading, because I really don't want to see this book continue to be buried. I can especially understand Da Da's urgency after failing to achieve results in many books in a row and wanting to prove himself. After all, the family is waiting for a meal. If you don't work hard to open up a pit, it will be difficult to continue to support yourself with your capital alone. However, when writing, you should still give more consideration to market issues. The competition in the online writing market is getting bigger and bigger, and readers' tastes are also changing. The old writing methods can no longer satisfy most readers. In order to cater to the taste of a few old readers, you should not just dive in and ignore the vast majority of casual readers. This may offend many die-hard fans, but you might as well look back and see how many die-hard fans you have left. One book is less than the next. When this book is finished, how many will be left for the next book? Moreover, the old readers who originally read Endless Arms were young and carefree young men in their prime, but now most of them are potbellied, old and young, and they no longer have much time to read. You still need to consider the new generation of readers and cater to the tastes of young readers. When you reach your peak again, the original group of die-hard fans will still be there, and you will gain a large number of new die-hard fans. If you are confused about the work, you might as well ask other authors (not just flatterers) about their real experiences and communicate with them. Of course, it is also possible that the content is not suitable for me to read alone. It is just my reading sense. Once again, I hope you can forgive me for any offense. Finally, I wish Dada's new book a huge hit and all the best!

It's hard to imagine that an author who has written about Fairy Sword in Infinite Stream would write about… Date A Live? The contrast is too big... Can't we stick to our laurels? You can write Infinite Arms 2, its prequel, or the story of the man who invented real alchemy. Stop torturing yourself. After torturing yourself, you will torture the readers.

There are some black men who are trying to get in the dark. Everyone must keep their eyes open. If I don't like it, I will just delete it and replace it. I will never waste time writing a book review. But some people in the comment area said they didn't like the genre and couldn't understand it, but they were willing to spend several minutes to comment.

Fate is a T0 level unlimited novel writer and a T10086 level fantasy novel writer. The Endless Arms back then allowed me to see the peak of Infinite Ryu. All the Infinite Ryu that came out later felt less interesting than Fate, but I never expected that Fate would never write about Infinite Ryu again. . .

I haven't started reading the book yet, but I know that 0 has opened a new book and is coming to support it. I have liked his books before, and I hope the new book will help!

Dan Da, please listen to me. I believe you are not exhausted. You can write new endless weapons. Let's just study in one field honestly. You are one of the best among the older generation of unlimited flow authors. What do you think of the current unlimited flow? Danda, you won't be reduced to writing two-dimensional things!

I always feel that the author's peak is "Endless Arms", and the rest... I don't want to talk about it

It's Arms 2, it's so good, I originally gave up on Dan Dan's 2 books, but I saw the shadow of the miracle doctor in this book! When I started walking in Quanding, I came to Qidian just to read Dan Dan's book. I finally found the feeling in this book. If it weren't for the setting of Kuang San, it would be perfect! Dan, you are finally back!

Master, can you write Endless Arms 2? Shen Yi lost control of space in an accident. Many people, including the woman in white, were sealed in the depths of space, waiting for the destined people on earth to save them.

I hope the protagonist behaves well this time, doesn't lick, and doesn't act like a horse.

Are there any book friends who like Endless Arms? I don't quite understand which parts you like.

It can be written more commercially, just like Endless Arms. The character setting has a sense of substitution and the power system upgrade system is simpler.

I still write books to make money. Why can't I get along with women? Old readers came back to take a look, and once they saw the introduction, they lost the desire to read it. Every novel is poisoned by women

Death beginning + death setting. I struggled with the setting of the sequence for a long time and it was difficult to understand. I have no understanding of Alienation in the movie, and my understanding of Kurumi Tokisaki is limited to his appearance. . It feels hard to watch.

Fate, do you want to have a novel adapted into animation or TV?

From the introduction of this book, you can tell that it is a funny, pretentious, second-rate type. This type of book is usually illogical. In the past, those books like Endless Arms were very good. Why not stick to such logical and reasonable books instead of writing books in a funny and funny style? This type of funny book is in line with the funny spirit of today's students, but it will lose old readers, which is very undesirable. Nowadays, those who insist that books must be logical and reasonable are the masters (such as Wen Chaogong, go away) and this is the evidence.

It's coming, it's coming, after many years, Danda is writing Infinite Flow again 😭

In the past, even though it started but ended at the end, at least the story could be finished. But this time it was easy to pinch and pinch, which was quite speechless. I really felt that this book was more beautiful than Endless Arms, but it turned out that I didn't know what to say.

The title of the book is not good and the introduction is not good. To put it simply, it is not in line with the current market. This situation is not just fate. Many V5 and even great authors have failed to keep up with the times, and have been eliminated. But it's okay if someone like Yuanfen insists on writing by himself. Others have to sell their accounts or switch jobs to ensure their bottom line. What's even more disgusting is to write directly with AI.

It was indeed my childhood, I don't even have to pretend now.

I read the author's books when I was a child, but I didn't expect that the author is now submerged in the trend of the times. There is a big problem with this first chapter. None of the popular books nowadays will start with this kind of family. Either you will be an orphan or your family will be of the same mind. The beginning of this kind of family with a lot of bullshit is very discouraging and blocking.

I still remember Tang Jie, the robbery of robbery

How is this book? The author of Endless Arms, I like Endless Arms the most, but I couldn't finish reading his Thousand Machines Palace. I wonder how this one is now?

Jiang Changye watched Shi Weiying transform into a prophet and walk in the world of the Matrix. He suddenly felt melancholy in his heart, because he knew that he had no future... The victory of machines over humans was a destined outcome. In other words, the Jin clan was finished, and so was he. But fortunately, Shi Weiying will inherit everything she has and give it to her own child in her belly. There is no shadow at this time, and the night will last forever.

Why do you have to open three doors? Do you need to come over?

I will always be devoted to Tokisaki Kurumi

This book is really good, I really like it, but it's a pity that not many people read it. Alas, I hope Danda will do the best.