What Is a Super Villain?

The author's writing is still good. The author's writing style is a bit green, and the plot control, control and distribution of cool points are not reasonable. I think the author can learn more from other online writing masters, but the author's writing is still good. When the author's foreshadowing is revealed one by one, it is indeed very cool, and there is a real villain in it. They are not brainless. Everyone has their own ideas. Except for a few, most of the writing is okay I hope the author can write better in the future and practice more. The author's imagination is also very good. I wish the author will write better and better 🤓🤓🤓

Let me mark it first. I don't see the flavor of cyberpunk, but it does have the flavor of a light novel. When it comes to writing about female supporting characters, the concentration is beyond the standard, and there is also the role of a nanny. Apart from these, it is still readable. I can barely look forward to the follow-up development.

The villain is set up to do a decent job, and is the protagonist at the beginning of the final battle. However, most of the female protagonists are eunuchs. The scenes are very complicated, and it smells like a light novel. It doesn't feel good to do anything. I don't know how to describe the frustration? Pretentious? Keep it up and look at it again if you don't have to watch it later.

Sure enough, even a book in the name of a villain must reflect the hero's majesty and righteousness, and deliberately arranged for an inhumane real villain to trample on it.

Distribution, resources, ecological niche, organizational form. I don't know anyone who can get rid of the vulgar taste and educate everyone about it. The form of social organization in the context of interstellar colonization? It's not like fighting for profits like monkeys fighting. Is it like a battle between gods, where fierce generals challenge each other? There is a saying that I have always agreed with. From the earth age to the interstellar age, the organizational form has not changed much. Whether it is feudalism, slaves, capital. They are just different distribution methods based on the weight of each component element. There is not much of a difference in nature, there is still exploitation and class. I am not an angry youth here, nor am I defending anything. Just pointing out some facts. Not talking about humans, in any ecological environment, competition among multiple species and populations will lead to resource allocation problems. Any species in an environment with limited resources must concentrate resources to allow the population to take advantage. Avoid being eliminated in multi-population competition, and eliminate those that evolve slowly and cannot keep up with environment version updates. In order not to be eliminated and to prevent all individuals from being reduced to food, dominant individuals are needed to verify the direction of evolution. This verification process requires continuous investment of costs and resources, and may not necessarily be consistent with version updates or keep up with the evolution speed of other species. If you want to increase your success rate, you need to take on multiple projects at the same time and invest in multiple routes at the same time. The lower the ecological niche, the more limited resources must be concentrated to ensure the speed of evolution and the degree of alienation. Strengthen risks and improve profitability. At the same time, when a single species takes an absolute advantage, it will differentiate itself into different ecological niches in the population to ensure competition and evolutionary pressure. Even if there is no capital, no money, there is no so-called exploitation. There will also be other evolved resource allocation mechanisms within the population to implement this goal. This is even more obvious for animals that live in groups. Because the sample is easier to observe. The artificial class concept is nothing more than the fact that humans are too strong and after wiping out many species, the missing ecological niches are replenished by the groups that humans have differentiated themselves from. I am explaining an idea here, just a hypothesis. Humans have eaten all large-scale farm species to extinction, leaving no meat to eat. What if there is a branch of humans with low intelligence, fast growth, easy reproduction, and reproductive isolation from humans. They are said to be human but have not been recognized by law and politics, and have no labor value. Just one branch of humanity. Why can't you eat it? Whether it's a monkey fight or a genocide battle between ant populations. Is there a big difference? What is the difference between humans and aliens, and a life-and-death battle between two different genes? Evolution? Purely cold-blooded animals? Nausea? You enjoy the hotbed where our ancestors exterminated all large carnivores that posed a threat to humans, and gave birth to the most primitive and destructive moral values ​​used to restrain humans. You want to use that kind of humanity to refute the bloody facts. Sorry, you may not even realize it. Human nature, or the concept that humans are born above all other species, is itself intended to make eating meat more stress-free. So what is the difference between you and the so-called superior God? The ultimate evolutionary creature in the earth's ecosystem, the most powerful destruction machine, is this all? So enlightened? Remind me again, why do we start to use human nature or morality to restrict human hunting journeys? Of course it's because there's not enough food to eat, and we humans are the only ones left to compete with each other. So there must be a bottom line, and we must protect those who fail in the competition from being completely desperate and avoid a situation where the fish is dead and the net is broken. Haha, come on, aliens👽, humans need new prey. The hunter's spear is almost rotten.

After looking at dozens of pictures, I think the protagonist will not be allowed to embark on the road of stars later. After all, it would be too bad for a giant company not to open branches on other planets.

I don't understand why such a wonderful plot is not popular.

Fans to the novel! Otherwise, you can only read it if you follow the author's ideas! And this book inherits the usual shortcomings of Internet writers! You can obviously be a chess player, but you have to be a chess piece! Things that can be accomplished by sitting on the dragon's throne, you have to be a soldier in person! If those people in the Kingdom of God wanted to kill you, you would be dead long ago! Purely relying on the author's cheating to survive!

I'm actually quite curious about what kind of game can kill the final boss at the beginning, which is almost like killing a dog. From the boss's point of view, the protagonist is either a Xiaoqiang who cannot be killed, or a rat in the sewer that cannot be caught. In other words, there is not enough attention in the early stage, and it is too late to pay attention in the later stage. But now you are a boss who is like a reborn boss. After knowing the protagonist, you actually let others develop, and you still have no power and can't take action. I am very curious that others are riding on your face, rushing into the company to snatch people, and you told me that you can't send men to arrest you. Are you not trying to force yourself? I don't see what a boss should be like at all. He just keeps being frustrated all the way. This way of writing is better than writing a good-for-nothing protagonist who is scorned by his family and then climbs up the ladder step by step. At least it doesn't look so frustrating.

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Completely opposite to the villain, who deceives people and kills them

After writing the 300th chapter, there is no sense of oppressing the people at the bottom and the people rising up to resist. Especially when Taixu quickly reveals the identity of the protagonist, it becomes more and more like a personal game of the protagonist. The seemingly powerful emperor organization took a long time to write and it turned out to be the pendant of the protagonist. The current Taixu fleet also has this tendency. When I said that the person who stole the protagonist's throne had a loli appearance, I knew that there was a high probability that he would be conquered by the protagonist again.

It's really unethical for someone to bully the anti-fascist trend again and sell dog meat over someone else's head.

I have also thought this way, even if it was only for a moment - there is a superman with great charisma, and I just need to follow his guidance and follow his will. I don't need to think about right or wrong, as long as I cling tightly to him, I will be protected. Later I found out that many people are like this.

Alas😮‍💨, another book that pretends to be a villain and does Weiguang's business

Villains shouldn't be despicable in their ways of doing things. They don't have the moral standards of ordinary people. Now, they are the villains because they are always against the protagonist.

I have a question, why did you go out of your way to make it more enjoyable after it was released, especially at the beginning of the God of the Clouds volume? The number of appearances of the protagonist is deliberately reduced, and the protagonist's cutscenes are as short as possible. It's obvious that winning and picking the fruits is the best part of the fun, but it's just brushed off or not written at all, and the plot is just turned over? The reading experience will get worse and worse. Has the author paid attention to the subscription status of each part?

This book is really good, but it is very off-topic Not cybernetic, not villain

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The subject matter and story descriptions of the characters are all good, but the author is not good at depicting grand scenes and maps. Interstellar Enterprises gives the impression of a leading enterprise in a big city, while Rose City feels like a small city with a population of several million. The audition competition for the turning point after it was released was too small-minded. Look at how many people participated in a certain voice and how lively it was. It should have been written that it affected many cities and wilderness, tens of billions of people watched, and hundreds of thousands of people participated. This can reflect the grand scene. The second generation of a giant company can be so big and it can also reflect the energy of an interstellar enterprise.

An underrated masterpiece. I think this book is at least on the level of the top 100 books. Except for the protagonist in the first volume being a bit poisonous, the second volume will be much better. I hope the author will continue to work hard in the future and not make the protagonist too virginal.

The first monthly pass of the month

This character sheet... Harem?

Let me talk about my feelings. In fact, what I wrote before is pretty good. The author's early understanding of the concept of cyberpunk is still acceptable. The main attraction and fun point is watching the young master show off. There were some problems in the later period. The rhythm was still logical, and the theme also deviated from cyberpunk and went towards topics such as the nature of otherworldly games. It's not that it's impossible to write like this, but that the author's writing skills are too poor. He wanted to write both, but failed to write both well. The text volume of more than 300 pieces is simply not enough to expand these two profound contents. As a result, in my opinion, the world view came to an abrupt end, and the theme suddenly deviated. Before the cyberpunk story was finished, it suddenly went to talk about the nature of the world, and then ended suddenly. The author actually has ideas, and he did have some baggage in the early stage, but his writing skills and literary talent were really not good enough, which led to the hasty collection of the baggage. The most important thing is that the amount of text is low. The world view is not expanded, so it is forcibly ended. Based on my ten years of online writing experience, if I want to talk about two themes at the same time, then the text size should be at least 700 pages, and then mainly talk about cyberpunk content, which expands the world view, and intersperses the nature of the game world as a clue to the development of the novel into the main line. The ending is as explosive as cyberpunk. The Emperor Organization was originally a good design, but when I saw the top management of the organization jumping out one by one in the middle and later stages, I knew that the novel would not last long. After all, an organization related to the nature of the world would appear so soon... Others are also the same. The cyberpunk theme is well described in the front, but it is still difficult to describe it in the later stages. That girl's final ending was not as good as what you arranged in the original game storyline. The above can be regarded as my opinion as a veteran of more than ten years.

How can I just raise it and it will be over?

The author writes well, give me a monthly vote. Waiting for tomorrow's new chapter

Hey, it's a maid, a foster girl, and a twin.

I saw a few questions in the recent chapters that I would like to discuss with you. In the current era where the protagonist is living, is the sword more useful or the fist more useful? Why is Ye's Bank able to be reborn as a military equal? ​​Why is the protagonist satisfied with just 30% of the Oasis? Doesn't it also belong to the protagonist to get rid of him directly?

Recommended for cyberpunk enthusiasts, I guess you like it. I haven't finished the free chapter yet. I feel that Wasteland is quite well written at the beginning. Although the battle scenes are a bit meh, the light novel + cyber + layout are really interesting. But when I arrived in the Rose City, it suddenly lost its flavor. It was a bit like filming a sitcom with only a few curtains opened as fixed scenes. I couldn't feel the pressure of the cyber megacity, and it suddenly became boring. I read the comment section and said that the protagonist will continue to be a nanny in the future, no pls no... Maybe I prefer the protagonist's personal power. In short, the author's writing is good, and it is very interesting to be able to match the brain waves, so I slipped away first...