American Celestial Master

After watching it for so long, as the protagonist, his emotions are too single in certain scenes. For example, when he sees others being hurt, he feels pity. When he sees something good and good, he smells it. The author's description does not make the protagonist have depth. (Emotional flattening) I have always believed that being a protagonist should shine. My impression of the protagonist of this article is that he is smart and assesses the situation. However, the author's skill cannot allow readers to follow the protagonist with all their strength. For example, it is like Li Huowang's desire to protect the people around him, or Fang Yuan's persistence in his dream. These are all characters to whom I have devoted my feelings. My dear, your current words are like the roots of Wuping. Words without in-depth thinking are nothing but emotions. I don't have the passion to create, and I don't understand my protagonist, so how can I let readers get involved? You can think about the passion for creating this character and your feelings about some of the things he did. There are also scenes, what should I say? If you hadn't kept emphasizing that this was in the United States, I wouldn't have been impressed. You can mention a little about American history, politics, culture, and economy. But this is an article set in the United States, and it really doesn't describe life enough. Sometimes you can actually make a little fun of the various inconveniences of living in the United States. The protagonist's growth has been smooth sailing, and you can see the end at a glance. How do you say that? Success comes so easily that it makes people feel indifferent. These are just some of my thoughts. If there is anything wrong, I'm sorry.

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Why do you have to type out all of Dongyue Shangqing Siming Zhenjun in the dialogue, just for the sake of word count? This full name can appear dozens of times in one chapter. It is really poisonous. Lin Qiusheng kept saying, Dongyue Shangqing Siming Zhenjun said, Lin Qiusheng said, Dongyue Shangqing Siming Zhenjun said, it is really disgusting 😅

There are mostly negative reviews in the book review section, but I have a different view. I have read most of the books on Milk Bottle, starting with The Eagle Strikes the Sky. The disappearance of the protagonist in the later period is a special feature of the milk bottle, which cannot be ignored, but this time it has turned in this direction early. I was initially interested in reading this book because of the electronics used to cultivate immortality through science and technology, but as the curtain opened, I felt that the most outstanding part of the book was the "revival of spiritual energy under the perspective of globalization". Various countries, religions and civilizations are the group portraits in the tide. The protagonist and his friends are just an angle to observe the tide, a camera. Few people have imagined the revival of spiritual energy from this perspective. Of course, it is hard to say that this kind of imagination has any meaning. However, considering the update speed of Milk Bottle and the history of the previous book, I am going to wait until the end to read it, unless Milk Bottle restarts the previous book.

I guess the author is thinking about these achievements and updates, so I will complain in advance. This topic aroused my personal interest. I originally thought that urban literature, Taoist methods, focused on the novelty of cultural shock and misplaced competition in North American cities. The first story did show this effect... However, as soon as the spiritual energy was revived, it seemed that the pattern had improved, but the story began to be false and empty, and the value of being set in North America was quickly lost. And the author, take a closer look at the personalities and outlook of several important supporting characters. Are they simply Chinese with foreign names? At this point, the early bonuses have been exhausted, and the story has quickly become useless, which is probably even more painful for the author.

The police are just police officers and official officials are neither yin nor yang. I hate this kind of short explanation. What is the name of a modern city official official official or official official?

The plot of the Taoist Bird Master was quite unpleasant to watch. The protagonist played two dungeons. Each time, the protagonist did his part. The Taoist Bird Master picked peaches while watching the battle and took away all the benefits. In the end, he gave the protagonist some leftovers and sent the protagonist away. The protagonist also begged the Taoist Lord to exchange the priority of each loot for the right to use the loot that was originally his own. Even if he did not dare to give the protagonist good things in order to suppress the protagonist's strength, there is no need to write like this, right?

After reading the latest chapter, I found that the male protagonist created by the author is the name of Uncle Jiu's ability Qiusheng. The two are combined, and the background of the story is in the United States in the past two years, with "Black Lives Matter" and "Epidemic" In my opinion, the shortcomings are also obvious.

Most of the Taoist priests' main occupations were cutting down mountains and destroying temples, and killing the evil worshipers of Mao Shen.

I was hooked in the first chapter, with forced intelligence and blunt plot. Can't see it, bye bye.

American Taoist priests exceed 34k……

This author's ass is not right, run away

Hold the grass, original! The personal stuff at the beginning is off the charts, and it's completely uninteresting in attracting casual readers.

The most annoying thing is that this kind of traditional cultivation of immortality is well written, and suddenly there is a scientific cultivation of immortality.

I still like to read historical articles like 1855 American Tycoon!

You'd better write about Shi Gaozhi's son, cutting leeks during World War II

Why call it "American Celestial Master"? How about calling it "The New World of Chopping Mountains and Destroying Temples"!

I quickly cut it off and re-wrote a book similar to 1855. It will definitely get thousands of orders. Now that the starting point environment is a little better, I can write it in the late Qing Dynasty.

In the first chapter, I was persuaded to quit playing Genshin Impact. It was a difficult start.

You have been useless since the 1855 American Tycoon!

Grass. The money for poison flushing hasn't been used up yet and the eunuch is here 🤫

Author, you should write historical articles. How well written by American Tycoon?

Isn't it good to have my own way? I read the book about how I cultivated magic in the United States. It was a lot of fun. It was blocked as soon as it was put on the shelves. It's a pity.

Milk bottle, write the second part of 1855, 1855 is so good

Does the author have any other books? This book is well written to my liking, but I don't really want to read historical texts.

Can you finish writing "The Literary Bandit of the Republic of China" first? Your other books are not good to read. To be honest, the best one is "The Eunuch". It's really yours.