Relying on Strength to Transcend the Heavens

I have been following this book for a month. To be honest, I just read it for the investment point at the beginning. The first few chapters are quite satisfactory. It can be seen that the author is a newbie, but the logic is acceptable, and the story of Three Views is also very interesting. Until the Fairy Sword chapter got on the right track, the author's writing skills improved by leaps and bounds. The gorgeous battles made people excited, and the down-to-earth life scenes made people feel relaxed. Especially the Nuwa Empress and Fuxi created by the author in just a few chapters are simply shocking. It can be seen that the author is working hard to repair his shortcomings. As a bookworm for more than ten years, although this book is not a masterpiece, it is also a fairy tale. Regarding the idea of ​​parallel universes in the universe, I have to praise the author for his broad imagination and self-consistent logic. It is conservatively estimated that the author has at least dabbled in a lot of scientific literature (probably a science student). Especially the description of the moon makes people think deeply. Darwin's theory of evolution can be justified when it comes to other living things. Only human beings are full of loopholes, so that now I can no longer look directly at the moon in the sky. Sometimes I wonder if there are shocking secrets on our moon. Otherwise, how could the rabbit go to the moon and start the Nantianmen Project! Generally speaking, this book is much better than the poisonous ones on many recommendation pages. At least it can make people calm down, relax and meditate. Finally, I wish the author can impress the editor and sign the contract as soon as possible, and I will reward you when the time comes!

Very well written, I like it. Reading it from beginning to end, it is also one of the better works I have come across in the past few years. I have to admire that the author is so imaginative and so daring to write, so he is always reviewed repeatedly. But for the Fairy World chapter, I think the setting is okay and quite satisfactory. I don't understand why the editor still reviews it over and over again? Furthermore, the writing style of the Immortal World chapter is much improved compared to the previous chapters. It is beautiful and exciting, so I said in the introduction of this chapter that the author is a good hand at writing fairy tales. The author picked up all kinds of jokes at random, and I feel that he is an experienced person, and he is presumed to be working in an office in a certain agency. I initially felt that the author was a male, because the writing style was quite tough, but when I saw the author's description of the battle between Meng Po, Nightshade, Fire Ghost King, Zixuan and others in the Fairy World chapter and the Demon World, I felt that the author was a woman. If so, that would be amazing. She is a female writer with profound thoughts and life experience. As an old bookworm, I would like to express my opinion in the hope that it will not affect the author's creation. That is, my very simple suggestion is to divide each different world into volumes. I think the previous chapters of System Awakening can be used as an introductory volume or the first volume, and the second volume of the Immortal World. After that, I can write a history or game type and make a separate volume. Then, although this villain has a villain in every world, it feels like it would be better if there was a more complete line of logic behind it. The predator civilization is the last, largest and omnipresent (every space) villain. I just made a blind suggestion, the author can just take a look. Come on💪

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During the day, he sells his body by moving bricks on the construction site, and at night, he sells his soul by coding like crazy. Nine times out of ten, life in this world is unsatisfactory. I am happy when I write it, and I hope everyone is happy when reading it.

It's May Day, so I might as well not take this holiday 😭

Although the recent data is good, there are too few readings, so I would like to ask my friends who are book readers to help click the latest chapter to the bottom. It is difficult for newcomers to start new books. Thank you🙏

The author wrote a story about a fun person. I guess the author also took the funny route, hahaha

The protagonist complains too much, I feel like it's watery, and it's embarrassing to write about the protagonist's patriotism.

What is supposed to come will come sooner or later. As long as the story is good and the number of words is enough, people will definitely read it.

Come out hahahaha

Zixuan

Xue Jian

There is no Long Aotian, no stallion, just an ordinary person like you and me, struggling to survive in the vast universe, and leading the story of the rise of the human race. This article is passionate, relaxed and righteous, and it gets better after ten chapters. The more you read, the more enjoyable it becomes.

Investing 90/100 is still 10 Peng Yuyan short. Collection 666/1000 is still 334 short of Daniel Wu. There are only more than sixty Louis Koo in the comment area. Commanders, please stop hiding. Please stop hiding.

Awesome👍🏻Boss, if others would have given up long ago. Collected

Follow up. The next great god is you!

It felt like the transition was too abrupt, with no foreshadowing at all, and the portrayal of the protagonist was not very good. It felt like a reader was in a book. The comments and jokes were not like being in the book, but like the audience making comments. This kind of wall-breaking description is too early.

You, don't you know that the law should not be passed lightly?

Speaking of which, you have collected more than 500 books, so some people should be following you to read them. Why didn't you sign a contract🤔

Who says women are inferior to men? Hundreds of thousands of red makeup on nails

Fire Ghost King, the only heroine, Your Majesty the Queen

Nightshade

Water pussy

I recommend the book of Zetian Chengquan, a big guy who helped me a lot The big guy's new book is impacting Sanjiang Thank you all

Sorry everyone, I haven't signed the book yet. So that's it for now.

I think you can already start thinking about a new book👀. I'm thinking about a new book while writing this one.

How dare you write about the sword? You have lost your temper after being audited 🤭

Good guy, I caught a sincere and grumpy old man downstairs and started playing solo with the author.

After reading three chapters, it's a bit confusing. I can only read these three chapters a few times. First of all, the content is messy and the subject is unclear. What should be written in detail is not written in detail, and what should be skipped is filled with a chapter. Chapter 1: The protagonist travels through and is bound to the small breaking ball system. The front has a playful style and introduces the process of the protagonist's death through the binding system. Then the style changed drastically. The background of Goldfinger was heavily introduced. The sense of separation was too strong and it was too nagging. People did not pay attention to the praises and tears of the plug-in, but only cared about the protagonist! It is better to write about the daily life of the protagonist and then travel through this chapter than to write about the background of the system. It is recommended to cut it off and shorten it. Chapter 2 describes the system capabilities and prepares for big events. The description of system capabilities here is too rough. I just mentioned it in a few sentences. Who knows whether your ability is great or not? I have to write it in detail to show off my extraordinary ability! Discover abilities, fiddle, explore and experiment, and then create a small event to practice abilities. However, you directly introduce the ability, and then jump to five months later directly to the big event, absolutely. In my opinion, these two chapters should be directly combined into one. Chapter 1 Death, time travel, small broken ball system, coma, waking up, ability introduction, experimental ability Chapter 2 Anchor, mountain climbing, meeting a Taoist priest to practice boxing, asking for advice and demonstration, asking for dance (martial arts) in the live broadcast room, appearing in front of others You said this website is not a website for writing, is it strong or not? Do you have a sense of déjà vu 😏 I saw a person who kept posting, and the author said that people skipped reading. I thought there was a possibility that you didn't write in detail what you should have written in detail, and people missed it without paying attention. Just like me, in order to write this article. I read those two chapters five or six times, but I really had no interest in reading the third chapter, it was too confusing.

I can understand you, because I started a new vest and wrote it for a month, but I didn't sign a contract, which is enough to know that the rumors about Qidian's newcomer's grave are true.