Immortality Begins with Sect Servants

The author used to write cuckold articles. Is he aware of cuckold tendencies?

It seemed like there were a lot of scary conspiracies about what was going on in the heavens and what was happening, but once it was revealed, it was too weak and boring. Although the Dark Cultivation of Immortality at the beginning is often just for the sake of survival, and the deus ex machina style is reversed, it is still barely watchable. However, in the middle and later parts, especially after entering the spiritual world, it is really stupid and illogical to the extreme. It really made me laugh while reading it. I just wanted to see how this book ends in a funny way.

It feels like cultivating immortality in the underworld. It's very real. It's really a struggle between cultivating immortality and everything. The situation where you can't help yourself is really damn well written 😰. You are a talented person in Gou Dao. Come on 🙂. Don't be a eunuch🔪✂️

The writing is quite good. I really like reading it. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage.

Too heartless to kill fellow Taoists, but poor Taoists.

There is a real ghost in this novel. Others' breakthroughs are like drinking water. The protagonist's breakthroughs can never keep up. Everyone is in the Qi training period, and the protagonist is far ahead. Later, the protagonist is exhausted and exhausted to reach the golden elixir. His original Taoist companion Tan Qingxue has also practiced the void, and there are Nascent Soul, God Transformation, and Void Refining in the middle. This makes no sense. It takes another two thousand years to practice these three realms. Hasn't Tan Qingxue already become an immortal? My wife Gu Hong died, the Taoist monk ran away with her, and my son and grandson were hacked to death. This is not the protagonist. He is clearly a miserable master 😭

To briefly summarize the plot, in order to make up for his regrets, a big devil who has exceeded the limit of the map plans to sacrifice himself, start a world-destroying war, and restore the past. With his planning and fueling, the map-limited combat duo executed most of the plan. The protagonist is the sacrifice at key points in the plan. He sought life from death and achieved immortality. The story is not novel, but the setting is a bit confusing. But the writing is very good, the description of wisdom is insightful, the characters are well created, and the emotional description is very tense, which makes the text have extraordinary credibility, appeal and vitality. This is the quality of a masterpiece and the basis of a phenomenal work. From this perspective, the author already has the foundation and possibility to write a hit masterpiece. In terms of specific writing, the author has reached a considerable level. But it is a pity that compared to the text, the author's macro control is quite poor, which is why this work is not accepted. Firstly, this article is by no means a Gou Daoliu. The essence of Gou Daoliu lies not in the description of Gou, but in the interpretation of flowers and moon under the power of time: they are both fragmented, lamenting the ruthlessness of time and the insignificance of individuals; but they also have the reunion and separation of flowers and moon. Every performance of Hua Yue makes people feel helpless but heartbroken. As long as such scenes are frequently written in a novel, it is Goudaoliu. The most exciting part about Gou Daoliu is the pretentious plot where Gou Wan comes out to clean up the mess. These two points are almost absent in this novel, but the label and novel title emphasize them. This results in the book's audience being unable to see it, and those who do see it will be disgusted by this behavior of selling sheep's meat to others. This is the number one factor affecting performance and reputation. Second, the work is too short, resulting in high information density. However, it is not intuitive emotional information. It cannot provide readers with rich emotional experience and at the same time, it cannot smoothly convey information to readers. The length of this book needs to be at least 300,000 words longer, and all the events in the second half of the book will be told in a more simple way, so as to meet the casual nature of online writing. Thirdly, there is a problem with the rhythm of the work, which makes the reading experience too tiring. One wave after another, without any rest and relaxation in between, just slap the reader to death on the beach, which does not look leisurely. Fourth, the protagonist's character is not likeable. Of course, this is the author's deliberate decision after multiple considerations. The protagonist's character serves the entire story, which ensures the integrity of the story. The protagonist's character is reasonable and self-consistent, ensuring characterization. Only the process of shaping, that is, the form of expression, is open to question. Like Master Gu's Fang Yuan, he is just as heinous, but he still has a unique charm. This is what the shaping process looks like. For example, Tan Qingxue in this article can actually consider changing to a different approach, changing to a entangled character, instead of appearing in such a way that readers are alienated. All in all, this is a work that can give people an extraordinary emotional experience, the words touch the soul, and it is a masterpiece of expression. However, some fatal problems prevent it from being known to others, which is really a pity. So I wrote this, hoping that the author can keep up his efforts and write a real hit. At the same time, I also hope that some readers can see it and give a certain degree of tolerance to a work above the standard.

Crazy tormenting the protagonist, it's so frustrating to watch, and he's reincarnated, and everyone plots against the protagonist 😰

This author likes to write cuckold stories so much? Why don't you write a protagonist who plays the flute outside the screen? It's all just as disgusting anyway.

After seeing the Battle of Tianyang City and hiding in the stinking ditch for 22 years, I finally couldn't continue reading. Here are my thoughts on this book. The early writing of this book is very good, and it has a sense of substitution, but the plot begins to fall apart from the moment the life is threatened 1. The world of immortality is actually dominated by conspiracy and conspiracy. In this world where great power belongs to oneself, the game of strength must be put first, not conspiracy. The destruction of the Xuanyang Sect was too magical, and the duel between the top leaders was not written. The Xuanyang master made an overhaul of the alchemy, but the death was brushed off, too lightly. To win by righteousness and surprise, strength is the first priority. 2. The demon sect is too magical, and the robbery of the body at the risk of life is too unreasonable. If the seizure of the body has no cost and can be performed easily, then the world of immortality will inevitably have a solidified class. The younger generation will have no future, and the seizure of the body must be restricted. The dual cultivation method of plundering is somewhat reasonable, but Objectively speaking, it will cause women to have no future. The accompanying ability to change body shape and appearance is too outrageous, and the disguise is acceptable, but imitating another person is too magical; the puppet technique is also outrageous, and the puppet can actually break through the realm. It is too natural, and it is better to write it as a prohibition, coercion and control. 3. The golden fingers are not written well. There are two golden fingers for the protagonist, the memory of the Immortal Casting Technique and the True Pill Overhaul in the previous life. The skills still have some sense of existence, but the difference in the level of the skills is not written, which is somewhat lacking; the True Pill Overhaul is not noticeable at all, which is a failure. 4. The feeling of satisfaction is not expressed in the writing. Gou Daowen writes that the protagonist behaves in a low-key manner, secretly develops, and sacrifices stimulation for stability. The feeling of satisfaction lies in the sense of security. The protagonist often fights for his life and performs various extreme operations. The author also writes that he is constantly being watched, which is so outrageous that he feels like a ray of light on his back. The protagonist does not write much when he is at ease, but focuses on writing about extreme excitement, which has deviated from Gou Daowen's starting point for writing. If Baihu City was refining the foundation-building elixir and refining the formation for Xu, why not leave? You have to make a fuss, right? 5. The changes in the improvement of the level of strength are not written out. The strength of the immortal world is the first, but the protagonist still looks like a Qi-training monk after building the foundation. The changes brought about by the improvement of the big level are too little, so that there is no deserved sense of satisfaction. 6. Mechanical deity, the two sisters in the spirit world are too outrageous. Tan Qingxue, who has no intention of cultivating immortals but can rise step by step, is outrageous.

，，，，，， As far as several relationships are concerned, Ang Lee's first wife, Tan Qingying, had a honeymoon period, but the author has repeatedly emphasized that Ang Lee has no love for Tan, only benefit.       At that time, Li An obtained the first magic skill, Yin Yang Magic Skill, and he was with Tan for the purpose of practicing. This is the reason I think it was just for profit. In order to feel guilty, Li An saved Tan once (rescued once without any human kindness), and that time it was Xuanyang. The sect was destroyed, and as for the time when he attacked Fangshi with his life in hand, it was the Xuanyang sect who acted as the bait, and Xu Qiuhui saved Tan. It was also because of that time that Li An recognized Tan clearly, so he practiced magic with dual cultivation, and felt a little guilty towards Tan, so he saved Tan once. Later, Li An felt that he no longer owed him anything, and then Tan was possessed by the demon queen, and he felt the breath of the life seed during the blood exchange. Li An didn't know, even if Tan gave Li An a top-quality infant transformation pill, Li An didn't have much ripples in his heart, so Tan remarried, and the two broke up peacefully. The second wife, Gu Hong, may be a difficult passage for most readers. Li An is the kind of person who does not fall in love first. He needs someone to warm him up before he can enter his heart, but he will not give up his life for anyone. In this setting of the world, the person who often enters his heart must be the kind of person who can give up his life for him, so happiness will be short-lived and the end will not be good. Back to the topic, Li An used Gu Hong from the beginning. He does that to everyone. He thought about how to use it from the beginning. Gu Hong was kidnapped and used as a furnace, so she was not a virgin. She has been keeping her virginity since she was rescued by Li An. She is not a slut, just a victim. Li An has always avoided sluts. The only few times he did it were when Li An's life was threatened and he had to make compromises.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       . Maybe it was because of Gu Hong that Li An was kind enough to Shangguan Xiaoxiao after he fell in love with her. Or maybe it was because he only had Yuan Lingshi and didn't do any tricks. He was of great help to Li An and the two of them had been together for a long enough time. Shangguan Xiaoxiao's Ang Lee is completely capable of handling the snack machine, but Ang Lee has been avoiding Shangguan Xiaoxiao's feelings. I think it is because of the three major tribulations. It is not clear how the author will write the follow-up. Personally, I feel that following Shangguan Xiaoxiao will not have a good result. To sum up, at least I don't think it is a cuckold story. However, if I say that Li An is a scumbag, I agree with both hands. This is from God's perspective. Readers can see that his eldest apprentice, Lihua, his second apprentice Yun Mo, and his third apprentice won. I don't remember what they won 🤭. Xiang Yuntian and others all think that this guy is really a good person 🙂

After reading novels for so many years, this is the first time I have seen someone with a selfish and cold nature written in such an upright and honest way, which is awesome 👍

After reading Chapter 6, an old monster who has been reborn for hundreds of years is living like a dog in this life. He also laughs at others for being like dogs. At least others are really fledgling and bullied. The protagonist wants to be a dog himself. He has been practicing as an immortal for hundreds of years. This is his character.

It was good in the front, but why did it turn into a cuckold story in the back?

Oh, Sun Jinxue, who had slept with the protagonist for a long time, went to sleep with the protagonist's enemy because the protagonist's backer had fallen? Great idea from the author! The protagonist doesn't care at all, and the author also said that if the protagonist has a little mood swing because of her, it will be a waste. The author has practiced ninjutsu to a high level! So, who said this was a cuckold story? Of course there are many readers!

Please be careful if there are ntr plots! ! ! !

The main character is a mess. The writing is very detailed, and his IQ is online. The emotional line is criticized a lot, but luckily, after all, he is committed to the road. How come there are so many children who love each other? Moreover, the writing of some item levels is relatively rough. If it continues, it will be a good product.

If you can still accept it in the past, including the minotaur part, then treat it as a divorce. Why does the back part of TM become more and more disgusting? Others have become immortals, and the protagonist is still a younger brother. Why? Because he cannot practice. If he practices, there will be great terror, and then he will be killed casually. Women are as if they have lost their minds, they are all licking dogs. When the protagonist's ex-wife sees her husband trying to kill the protagonist, she backhandedly fucks her husband. If someone else plays the protagonist, do whatever you want. Take what you want, don't play with me. The protagonist fucks other people, no, I have to practice first, and he has to walk up to my face while I'm practicing The rest of this book, in the Golden Age, is trash, disgusting! Others practice and become peak masters, while the protagonist and their children are in the same circle. Others ate hot pot and sang songs, and became immortals. The protagonist practices the most amazing skills, practicing every day, practicing day and night, and finally reaches the same level as other children. According to the author's outline, now is the period between the first and second tribulations. It will take more than a thousand years to wait until the third calamity to start exerting force. By then, the protagonist will not be able to practice and will have to be in the same realm as the grandson of the grandson of the current enemy of the sect. It turns out that this is just practicing cultivation, right? It's about living forever. As a reminder, the master of the protagonist is a big boss in the fairy world. Now he is bullied every day in the spiritual world. He should use his strongest technique.

This novel is so disgusting that I really can't stand it anymore.

The protagonist is a loser and likes to be a cuckold every day!

What a loser. Looking at the comments, I'm still a bitch. I'm so arrogant.

After reading the comments, it seems that there are more cuckold plots later on. The protagonist is disgusting. Not only the cuckold plot is disgusting, but also a piece of shit.

When writing cuckold articles, be careful of being cuckolded in reality. Many authors have proven this.

There's a huge mess in the back, let's chase him who loves to pick up worn-out shoes and be a cuckold.

666, You can still see dark green text at the starting point, this author has a strong background~~

This book is really good. It goes against the grain and is meticulous to the extreme. The writing is smooth and the plot is very real. Those who say cuckoldry are probably children who cannot read. In the details, Tan Qingxue's departure in Fangshi has already hinted at the betrayal of the male protagonist. The world of cultivation is not a modern society. There is no such thing as green or green. There is an abandoned chess piece in the back. Not killing her is enough mercy. Tan Qingxue can only be a supporting character who looks up to Li An. Gu Hong is not the hero who doesn't save her, but pretends not to save her. Pretending not to care can save her life. But in the end, she is not saved. She just writes Shangguan Xiaoxiao out. She hasn't come out for a long time. Will it be a big killer when she comes out later! In short, the protagonist is devoted to the Tao. Anyone who betrays him must be abandoned. They are all abandoned pieces and chess pieces. Kill them! I haven't followed many of the ranked books. I just wait to read this book every day and there is no update!

I smell the familiar smell again. It's not difficult to smell it. But it is not easy to find a familiar flavor among many flavors. Not only a dog nose is needed, but extensive knowledge is also required. It won't be wrong this time. This tastes very good. Although it is still a little far away and faint. But it is indeed authentic. What does it taste like? You are so good and bad that you make people lose their appetite. Okay, let's unveil it. This is a flavor called "becoming a god". Thousand-mile horses often exist but Bole does not always exist.

I can't imagine that the good-for-nothing protagonist in this movie can eventually become an immortal and work for rent. How will the geniuses and super geniuses live like this? Is it because they don't work as hard as you? Is it because they don't have as many resources as you? Or maybe their background is not as strong as yours? Nine-nine out of the ten books on immortality in Qidian have useless protagonists. How can you, a useless person, become an immortal and become an ancestor? The protagonists of other articles are still a useless spiritual root after all. This protagonist is even more exaggerated. He is a useless spiritual root. When writing a book, you have to follow logic, okay?

It can still be said that scholars are delayed. A woman's procrastination cannot be explained. This is the real male perspective... No matter how beautiful the beauty is, he cannot shake his pursuit of strength and eternity. The author shows it well. Cold, but true. 😭

There are too many problems. The protagonist only lived less than 1,000 years in his previous life. He is more determined than the other old monsters who have lived for several w years. His IQ is higher than those old monsters. It seems that the villain is brainless. Starting from the layout of the two immortals, Ang Lee's only role is because he can open the Palace of Eternal Life because of his great destiny. But the two immortals are like brainless and raise pigs. Can't choose a breeding farm to raise pigs? You have to look for people like Li An. It's really stupid. Bo Yi has planned it for tens of thousands of years. You don't need to raise pigs for 1,000 years, and you can be successful and open the Palace of Immortality Gu Hong and Tan Qingxue, the two of them have been fucked by others at least hundreds of times. The male protagonist said it doesn't matter, but he keeps thinking about it, is this called not caring? Moreover, he has not become a demon after so many times, and finally forgave him. Li Nianxue and Shangguan Xiaoxiao were so loyal to him that they didn't even have a status . Only those two broken shoes have a reputation The immortal also has a brain problem. He can obviously resurrect his wife and the family is together, but he insists on doing 1 for 1 and still lives in sorrow. He can't cut off his memory? He has lived for so long that even heaven can't deal with it and reverses time and space. It is really speechless. A pig has lived for 100 million years and is better than him. I understand that you have emotions after being immortal, but after living for a long time, you even lose your brain.