Pokémon: Inherit the Power of Evergreen at the Start
宝可梦：开局继承常青之力
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 157k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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8Fans
74Chapters
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Is there some content that has been harmonized? It seems a bit awkward to me. Chapter 19 said that you can get familiar with the random elves in half an hour, and then in chapter 20, you just got the random elves, but you didn't say that you were familiar with them (I think they were released after getting the elves, and then the protagonist said it was Geranium. The opponent praised and said that you still know Geranium, and then released the elf to fight). The battle started directly with two sentences of dialogue. I don't know what skills the elf has learned and which sub-battle? Then it's Chapter 21. At the end of Chapter 20, I saw Geranium narrowly winning in Girls' Town. In the blink of an eye, we're at Yuhong City at the beginning of Chapter 21. This transition is too abrupt. Okay, it's like Girls' Town is a side story.
Come on, it has been collected and evaluated, and I hope to visit again and make progress together.
Overall it's pretty good, but some of the descriptions are too lengthy. Some plots have no connection or meaning after being written. I hope to work hard in the future.
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