I Open a Shop in Qixia Town

Since you have opened the big card, it is better to get it right in one step. Open the saint card in the first jar. After using it, you will gain the power of the ancient saint and conquer the world.

It's all repetitive plots, and only a few people can open the cans. When encountering repetitive things, they write the functions and the number of words again. Are there only so few people in the mixed martial arts world? It is recommended to write it directly in AI, it may look better than what the author himself wrote.

Compared with me selling blind boxes in Qixia Town, the gap is a bit big...

The main character is a pure and happy person, 200 chapters, and there is no one supporting role. Maybe the plot characters have fundamentally improved their class because of the pot, except for the young hero Wang, who changed his job as a ghost swordsman and killed two evil people, the third and the fourth, whether it is Xiong Ba, Lu Bu, Bad Handsome, Bai Feng, etc., They obtained items and abilities, but they were still kept in the position they should be in. There is no detachment. This may also be a problem of writing skills. After all, detachment means that the plot will deviate from the original text. Chapter 200, it's been a few months, and no one from a large force is willing to come and take a look, they are all people nearby It's too shabby. In fact, I am willing to subscribe to some repetitive item introductions. After all, dozens of cans are opened every day, and it is normal to have duplicates. But the further you go, the repetition is not the items, but the plot, so the sense of fun decreases. The article is creative, but the protagonist has no sense of existence. He is just a fun person. He just watches some people open the cans and does nothing else.

Actually, to be honest, this kind of thing is okay. There are relatively few subjects of this type, or it may not be popular at all, but the author actually wrote so much even though his grades were so bad and many people said that he still wrote so much. This kind of persistence in not supervising is very commendable. Although it may just be a perfect attendance award, it is still very good anyway After all, this is not a historical text, why should it be so rigorous?

When you open a prop, you have to use it, and you have to expand and write the plot. All the people who opened it basically tried it at that time, and then nothing happened. Then they opened it again and again, and they kept writing the props, and there was no plot at all.

You copied everything, both the good and the bad.

Penglai plot. Author, you are so awesome. At a time when all the prehistoric and great emperors had not become saints. The lowest level is also the fairyland where there is a state of morality and deity that has not yet become an immortal. Aren't you talking nonsense? Even Hongjun, the founder of immortality, did not achieve enlightenment. Not to mention the golden elixir avenue of the Moral God. The green caterpillar that has turned into a god. Even the immortals cannot occupy an innate spiritual root.

Family members, who knows?

The more you write, the worse it gets. What is the content that will be listed later? Get off my bookshelf

Apart from opening the jar, there is no plot to speak of. At most, it is just a plot of beating Qin Jun.

The author's sheer number of words is such that one thing is published in every chapter, each chapter is described in detail, and the person who opens the jar is shining brightly every time, and more than half of the chapter is repeated content...

Is it interesting to keep writing about opening cans?

Aren't you tired of people like Bad Shuai and Lu Bu coming and going? They said they would not favor women, but in the end, so many female heroes in mixed martial arts were lost.

I've read Chapter 47 so far, and I'm still feeling uncomfortable. First of all, the protagonist is given the identity of being invincible in the store, so what's the use of opening a can for the protagonist? If you say you want to go out in the future, then you haven't seen the protagonist practice so far, and the things he opened have never been used. They are just open, and they are gone after they are opened. So I don't quite understand the meaning of this. Secondly, the plot is too repetitive, with a group of people entering the store to open jars, then an introduction to the items, and then the next chapter. Instead of doing this, it is better to write about the outside world and how these people changed their lives after opening the jar. This can also feel a little refreshing. The third point is this spliced ​​map, which exists in every dynasty and every generation. So since Qin is still there, how did the Han come? Do they know that they destroyed Qin? Does Qin know that they destroyed what he built? Or are we talking about the Han Dynasty that escaped from Qin and founded it? Or maybe the world suddenly came together overnight? Without any explanation, a bunch of people came to the store. It would be better to just create a setting for all the worlds, and open portals in each world to bring in specific people. Is there anyone who is following me who can tell me what happens next? Is this still the case? Or is it that the setting has become complete, or the plot has been greatly advanced?

I saw Chapter 53 and felt that I couldn't stand it any longer. The entire water-filled essay was a complete mess, but I was able to write more than 600 chapters. I admire it.

Why didn't anyone warn me about the poison before watching this 😅

I have read the latest version of this book. The shortcoming is that there are too many repeated introductions. Compared with fairy beans, the introduction has to be repeated every time, which is too many words. In fact, it is enough to just name it, and there is no need to write it out every time. The advantage is that Sunday Adventure is well written. In fact, the author can also write more other new activities and be more concise when writing about opening cans.

What's the name of the other one? ? ? If you don't divert traffic now, when will you wait? ? ?

I can't keep up with it. If it weren't for the jar-opening element, I wouldn't even bother reading this vulgar novel.

Come on and enjoy it first

Short and strong! It's just that there are too few and the results are average. . . 😰