Gao Wu: I Control the Insect Evolution Scroll

Seeing Chapter 6, the effect of blood pills is only 1.44 Kilograms, which is too weak. The power of one million kilograms would require hundreds of thousands of blood pills, which should be increased by at least ten times.

After reading it for a while, I found that the writing was okay, much better than what I originally wrote. However, compared to those old authors, the writing style is indeed not good enough, but this is the normal state of every newcomer. Don't take it too seriously. It will get better if you write more. I suggest you not pay too much attention to the bad reviews of readers for this first book. If you have any suggestions, listen selectively. As long as it is logical and not too poisonous, just do it yourself. Just treat the first book as a practice, don't worry too much about the results, come on!

Screen readers at the beginning? If you get a mosquito, it will only suck your own blood? Why don't I just suck you to death and buy some chickens, ducks and geese? The protagonist's brain is hopeless.

The Terran war relies on the Zerg to make a comeback. It's a pity that the protagonist is not the Zerg. Otherwise, the Zerg would be in first place, and the Terran would still be the last.

I think the later chapters of this book are okay, but there are too many poison points in the front, and the poison resistance is not enough to make it unreadable.

How should I put it? The protagonist is the first in liberal arts in his school, and he can easily get into top universities. Then after reading the book, I feel that the protagonist doesn't know anything. I don't dare to think about other people. It's too outrageous Then such a powerful person hangs on the protagonist's hands as if it's a joke. The protagonist's parents seem to be quite high-ranking, which means that the protagonist can say that he will not be short of money. It's even more outrageous.

Embarrassment syndrome, the righteousness makes me sick

Alas, the road is too narrow, and body training should not be described as so powerful! The main focus should still be on pest control! It would be more interesting to write more about the strengths and weaknesses of each insect, what kind of tactics are needed to maximize strengths and avoid weaknesses, and what kind of multi-insect group is used to kill enemies by leapfrogging! It's enough to practice physical training to protect yourself from force! To develop yourself, you should also be in the mental category, such as being able to increase the scope of control, add types, strengthen micro-management, etc.! Or auxiliary skills such as turning bugs into crazy, treating bugs, etc.! The only thing is that the protagonist is so capable of fighting. What a loser! If Luo Guanzhong wrote that Zhuge Liang could defeat the Three Kingdoms better than Lu Bu, would it be so interesting? And selling a flaw will give you more opportunities to show off and get slapped in the face!

To be honest, the introduction is quite attractive, but the first one successfully persuaded me to leave.

Suggestion Post Moral Kidnapping means too much. The protagonist has never experienced the process of human beings paying for him. From the beginning, he must sacrifice his life for human beings to protect human beings. The most basic thing is everyone for one, and one for everyone Right? The current situation is too morally kidnapped, as if you are a human being and you should die for the human race. There is no process of transformation. People are selfish protagonists but look like saints (fools?), Very distorted and out of touch with reality. The Song Chengyu in the article is obviously just a classmate and has an average relationship, so the protagonist needs to fight to save him. If the world to be described is a Utopia type, then forget it. The style of writing is more realistic, but the protagonist is still like this... It's hard to like him.

The world view and values ​​are different. The author only wants the ultimate powerful individual. He should be the one who clicks in to play the crowd tactics. Otherwise, if you write about Zerg, you need auxiliary capabilities. Are plants not tens of thousands of times stronger than your insects?

Too many slots, poisonous, extremely poisonous, poisonous enough to cause death. Update one day later: The early stage is extremely toxic, especially the content before the college entrance examination, there are flaws everywhere, I really can't stand it. But in fact, the content after that is still good, but because of the poisonous points in the front, all the readers have already ran away, so what's the use of just looking good at the back? If the front part doesn't look good, how can it attract readers to subscribe to the later content? Don't you think so, author?

This book has a lot of hang-ups, so the author deliberately suppresses the growth of the protagonist. After all, it will easily collapse if you don't suppress it. Otherwise, if you get the hang of it, you will directly contact your parents, tie up a senior human race, and directly get a lot of resources to accelerate your growth. Apart from this, the others are okay, there are no big poisonous points. Another thing is that the cult has better add a setting, that is, the wing tribe will give the cult some good things, otherwise a mere cult will not dare to destroy the college entrance examination!

With this kind of introduction, if humans need your rescue, humans might as well just be done with it.

The logic is not self-consistent. Since he chose to give the plug-in to the country, he was rated as a unique SSS-level genius. The country planned and provided resources to strengthen himself. On the other hand, instead of describing it in Spring and Autumn style, it focuses on describing the protagonist's adventures and going deep into dangerous situations to find opportunities. . . . Feeling like a fool,

What a joke, a blood-sucking race of trash can decide the life and death of human beings when they come out? Then this hot chicken human race should all be dead. It was really embarrassing to see this vampire race come out.

As for food and grass articles, I can catch up and talk about the shortcomings. 1: I can control three types, but mosquitoes appear in the beginning. 2: At the beginning, I feed myself mosquitoes to level 4 or 5, and then I go to harm the pig farm owner. I find a drainage ditch in the slaughterhouse. It shouldn't be difficult for mosquitoes to sneak in, right? 3: If you don't want flies, aren't they capable of spreading viruses and bacteria? And with Chixiang, it's not easy to obtain resources in the early stage.

Brother, in Chapter 20, the conflicts you arranged were too rigid. How could you withdraw the manpower when the exam is about to take place? In modern society, so many police patrols are arranged to protect middle school students during exams...

The main line is fine. All the supporting characters speak in the same tone, a student tone. The plot progression is just like the TV series, which seems bloody and childish. Novice on characters and plot details. Not poisonous but not worth reading

There is a question. When you go to the wild, you take dozens of weak mosquitoes with you. You also encounter many wild beasts on the road that you cannot defeat. I would like to ask the protagonist how he avoids being discovered by the wild beasts within his field of vision. Don't know how to buy high-tech telescopes? You are so stubborn even if you give away your head to someone else.

Just after reading the introduction, I have a question. Is taking the Zerg swarm to participate in the battlefield of all races considered an achievement of the human race? But it is clearly a victory of the Zerg race. Is this achievement controversial?

After reading it all, I actually think the author's setting is reasonable. Mosquitoes are small, and their main upgrade method is to suck blood. Their function is to extract Qi and Blood Pills, which are quite filters. Their combat capabilities are not strong, and they are mainly auxiliary. Later, you can set the captives of the Ten Thousand Races to feed the mosquitoes and make advanced Qi and Blood Pills to provide nutrients for the human race. The other branches are not as obvious as the blood-sucking ones, and they are also to make room for other insects later. As for ants, they only rely on eating soil, and their subsequent development is to swallow spiritual stones. In other words, ants are used as strategic materials, specially provided for geniuses. Ants should be retained, but their development will lag behind. They can also branch out and develop in the direction of consumables. The effect of the butterfly may be a combat-focused ability, or it may be a body-building liquid. Its later development should be to swallow high-level spiritual plants and have medical effects. According to the author's idea, the role of the sandworm is to fight, but the protagonist cannot stay at the beach permanently, and it is set to sleep when leaving the protagonist. This is a bug. I think the role of the sandworm is useless. It is better to make it a parasitism like an iron worm. When the time comes, it will parasitize first. As the host's ability is strengthened, if the protagonist comes once, the sea people will rebel and die. The role of bees is auxiliary, that is, making honey. I think you still need to eat honey and high-level spiritual plants to upgrade. The functions of honey include detoxification, healing, and accelerating the absorption of spiritual energy according to different spiritual plants. It has the most comprehensive auxiliary capabilities and is also a must-have for the protagonist in the later stage. As for other insects, the mantis must become gigantic after level 20. Its combat ability is strength. It is okay in the early stage, weak in the mid-term, and useless in the late stage. Scorpions are poisonous, the source of poison. The spider is the control, and the preset is useless in the later stage. However, when the protagonist goes to the battlefield, he should be able to see other types of insects, but the ones he harvests are mainly combat-type insects.

Reading this book gives me the feeling of One Punch Man and Mosquito Girl, which is pretty good.

Eagle, I know this is your new vest

The first five chapters are very well written. From the plot design and dialogue after going up the mountain, it is extremely embarrassing to watch. The smart people didn't write anything and feel it, while the ordinary people just painted a back view.

Not bad, the writing is okay, but it could be a little more refreshing

The earliest novel set in the battlefield of all races was published. Does anyone know which one it is?

I want to ask how long it will take for the superpower to show up in the future. Why didn't you tell me before the college entrance examination?

The insect is too weak, and I have no desire to continue watching.

The writing is quite good. If you spread out more content, the results will definitely be better. Come on