The Mohist School of the Qin Dynasty

The big problem, frankly, is that completely ignoring productivity and focusing solely on production relations and ideological enlightenment will lead to internal collapse when productivity is insufficient to support these production relations.

Honestly, after chapters 50-something, I felt that the protagonist, the next leader of the Mohist school, was just a minor character, getting trampled on by everyone. The Yin-Yang School, backed by the Qin state, had a long-standing feud with the Mohist school, and they even mobilized the Grand Master of Fate. The capture of the Moon Goddess was one thing, but that was another.

Shouldn't the author and protagonist be focusing on first integrating their own knowledge with that of the era to organize a comprehensive knowledge system and establish a theory of class divisions?

Overall it's alright, but there's a problem! The beginning suggests not viewing ancient times from a modern perspective, but once the protagonist truly understands the power struggles of the past, he starts commenting on it with a modern eye. There's a lack of descriptive writing; simply depicting the miserable lives of ordinary people is insufficient. At least a trip to two countries would have been helpful!

This book started off well, but it went awry when it came to women. Compared to current Qin's Moon fanfiction, I much prefer historical fiction set in the Qin's Moon era. While historical fiction protagonists may have multiple wives and concubines, these are only briefly mentioned in the plot.

This genre is destined to flop. Putting aside whether the author's writing skills and intelligence can hold up, what are Qin's Moon fanfiction readers looking for? Women, women, women! The most popular ones are all well-written and logical stories about picking up women. Who cares about how strangers on the internet are doing? They can't even take care of their own real lives!

The protagonist feels like a stray dog, kicking everyone he meets. Despite having such a powerful backer, he lives such a miserable life.

As talents that the Mohists want to cultivate, it's understandable if no one protects them. But if it happens twice, it's unacceptable. Even if they need to be trained, there should be someone with them. People with different principles cannot make plans together, but that could be fatal.

Seeing the beginning, I thought I was seeing a masterpiece, but unfortunately, I was disappointed.

The Mohist faction here is ridiculous. They claim the protagonist is the next Grand Master, and the Yin-Yang School kidnaps him just to find him—nothing more. What about the power struggles between factions? What about the exchange of benefits? Shouldn't the rules be explained? The Yin-Yang School appeared almost immediately after the main character appeared.