Konoha: Eyes of Xuansu

Traveling through the Hyuga Separation, there is no golden finger, no harem, the writing and plot are not outstanding, and the poor results are understandable. A pure Naruto fanfic really tests the author's writing style. If you can't write an attractive story, you are really asking for your own death.

What kind of novel do you dare not start writing? Background, talent, character, ability, bloodline, opportunity, there must always be a golden finger, right?

Shinji Hyuga, Shinji Uchiha, I want to write a book about Shinji Senju

In this book, the main character should be the ceiling, and it should be more enjoyable. The final strength of the protagonists in the previous books was not very satisfying and not very satisfying.

Would a modern person help an old man who fell down? Would a ninja help an old man of unknown origin? Chapter 3: Persuading to Retreat

The evolution of the Byakugan, the Tenseigan, is really the biggest evolution in Hokage. It is much more exaggerated than the Mangekyou or the Rinnegan. It goes directly to the sixth level. The evolution is also very simple. Just add the chakra of the moon Otsutsuki and the pure Byakugan. It is easier to evolve than the Sharingan, and it takes a shorter time to take effect. It feels stronger than Madara's Rinnegan.

He persuaded them to retreat at the beginning 🙂. An old man sandwiched two people, walking fast and whipping their legs. In the middle, the two pigs would not join forces to resist! No matter how much Buza's water prison is broken, the genin can break it. I really can't complain.

A bland batch. It's okay to think about the plot. Not interesting. After dozens of photos, it's still rubbish. He ran away decisively.

In this way, the children of the separated family are given to the roots, and they are not afraid of breeding for others. Are you trying to exterminate the clan? Just like the Uchiha clan, it feels a bit deceptive to just send the children away like this without using manipulation methods.

Madonna for the mentally retarded, as a branch of the family, he has neither the strength to resist nor the pleasure of revenge. It was so disturbing that I skipped over to read some of the content. The whole text was basically not interesting at all, but a lot of abuse.

The Hyuga family is divided + no talent + no strength + no success = dog

The main character is pretty useless, and I don't see any bright spots.

It's too slow to pick up. The plot needs to be spicier, either with new tricks to jump through levels and fight monsters, or with the protagonist's strength being upgraded. It's best to do this quickly, otherwise everyone will run away.

Let's talk about it, without a golden finger, how can a mediocre Hinata branch compare with the wall hangings from all walks of life?

Not to mention what the protagonist's achievements will be later! From this beginning, the protagonist is quite brainless. He incorporates the memories of others who are about to die. People who are separated from the family suppress the memories of having no status. He knows the plot and the dangers of the world, but he actually sleeps in after recovering from his injuries? Can you believe it? You actually missed the time to go to work and were glad to get off work? Are you doing an urban plot here... Don't you think that as long as you can't die, you can practice towards death? Regardless of whether it is effective or not, regardless of whether it is improved or not, you must have this idea, awareness and action! The protagonist needs to stand up. Before you find the golden finger, you don't love yourself. Do you expect to be lucky?

More than a hundred chapters are very dull. I'm still not even a year older. I don't even know what the author wrote when I put it on the shelf. Gave up. Avoid wasting starting coins

I just don't understand. I was reborn into the Hyuga branch family, which is worse than a slave. At the beginning, there was no repulsion and hatred at all. You know, the slave still has the ability to escape and resist. The branch family doesn't even have this ability. The protagonist is not brainwashed. It feels like he is no different from those who are accustomed to being dogs.

I still don't understand what the use of Rouquan xx Palm is? You can hit others dozens or hundreds of times, so why not just stab them to death with a kunai? It feels like it's just for showing off the white eyes, and I keep scraping it.

The author writes very solidly, and I like this process of gradual growth and transformation!

Uchiha himself only partially knows about Mangekyō, so you, a Hinata genin, can tell you openly where the information comes from.

I looked at the introduction and comment section, and it was very noisy. It feels like the story behind Naruto has collapsed, and the protagonist has to rely on the old villain to forcefully make a comeback. If you write a fanfic, in this world where blood is paramount (and there are various old sixes), the protagonist does not even have a golden finger. The gangster is okay in the early stage, but in the later stage, the combat power increases by several levels, and it is difficult to survive. It's better to just lie down and write a short story about talking to a few girls about life, brush aside, write about daily life, and wait for the prince to save the world.

It's a serious case of mental retardation, it doesn't look like it was written by a third-level account number

I just want to say it's too poisonous. Fortunately, I can understand it because I haven't experienced it before. But I don't want to talk about what happened later. There is no bright spot and I am just an ordinary ninja. Later, when I got the curse seal in the clan, I directly persuaded people to quit. It was obvious that I had some IQ before, so why did I become a fool in the clan? We've already talked about the curse seal, so why not hand over some of the irrelevant ones? I have to take the bird mark again to experience the pain, and then turn it in while shaking like a dog in fear, and then endure the torture again and grit my teeth and say no😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭You are not an aborigine, nor are you. You are a member of the branch who has been brainwashed since childhood. You are a time traveler😫When you are tortured, you don't want revenge or revenge in your heart. As a result, you are like a dog that has been trained since childhood, only panic and fear.

The separation of Uchiha and Hinata is the two most tragic ethnic groups in Konoha. There are conflicts and confrontations everywhere. It is easy to write something exciting, and there are too many successful ones. No one can actually write a book like this in 2023. The Madonna character, the gentle and sunny character is not suitable for these two tragic clans, so I hope the author will change the protagonist's personality quickly. The ruthless and fierce character of the protagonist of these two clans is the cool thing. Otherwise, people will keep scolding you in the book reviews.

For the main character's psychic beast, I think the most suitable one is the First War Psychic Beast. The First War Psychic Beast is huge. The second Psychic Beast is probably capable of ninjutsu. The third Psychic Beast can persist for decades without returning to the psychic world and can transform into a castle, which shows that it has a huge amount of chakra. Can the 4th Kishimoto's Psychic Beast be any good?

How do you say this protagonist's name? Are these Naruto fan novels wholesale using an AI software?

Although I like the growth pig's feet without plug-ins, it's a pity that the author's skills are not up to par, and I don't like the plot either. Goodbye.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

The survivors of the Six Paths, the clan, Senju, Uchiha, Kaguya, and Uzumaki. Among them, Hashirama's cells can be traded with Orochimaru, Uzumaki's can also be found by his mother, the Zong family and Uchiha's should be relatively easy to deal with, and Kaguya's trouble spots can be dealt with by Kimimaro.

You can't even defeat a Hyūnin. Why are you jumping around?