I'm Not Lying. My Family Is Really an Ordinary Family.

Give the author a suggestion. I also read the latest chapter from the beginning. However, I am getting a bit tired of reading. At present, the plot is watery and boring, and it can be called a lot of nonsense. If you have water level. It's good to make everyone happy, but if you want to be more attractive. I suggest you enrich the plot a bit more.

Everything else is fine, but the things that make me personally feel poisonous are (1) motorcycles, driving motorcycles on the road at the age of sixteen, dangerous and unreasonable) (2) The book is a sweet story, and the single female protagonist runs well. The part in the club is inexplicable. For readers with a God's perspective, the male and female protagonists are destined to be a couple. It is reasonable to have a little ambiguity, and it can be explained with a slight exception. It is recommended to wait for the relationship later, and suppress it)

Basketball, basketball, basketball, can you let basketball go?

Brothers, you can store your brains with me.

Riding a motorcycle to school at the age of 16. What kind of school is so awesome?

What a great novel. The author actually mentioned a single female protagonist. No wonder it was so popular. . Most people who read Shuangwen like multiple female protagonists, so the positioning must be accurate.

The type of writing is quite interesting, but it is a bit difficult to deal with it if you keep wandering in school. Being in school is not a sweet love, so the appreciability is extremely low. The school just feels pretentious, and the strong character is a bit lost.

Ten million to build a teaching building? Playground? Even shoddy projects are not enough

What the author wrote later is a little too brainless. No matter whether it is an ordinary person or a rich man, as long as he has brains, he will not do such outrageous things.

Nowadays, the proportion of children born in 2007 and 2008 on the Internet has increased. Therefore, in order to cater to this group of people, this book is written according to the ambitions of some of them, such as "Glory of Kings" and "Peace Elite", which have all the five poisons. It is essentially a white text.

Positioning: A variant of the local tycoon novel about pretending to slap people in the face Evaluation: The sense of substitution is not strong, and the plot is dull Suggestions: 1. Delete irrelevant elements, such as telekinesis (never seen used), such as rewards for the protagonist, whether it is a healthy body, a longer life, or telekinesis. 3. Be careful with single female protagonists. Whether it is multiple female protagonists or single female protagonists, they need strong writing support. Many female protagonists choose their audience at the beginning. Relatively speaking, readers are more receptive to the plot, but without excellent writing, it will become a stallion novel. The single heroine places more emphasis on logic, and the emotional development of the characters must be logical. The best solution is to develop a relationship in a certain period of time and space before the plot of the novel begins. A single female protagonist is a cool story, especially if the male protagonist is a diaosi. Then the female protagonist cannot be a diaosi, and the excellence of the female protagonist must be shown. 4. The way of presenting the feeling of pleasure is cautious The protagonists of Shuangwen can generally be divided into three types, the male loser type, the Long Aotian type, and the intellectual type. The male diaosi type generally starts as a diaosi and continues to be a diaosi. There is no change in ability. They use the system to show off and slap in the face. The Long Aotian type is very capable from the beginning and creates a sense of pleasure by pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. The intellectual type creates a sense of pleasure by coming back from adversity. According to the above standards, it is obvious which type this book belongs to. You must make good use of the conditions given by the system. 5. The plot advances with caution. The protagonist of a refreshing novel needs to have a certain amount of initiative. Being too passive will make readers feel frustrated. 6. The diversity and unity of Shuangwen's plot. Diversity means that the plot is exciting enough, and the plot is divided into multiple units. Each unit must have a clear plot and excellent content. Uniformity means that the direction of the plot in each unit is consistent, that is, it is pretentious. No matter what the content is, readers must be able to at least vaguely predict the future direction, and then the plot is presented in the form of readers' expectations, which must meet the readers' emotional expectations. (For example, if the villain shows off in front of the protagonist with a big wave and humiliates the protagonist's girlfriend, then the emotional expectation at this time is to slap the villain in the face. You can't let the protagonist endure it at this time, and then the plot ends. This is very frustrating)

It's just a pretentious and mindless article. If you are bored and have some money, you can watch the back part, but you have to jump in and subscribe to read it so that you won't feel a loss. Of course, if you don't think it matters, it's all up to you. Personally, I think it's a big deal and not a small one. It's just a fun picture to pass the time.

There is nothing wrong with writing about being invincible, but at least you should be clear about it. It is not an inexplicable lick. You have to brush up the tasks and attributes after giving a system to others. You really feel like you are getting something for nothing, and your three views are obviously wrong. It is 2023, and three-year-old children know that they can only earn money by showing cuteness and making videos, not pie-in-the-sky. I don't have to write this, but it's really annoying to keep pushing this book to me.

I've always thought it was outrageous. I've read so many novels, but why are there always novels that fail to capture the basic elements of a good novel?

Your introduction is obviously so long, but I just can't understand what the book is about.

I just read the introduction. Ten million is not enough to install air conditioners, build sports fields, and build teaching buildings. Author 🙂

I have finished reading Quan Ding. Let me share my feelings. This book has a lot of logical flaws, but it completely conforms to all the fantasies I had when I was in my second year of middle school (facepalming🤦‍♂️). When reading this book, don't think about logic or rationality. Just feel good and let it go. Put aside the adult worldview and enter the second year of middle school. You will discover a new world!

Just like a loser, I really don't feel like watching it at all

There is a lot of nonsense, and I have written several short essays about the island landing plot by a few trash girls.

This book is meant to be read in your free time without thinking. It's quite interesting. The setting is quite interesting and it's refreshing to watch. But some parts are still uncomfortable. For example, the female protagonist is not so out of place if she is in the same class as the male protagonist. I remember when I graduated from my junior year and watched the gang of sophomores in high school, I really thought they were all kids with bigger butts 🙄🙄🙄

The good news is suture monsters, urban superpowers, farming on the go, raising pets, pure love, big boss help The bad news is just ordinary, no focus, no direction. Now the life and career of a protagonist who can fly to the sky and escape from the earth with telekinesis and can hypnotize is to open a hotpot restaurant?

The subject matter is good, but I thought that pig trotters would become famous in society through this system, and the various stories about pretending to be fake and slapping people in the face were, to put it bluntly, a novel in disguise. Unexpectedly, it turned out to be a story about petty, trivial parents who pretended to be scornful and slapped people in the face and ruined the situation.

After reading the free part and the comment section, I decided not to subscribe. Give the author some feedback, at least explain why you don't want to read further. This book is actually a variant of the divine novel. What's the cool thing about the divine novel? To put it bluntly, it just needs to be really cool! Drive the fastest car, climb the highest mountain, and collect beauties with various qualities. The most basic thing is to let ordinary readers imagine what kind of drunken life they live. But as for this book, I really can't find anything interesting about it. A normal high-end novel is about famous cars, watches and various businesses, but in fact the core is still a woman. It needs to promote the plot and give the audience a different experience. Note that the core must be a beauty, and a beauty with many different qualities. In this book, there is only one woman who is still engaging in pure love. I guess the author was deceived by a very small number of readers with niche tastes, otherwise the author's writing skills would not have such poor results. Shen Haowen, you are playing the role of innocent, you don't want to talk about it when you are not happy, you can't even make up the plot, so you can only shock and shock the protagonist's relatives and high school classmates over and over again. In fact, it is very boring to watch. Godly writing, you want a pure and single heroine, what kind of Godly novel do you write? You write about pure love for campus. The audience for Shen Hao's novels is bulldozers. Most people who want to watch single female protagonists don't like to read Shen Hao's novels. The vast majority of people who like to read novels about gods don't want to watch innocent single female protagonists. When you write about a subject, you can't even tell who the audience is... As an author, don't be influenced by a few people, because the ones who pay are still the silent majority. Whether the plot or setting you wrote is consistent with this book, you will know by subscribing. The above suggestions are my thanks for reading hundreds of thousands of words for free.

The first chapter is as if the author never went to school. Will a family selling pork be ridiculed like that? When you were in school, were all your classmates like that? Then your school is really extraordinary! I was confused immediately. I thought my classmates weren't that bad when I was in school.

I want to complain about whether the protagonist can be made smarter!

At a gathering of relatives or dinner with leaders, it was initially transparent and even ridiculed, but then suddenly a big boss came, and the best relative and boss at the table went to lick the protagonist. As a result, the big boss came over and licked the protagonist, which shocked the whole audience. As long as ordinary people have attended a dinner party, they have probably experienced being a transparent person and even being forced to drink alcohol, so this book was okay at the beginning. But this kind of routine can no longer be used after being written down. If it is used forcefully, the situation in the back of the book will happen. Things happen again and again, but everyone seems to have been brainwashed. They just don't remember that the protagonist is awesome and fall into an infinite cycle of pretense. The shocked people don't even change much... Actually, it's just that you're too open-minded at the beginning. Otherwise, you should set the world a little better, meet local star entrepreneurs in school, meet well-known professors in college, and be robbed by all parties after graduation. Then use your contacts to start a business, so that the protagonist can become awesome little by little without urgent crises and only minor troubles.

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It's not easy, Jing?

He's so awesome that he doesn't want to give up, he's still taking a taxi, his ability can dazzle the whole world, and he still nods and bows when meeting an old man Wei, this plot is amazing

I have been pretending for more than 600 chapters, and the more I pretend, the more awkward it becomes. Later, I am trying to force myself to pretend that I am ordinary...