Lord of Mysteries: Yao Guang

In a sense, what first attracted me to read this article was the male protagonist label of Amon on the character interface. I clicked on this article with doubts about how ambitious the heroine would be to fall in love with Amon. Although I now know that Amon can only be said to be the male protagonist of the plot, and the female protagonist has no emotional scenes with him, this article is surprisingly good.

When I saw the captain sacrificing himself, I had no idea what the author was writing about. If you miss the opportunity to save, it happened, and you sacrificed yourself to save it. Old Neil once, Cohen once, and the captain a third time. As the saying goes, again and again, two, and not three, it feels a bit disgusting if your repeated statement is true. What's the change of having one more person? Do you just miss it again and again? After one event, go to sleep and then move on to the next event, making the narrative as fragmented as reading a catalog? Regarding 🪶, a copy of Sequence One Extraordinary Characteristics leads the protagonist. Why do you give her the background of the Sefirah? One moment he was communicating with the gods, and the next moment he was being played around with by a quill pen? The original work is about increasing the combat power from low to high. You are a high level being tortured by a low level. For the sake of sensationalism, you are forced to sensationalize: ah, I know, I want to remind you, I'm sorry to interrupt, I forgot, ah, missed it, wuwuwu, I won't let you die, sacrifice, sleep, and then repeat it again, and again, I just feel sick when I see the captain.

To be honest, the author's writing has a very mysterious style and flavor! Like Squid's novel about Klein, the heroine has a cruel fate and struggle, and is a bit sadistic, but she does not give up hope. She has the beauty of humanity, companionship and friendship, and does not despair about life and destiny! On the contrary, the description of the Amons is quite interesting, a group of cruel and interesting fun-loving people! Amon does not lie to Amon, Amon does not cheat Amon, Amon is still Amon! Amon and Meng Quan, all eyes are filled with Amon!

I have read more than 50 chapters, and overall the writing is quite good, but there are some aspects that still seem particularly uncomfortable. I don't understand what's going on with the heroine. The heroine has a strong affection and sense of responsibility for everyone in the law enforcement team, and she can do anything for her. Mingming's attitude towards her has always been defensive and calculating. He only thinks of him when he needs it. Most of the time, he restricts the heroine. Of course, it is undeniable that there is also some sincerity mixed in. But the heroine inexplicably regards him as a family member, and sometimes even regards him as more important than her own life. There is not enough preparation, and it does not explain why the heroine is so good to everyone, and why she has such deep feelings for everyone? In addition, the heroine is always in a panic, whether to cry or not. It has not been long since she came to this world, and she is still confused, as if she has been using her subconscious to control her actions, without any thoughts or ideas of her own. It looks very awkward and strange!

After reading the first 60 chapters, it turns out that the heroine is not weak, strictly speaking, being prone to crying is just a sign of being easily emotional. What's annoying is that the heroine doesn't know how to deal with anxiety, doesn't actively explore and communicate when something is wrong, and is fooled into being plotted when faced with a conspiracy (she clearly has so many clues in front of her, and has strong spiritual intuition) (she has been vaguely aware that someone is affecting her thoughts, but she doesn't talk about it or doesn't care about others?) She only relies on her passion and sincerity, and she is fooled into being plotted. Is this not so-called weakness, not that smart, or vaguely arrogant? Actually, according to human standards, such weakness is excusable and common among ordinary people, but it is just frustrating to watch. I saw someone saying that the heroine will grow up in the future, I hope she can be smarter.

Whether it's the control of plot tension or the warmth of daily life, this mysterious fanfic deeply attracted me, and it almost ranks in the top three among the mysterious fanfics I've read. But I don't know why, when I watched it, I felt so distressed, saddened by the misfortune that happened to Esther. If what she did or said, it would be forgotten, and every trace of evidence of her existence would disappear. Except for a few who have the ability to remember her, there is no trace of her left in the world. Just thinking of this makes me feel so sad. I struggle hard under this worldview and practice my inner path, hoping that I will finally have a good ending.

It's really amazing. Madam, you must keep writing.

I feel that many male readers click in because of the mysterious fandom... As a female reader, I found that the details of life and the emotions of the characters described by the author are quite good. The extraordinary battle scenes are actually not even well written by Squid, haha. The sense of immersion is also very strong, and the suspense in the early stage is also very high. The heroine is a relatively emotional character, and she is matched with a high level of character and ability. There is still a sense of inconsistency, but the flaws are not hidden. I am very happy to see such a fanfic that is very close to the original work. Speaking of the heroine, the Virgin, in fact, strictly speaking, isn't Ke also the Virgin? It is actually normal for the focus on saving the common people to focus on the remnants of the past who have a relatively high sense of morality. It's just that Ke is very cautious and calm, and the foundation of his kindness must be based on his own sufficient strength. The heroine cannot control her own abilities and influence at the beginning, and she is not cautious enough. For readers who already know how cruel the mysterious world is, they will naturally think that the heroine is innocent and stupid, so the impression is not that good. But I think the author has to deliberately create the heroine like this, and everyone has to grow up. I like the monster path very much, and I also like the little snake and the big snake. The extraordinary people in this path have to be more or less happy with the situation, and after experiencing the ups and downs of fate, they can see through the ending of the mortal world, hahaha. As the Key of Light, the heroine will definitely be unable to control herself due to the chaos of fate at the beginning, but... I am really looking forward to the future development! Objectively speaking, the biggest advantage of this article is that the character description is very three-dimensional and not OOC. I have seen many male fans who play the original characters crazily, resulting in the portrayal being too marginalized. This book has the tone of a slow-cooked squid, and the daily writing is very interesting. I love reading it, and the interaction between the heroine and Meng is also very interesting. I really want to watch Meng's process of understanding human nature. (The process of being persecuted.) The author is really amazing and his writing style is very good! I hope the author can be more careful and not unfinished! I hope Xiaoke and the heroine will no longer be so lonely...

It's so weird. It's actually easy to capture the coolness of a mysterious fan novel, but this book doesn't feel cool at all. The lines are filled with pain, depression, and confusion. Who can bear this? Reading a few chapters can make me emo for a day. It's so uncomfortable.

To Esther. Drawn By Chris.

I probably know who the protagonist is. The Key of Light has become a spirit, and it is still hung on the Source Castle. It has certain permissions from the Source Castle, so I can use some of the abilities of the Gou Sanjia path.

It's not the first time in a long time that a fan can save the regrets of the original work, but it doesn't make people happy. On the contrary, they also have a bad feeling for the characters that the original work thought were okay. I can only say that it is a kind of talent. I only saw the first chapter of v, and I'm not sure what's behind it. I thought about whether I should complain about it all night long because I only saw it for free, but I felt so uncomfortable that I didn't want to complain about it. As of v, the protagonist gives me the feeling that he is a tool for the author to express his preferences. Wherever there is a need to interact with the author's favorite characters, and wherever there is a need for a scene to redeem the author's regrets, the protagonist will appear there. As for the protagonist himself, he hinted that his background was awesome, and then he was imprisoned in the Nice Gate. At the same time, he believed in a witch that he had just met a while ago, but he was extremely wary of Amon's clone who was with him when he landed in time travel. Everyone knows Amon, but for the heroine, Amon and the witch who cannot be parasitic are still the same as Triss who was turned into a vessel for the gods to descend. Isn't the latter more dangerous? The original witch is an evil god, and Amon and the materials that cannot be parasitized are almost the same. Then there is the most outrageous plot, which best reflects the heroine's tool-man status. Triss also prostituted something from the heroine that can increase her spirituality. Not to mention the development of the plot and what the heroine left behind, weren't they all written by the author? From this point, you can clearly feel that the author's preferences and the protagonist are completely based on his preferences. Then there is Amon. To be honest, a novel, even a composition, needs to have a point of interest (theme), but I really can't determine what the point of interest of this article is. Let me just talk about myself, I personally came here for the male protagonist Amon. I was wondering how Amon could be the male protagonist, but I looked at the comment section and said that he was the male protagonist in the plot, so... That would be fine. As a result, Amon fell asleep due to the seal of Chanis Gate throughout the whole process, and he would make yin and yang comments from time to time. When the heroine woke up, the two had a good relationship and the heroine listened to Amon's opinions. This is where it gets even more outrageous. Chanis Gate is really outrageous. What method is used to provide sleep comfort to Heiye? It's okay to directly make it a sealed object. When you go to talk to people about cooperation, you just give them a day trip to Orange. Is this Heiye's brain underdevelopment or is the crazy trait of the Demon Wolf King inherited to Heiye. This point makes no sense at all. It was purely written to make people think. The early interactions with Amon in the dessert shop and some small details that seemed quite heartwarming were fine. But later on, the main plot was just a mess. Amon, the male protagonist of the plot, might as well be a filler. Yes, judging from the previous plot, Klein has more plot content than Amon. Amon is even better than this if he directly makes it into a charm and uses it to save people at the end of Yangen's plot. The early plot was so easy to write. Either it was a Nighthawk, or it was a wild Beyonder who acted as an informant for Klein. At the end, the heroine used her own reboot or Amon's time reversal to save her, but the result was that it was written as a sealed object. I really don't understand whether the investment in the night or the enmity, is Fregra resurrected in the night?

Time angel. Drawn by Chris/The cat that ate Chris.

I haven't watched it yet, but I was stunned when I saw this male protagonist 🙂

It's tasteless, and it's a pity to discard it It's not sweet, it has no passion, it has no fan fiction, it should have the fun of changing the plot, or it has advantages like foresight (especially the part about getting along with the protagonist), and it doesn't have the fun of the normal novel type It's hard to tell what the author wants to write, it feels like he wants to imitate it. The original book of Best Friend, but the writing skills are limited, and it is far less graphic than the other party In short, I can't tell what story the author wants to tell. The protagonist seems to be following the plot and following Ke around, not knowing what to do It's not impossible to say that the main line (goal) is not clear. Either write about daily sweets, that is, the direction of a light novel, with a sweeter tone, whether it is a cp with Ke or Zhengyi/Puppet, and then save the regrets of the original book (another mention Although the captain is saved here, the writing is really bad and does not make people feel happy at all... It only hurts. It's hard to tell whether you want to make everyone who reads the book happy or want to kill people). Everyone is happy, but here there are restrictions on the protagonist, which makes people suffer and hate each other; or it is based on the feeling of "rebirth" and takes advantage of the plot to use pretentiousness as a highlight, such as giving Kwan two hands to show off to others, and at the same time, his combat power can kill indiscriminately (such as a fan) "The foreign god is actually myself", these are these two characteristics), and the senses are okay. As for this book, it does not achieve the goal of "just writing a protagonist based on the world view of my best friend", and it does not write any exciting points when it comes to playing a supporting role for Ke. In my personal evaluation, the author has more than enough ambition: he is not willing to write some exciting articles about killing people or sweet posts, but wants to tell the story of his own characters - but he is not strong enough: he does not have the ability to establish his image. Especially in the Western-style, gentlemanly setting of the original book of Best Friend, the emotions are restrained, and it is even more difficult to express the characters if they want to be polite (and if the expression skills are not good enough, they have to play this restrained image with Squid, which is very tiring to read - Squid at least has an obvious climax at the end of the volume before the end of Being a Pirate, which makes people feel this The excitement of the story has the sense of a grand finale. At the end of your story (Tinggen), I felt like "Oh, the protagonist is so excited and wants to fight, but why, I can't see why there is such a rush." Or in other words, writing a fanfic protagonist without plot memory is quite thankless in itself, because the reader thinks: Oh, the big boss is coming. Now, the Black Hand is that so-and-so, how should we deal with him. As a result, the protagonist is still cheated like in the original work, and his performance is not even as good as the original protagonist. Then the readers will feel uncomfortable - unless you just want to play with such a sense of powerlessness and focus on depression, the audience is not without it, but I can only say that it is different anyway, and I believe that most people who click in to read the fanfic are more inclined. I want you to solve some of the regrets in the original work, instead of adding another person to re-read the plot - does this still need to be written by a fan author? Wouldn't the writing level be higher if you just read the cuttlefish? My suggestion is that the author has some awareness of his own simple writing skills. If the writing is not good and cannot impress people, it is better to put it away. Take this book for example. According to the reading level, if the writing is smoother, it will be smoother, but if you want to tell your own main line (and it is still depressing), I can only comment that the level is not enough - a happy story can be read even if it is almost written. The most you can comment on is that this place is boring or too cliche. But for something that is more tragic and depressing, if it can't move people emotionally, it won't be interesting at all. It will only get more annoying and leave you. For a more leisurely person like me, I might have to come and watch it. (So ​​subjectively, I don't like "poorly written" tragic novels. As a certain crazy lich said, everyone is tired from living a day, so why bother to read a novel online to make yourself unhappy) How simple, before Human Squid wrote this thing, the Arcane Throne was a mainstream cool novel with a slap in the face upgrade method. Okay. In short, my first impression when I wanted to comment above was "It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away". Now I think it is very accurate. It has no characteristics, no story (the amount of information in a book is like the original book's extra chapter about an important supporting role), it can't make people happy, it can't move others, I am satisfied, I think this book may be less tearful and easily moved/best friends and fans have read less and there are few new ones. It may be more suitable for people who are new to it Don't go back and read the comments. I estimate that there are dozens of replies to scold me in the comment section of other books. After all, those who write rubbish are directly criticized, so if the author is anxious and wants to delete it, feel free to delete it. Anyway, I'm done complaining.

In the early stage, the heroine seemed to be led by a string to be an NPC who had a fixed plot with the original owner Klein. In the mid-term, I untied myself from the original owner, Klein, and started to follow my own main line, and opened up additional branch lines, and met some relatives and friends. I still had to complete the mission of the NPC, and maintained communication with the original owner, Klein. At least it gave me a sense that she was the protagonist of the story. This part is also my favorite part. The reveal of the protagonist's identity rarely fits the original work's nonsensical setting. The setting of the battle scene is also good, emm, but it is too conservative. Other protagonists can at least be invincible at the same level, not to mention leapfrogging monsters. The protagonist's Sequence 4+Essence level plug-in often fights Sequence 5 back and forth, and the setting of demigods and Sequence 5 in the original work is a qualitative change. One demigod can defeat ten or eight Sequence 5s. Of course, it can also be explained by the protagonist having debuffs, lack of actual combat experience, etc. However, there is no confrontation between the two parties in the whole article. The protagonist either overtly or covertly holds the whole audience or gets the upgrade materials. The two most exciting points of the starting point are upgrading and monster spawning. They are only supported by the plot setting, which always makes people feel very empty. In the later stage, various memory killings will be interspersed with Tarot meetings, which may be more appetizing to some people who have feelings for the original work. However, the protagonist appears in one chapter out of ten, and the group portraits are not particularly exciting, and there is even a suspicion of changing the protagonist. Frankly speaking, can Zoya and Esther really be considered the same person? The part about writing the Tarot Society was completely rereading the original work from a different angle. Although a few more people were added and a few more sentences were added, what should have happened in the original work still happened, and what should not have happened did not have any impact on the direction of the story. . It makes me regret buying these chapters. The part about writing the memory killing felt like a running account, and there was nothing that could arouse emotions, but there might be some clues about the background of the protagonist, so I bought it. This is the author's first book, and it is so cleverly written that it is understandable even if fellow readers do not dare to drastically change the plot. After entering the mystery, I read a lot of fan fiction, and after watching the same plot dozens of times, I felt a little tired. What attracts me more about this book is the description of the confrontation between Decryption and Amon's enemies and friends. It is rare in the fandom that the protagonist can still have the upper hand in the fight against Amon. She has no player mentality towards the characters in Secret, and she quits the Tarot Club even after joining. She has her own persistence and goals. It's just that the plot now feels tasteless. After thinking about it for a long time, I found two or three interesting plot lines.

To be a saint, it is better to have the strength to crush people. In the early stage, it is too frustrating and inexplicable to save people at every turn. The male protagonist seems to be Amon. Amon is not a poor little person who has never been exposed to kindness, right? My father is the enemy of my country and I have countless clones. I already have Yuantai's preferences, but he would be moved by the heroine's cake. It's really inappropriate 😅

Lose touch with you, Lock eyes with me. One heart drifts away, but what you see is love. Drawed by Chris/The cat that ate Chris.

I couldn't stand it when I saw a Sequence 5 who needed to be covered by Sequence 7 to escape. If you don't want to write an invincible novel, can you not give the protagonist a big hook? Wouldn't the author find it interesting to activate the game and let the minions run away?

Because I personally don't like Amon very much, I actually didn't read this book very much, but I looked through the reviews and found that some people said that the protagonist was too virginal, and then expressed their dissatisfaction with the book. Yes, maybe it is not a good evaluation now, but as far as I am concerned, the so-called Holy Mother (not those Holy Virgin bitches, please don't confuse the two) is actually those kind people. In my opinion, kind people should be respected no matter what. Although I am not a kind person and cannot be a kind person, I think it is these kind people who make this world a better place. So please come on, author!

Why has this book been discontinued? I think my writing is pretty good and my grades are pretty good.

😭When will it be updated?

The heroine and Amon are also siblings in a sense.

Does the author boss still update? Please don't update constantly.

It's very well written, why don't you update it?

I like it very much, I like it very much, I like it very much🥰🥰🥰

I can't understand the latest plot. What does the appearance of Merlin Hermes mean? Is the old world the original world? What is the dreamland? Besides, the heroine is of high status, right? She has no ability to resist at all? Adam and Amon can do whatever they want, so what's the point of the heroine's life...

Is there a love line between the heroine and Amon in this book? Why haven't I seen anything about the third volume😭😭