We Are the Successors of Hogwarts

Another self-help article. That's fine, you've fulfilled your dream and just write it for yourself. Come on.

If the main character were aboriginal, then the performance would be okay. It's a pity that he is a time traveler, so he can only be described as a time traveler.

Subscribe to 35 chapters, read 300,000 words, and rate it This is a novel that the author hopes to be close to reality, close to reality, and in line with serious novels. However, I only hope that although the logic is actually self-consistent, the plot is really not in line with the taste of the public readers (I mean the current mainstream writing method, which does not abuse the protagonist). It has little to do with the title of the book, and it belongs to the depressing style. The author made a fake bug at the beginning. Maybe he wanted to slowly develop the character of the protagonist. The writing was really confusing. I was confused when reading it. It took more than 10 chapters from the beginning to the time before it was released to barely introduce the origin of the protagonist. _(:з∠)_ It's really big. This is the first time I've seen this kind of writing. Slight spoilers below First let's talk about the origin of the protagonist. The protagonist is a pseudo-indigenous person. According to the author's setting, it feels similar to Ichigo and Shiro Ichigo. The protagonist is Shiro Ichigo and the time traveler is Ichigo. Ichigo is sleeping at the beginning. , Shiro Ichigo lived as Ichigo for 11 years, and then died. The time traveler Ichigo was blocked by the author within 1 second after he came online. Shiro Ichigo continued to log in, but he almost died again after the ups and downs. Time traveler Ichigo came online, and he directly sent troops to pave the way for Shiro Ichigo. Oh my god. . . . . . The sense of substitution is very strong_(:з∠)_I won't substitute it next time. Let's talk about the treatment of the protagonists in today's mainstream novels, such as Talent, Golden Finger, Plug-in, Grandpa, and Ruanfanliu. This novel has them all, but they are all poisonous. Talent belongs to the time traveler, and is directly sacrificed to the time traveler. Gold Finger is the previous generation. The same model as the Dark Lord, the plug-in was given by parents (resurrection), the old man is the devil, the devil who specializes in tricking people, the same is true for soft rice, the devil, Dumbledore and all kinds of teachers are really not good things, this rice is really soft to look at, and it will pierce your mouth when you eat it. The author's prayer for the novel is actually quite good. The original words cannot be reproduced. The general meaning is (I hope that the protagonist will grow between good and evil, and the good will pull the protagonist, and the evil will pull the protagonist, and the tug-of-war will begin) This situation is actually very good, but the author obviously ignored the real setting of the protagonist in the novel to let readers like me feel after being substituted. According to the author's setting, the protagonist is an empty shell. I am a 20-year-old youth who has just stepped out of society and time travels to a newborn child. Because the body does not match, I fall into a deep sleep. Then the soul of the adult is subtly infecting the empty soul of the empty shell. When will it be infected by me, he is me and I am him. As a result, when I am 11 years old, suddenly Then I was sealed, the infection stopped, and the half-infected child was deceived into signing a contract of prostitution. I couldn't even do anything. Finally, I saw that the other "me" was about to die. I had no choice but to fight for myself, but the price of the fight was that the devil's contract of betrayal was activated. I didn't want to take advantage of the devil, so I had to choose to take advantage of this half of "me", so I received the box lunch. The worst thing is that "I" was only half dyed, and all I got were bits and pieces, which I saw in my dreams. Later, I was taken to the Harry Potter world by the devil and signed a deed of betrayal (in front of the deed of betrayal was the contract of my parents. To put it simply, the devil planned to pack up the whole family), and the tragedy continued. Continuing, I seemed to be happily led by the greatest white wizard, but I was exploited from the beginning. Even the golden finger I got was the same model with big problems. I was really used and played by a group of riddlers, Lao Yinbi, "I" was only 11 years old, 12 years old, and 13 years old. How could these dogs be so good at it? What did "I" do? I was rejected from learning magic for 2 years, so I could only choose Lao Yinbi. Study quietly, be used by others, or use his own life to force "me" to hold the Horcrux, and directly get 2 unawares. (The second chapter of Chapter 35 has not been obtained yet, but it is expected to be soon, according to the author's arrangement) So the advanced knowledge is blocked. If you want to learn more advanced knowledge, there is no way, because "My child, you are still young, playing and making friends are more suitable for you now, go to bed." It's too scrambled. Author, if you follow this logic, it is impossible for Voldemort to appear in Dumbledore's Hogwarts. Because the knowledge blockade is too serious, the learning progress is controlled. According to the author, there are only a lot of useless words and small knowledge points in the library, introducing the origin and use of magic. Spellcasting methods and spells have been erased and placed in the restricted book area. All harmful and lethal black and white magic is in the restricted book area. The most terrifying thing is that everyone who enters the restricted area will be known by Dumbledore. Commenting here, these 1,300 words are just to tell the author that the protagonist in your novel is very good, basically the protagonist of the cool article template, but you put too much pressure on the protagonist. I saw the words of a reader in the paragraph comment are very appropriate "Voldemort's understanding is that Dumbledore = strength is power, and the protagonist's understanding is that Snape (personally think that it is replaced by all the bad people he encounters) = strength is power" Because the author, you wrote The protagonist below should not be able to release the God Guard, because his misfortune outweighs his luck. Snape can release it because of all the darkness and the pure land of his childhood and Lily. He grasped this most precious and cherished light before he can cast it. As for the protagonist, you wrote it yourself. Childhood memories and his current experiences cannot be released at all when he first learned it. Your successful casting in Chapter 87 is actually far-fetched and does not meet the progress of Chapter 86. The most important thing is that it is too depressing. The life of the college really made me feel no happy emotions after I entered it. The seemingly beautiful college life only has the pressure of studying and the obsession to resurrect my parents, as well as the obsession of being used, deceived, and bullied by this group of people without being able to resist, and the pressure of death (the soul of the protagonist will be taken away if you fail). I really From the text, I can't feel that the protagonist should have happy emotions, but the most depressing thing is that Dumbledore, as a life-saver, has the arrogance of an elder and does not want the protagonist to grow too fast. He has arranged the protagonist's step-by-step path, and every step of the protagonist must force himself to grow, to suffer, to welcome the prying eyes in the dark, and to obtain growth at a greater cost that is not known to be worth it. To be honest, as a reader, I don't mind farming growth. I personally prefer farming flow. But~ Okay, okay, I can't go on. If nothing else, the author's writing style is still very immersive at 300,000 words. This may be the charm of depression literature. Even if the writing is not strong enough, the most beautiful thing is not to let it see hope. Covering it bit by bit, suppressing it bit by bit, erasing it bit by bit, slowly adding suffering, grief, and despair, turning the bright white into dirty gray, then spreading it out to everyone to see, and introducing in the most indifferent tone, "Look, this gray white was once so beautiful and perfect." Finally, I sincerely wish the author can write better. Of course I will not continue to watch it. After all, I like comedy and don't like black and white mime. I don't like art, but I will applaud art, so be it.

Great, with Hahe CP, you have all the reservations! Long live Haha! Damn Weasley!

If the protagonist does not have the wisdom of Constantine, no one who makes a deal with the devil will die easily.

It was well written and I read it in one sitting. As for whether the main character is defeated or not, I think the logic should be self-consistent and easier for viewers to understand. The plot is smooth, the dialogues are rich and the characters are three-dimensional. Good books are not popular.

Looking forward to it, the emotional line really doesn't matter, the main attraction is the interesting adventure and creative plot

I've finished watching it. It's quite interesting. The protagonist is quite awesome as an indigenous child.

It's natural to cut it, it generates electricity for love

It doesn't matter whether it's emotional or not, the key is his harem?

The label is relaxing, but after looking at it, it doesn't feel very relaxing 🤔

The settings were so bad that I felt something was wrong the more I looked at it. After thinking about it, I found out that it was caused by the basic settings...

Among all the houses, I have always been Ravenclaw and have no feelings. Others have always said that the Snake House is self-interested. In fact, the House has always been very concerned about the things around it.

Although I only read the front part, there is one place that feels particularly strange. Author, do you want to write about an aborigine or a time travel? If you travel through time, you are still at the mental age of a child, have no understanding of the original work, and act without purpose, what is the significance of this time travel? As for the aborigines, to be honest, it is not recommended to write about the aborigines, as it will easily conflict with the original work and cause embarrassment.

I haven't watched it yet, mainly the CP of Harry and Hermione in the later period🙂

One word, chaos. The protagonist's positioning is confusing. It is obvious that he is a time traveler who knows and understands HP, and has a certain understanding of the devil. But in order to advance the plot, or to depict the protagonist for power or desire, the author ultimately made a deal with the devil. However, this is not the American drama script that we often see that has some extraordinary abilities. The protagonist himself is also a person with extraordinary abilities. So after getting the magic wand, he unexpectedly made a deal with the devil, and then was tricked in the contract. There is a very strange conflict. It does not mean that the protagonist must be invincible. It may be because there is not enough foreshadowing. The overall performance is that of an ordinary native who has little understanding of HP and devils. Like indirect amnesia, it conflicts with the setting. Many early HP fans also like to make this problem. The main problem is the promotion and integration of the plot, the outline and details. There is nothing wrong with the writing style, but the author has not really sorted out the entire magic logic, devil system and HP magic system. It gives the impression that this devil is of extremely high status, but the devil as a whole does not seem to have a background or power in the conventional sense. The sense of fragmentation is very strong. In essence, the author puts aside the bad system glitches and gives the protagonist a powerful and dangerous restrictive glitch. That's it, I haven't read much, I wish the author will write better and better

Not bad, keep up the good work, author