Beginning in the Northern Song Dynasty, He Became an Immortal

The author can't write, so he might as well copy Journey to the West, scare the upper class people, and then preach. Those who take the lower-class route are the Yellow Turban Army and the White Lotus Sect. Those are not preachers but rebels.

This book's biggest failure is the theory of demons. As the existence of a unique law in the world, it naturally has the final right of interpretation. In addition, it is the feudal ancient times. A real 'true immortal', especially the 'real fairy law', has been passed down. It is not easy to gain faith. As a result, we still need to engage in demon theory to gain faith and preach. Tsk, taking off your pants and farting is nothing more than that.

What are the basic settings? The system collapsed from the beginning. The Qi refining period is also called immortal cultivation? The word "xian" is used in everything, and "xian" has almost become a derogatory term. A qi practitioner is a qi practitioner, and you can fly just by practicing qi. How do you look down on flying skills?

... Well, pig's trotters might as well support a puppet to be the emperor and use his strength to defeat all laws and make a country believe in pig's trotters. It's not like modern pig's trotters can't defeat it. In ancient times, it took so much time and energy to act, is it tiring? Or has the author read too many modern prophetic novels? Modern is not ancient! All you need to do is control a few high-level officials. This looks really stupid!

The most poisonous point of this book is that Pig's Foot treats itself as a child, just like a retarded opponent turns Pig's Foot into a retard, and uses its rich experience to defeat Pig's Foot. Pig's Foot has completely forgotten the power it possesses, and cannot play intrigues with ordinary people. It's so funny that normal people directly control several high-level people to declare the national faith. There are many people who believe it, and even those who don't believe it. I have written hundreds of chapters and are still playing house with ordinary people.

Starting from Chapter 106, the author is not his own, but someone who wrote it for him. The protagonist is no longer a cultivator, but an ordinary time traveler engaged in industrial construction. After reading Chapter 108, I have no motivation to read anymore. It is completely out of touch with the previous chapters. The author should read it himself.

One bad thing is that the protagonist talks too much in the Song Dynasty, which is not good

I thought it was a story about underworld cultivating immortals, but I didn't expect it to be a story about industrialization and construction.

After reading dozens of chapters, I was so embarrassed that I almost got cancer from embarrassment and ran away.

The protagonist has been around for so long and is still in the middle of Qi training. The author should not focus entirely on industrial construction.

The next few pictures are all repetitive. Are there some inexplicable martial arts beginner levels? Buddha Kung Fu, innate, inner Qi, etc.

Shennong: The first few dozen chapters were okay, but when it got close to a hundred chapters, the priority was reversed, and both ends couldn't be written well, so it just crashed. Others crashed after it was put on the shelves, but yours crashed soon after it was put on the shelves. Who cares?

Just don't write any more. You don't understand what immortals are, and you don't have any sense of difference. You just have to have faith. Just make the top ten disciples and add your own great power. If you go out and destroy a country casually, and add some rice and water from farming, who doesn't believe you?

To be honest, I don't even understand how to become a magician. 😰😰

It's enough to have Song's golden resources to cultivate oneself, and also to create a surname named Yangli. What's interesting? I can directly see through the author's idea that it is easy to write, easy to write, and the number of words is easy to make up.

Wait a moment, wait a moment, everyone, the cultivators of immortality are arrogant and incomplete. Talking about Hongjun again, Fengshen Yanyi is a work of the late Ming Dynasty, where did Hongjun come from. . .

What on earth is the author going to write about? I have done a good job cultivating immortality in the early stage, but why have I already done it in newspapers and movies? Why not change the urban background?

What is the author writing about recently? Why is the protagonist's sense of existence infinitely weakened, and it is all about the activities of the lower class people, which is completely irrelevant to the previous parts of this book. It is completely another subject, another kind of book in another direction. I came to read your original book, not to read these recent things.