Dimension: Being Pulled into the Chat Group at the Beginning

Are you following the example of Rui Yuan? There are too many collapses, and the writing is too Mary Sue?

Um? It seems to be very well written! As long as it is not the kind of novel that is constantly chatting in the chat group, talking to itself, and filling the corner of the bookstore, the author can surpass 90% of novels

Seeing that I have returned to the Honkai Impact world, let me briefly explain First, there are many typos Second, I feel that Alicia is a bit inconsistent with her character. Alicia is very gentle and likes everyone, and will not favor one person in such a short period of time Thirdly, each character is very distinct, and it is difficult to realize a harem.

Sure enough, I still can't stand the system text.

It's a bit boring. You need to do something to make it interesting.

Hmm~ Uh~ 💦Normal💦

When I first started reading it, I found out that the author was in the Black Douluo Continent, and he didn't think there was any place where the protagonist Tang San could be (hacked like this), so he looked confused. But I haven't read the later novels for a long time. I heard that the third novel of the Tang family collapsed. Is it because of this?

My mind is blank after reading this criminal‸criminal

After watching some, the overall feeling is that except for the world background and a bit white, everything else is pretty good.

Damn it, what is the protagonist going to do? The combat plot is also written just like playing a game.

Can the author write one? I, Omegamon, join the chat group. The heroine Celestial Beast.

Let's go. Honkai Impact and other things are not my type at all.