Travel Through the Bone King and Be a Good Person?

How should I put it, I saw the latest chapter It gave me the feeling that I was not reading a novel, but the outline of a novel. It lacked a sense of immersion. Only in the fragments did I feel that I was reading a novel, not the outline. Maybe I felt wrong. My personal suggestion is to either write more or be more detailed.

It's obvious that the writing style of the new author is rubbish. There is no sense of substitution or the writing is too general. It's a swishy running account.

There is no sense of immersion, there is no such thing as "elegant is too elegant" that can make people sigh. This is mainly reflected in the titles, dialogues and narration between the protagonist and An Zhi. The protagonist is like a barrage of sand sculptures in the animation, out of place, and does not look like a player companion who can play the server together. In short, the author has played all the jokes, and the readers are just kidding. The jokes are played by us, the audience. What you have to do is to output your dry knowledge, sort out the logic of the characters you created, and conform to the writing style of Japanese fans, so that we can have a sense of involvement.

I feel that creating anime characters similar to NPCs in the world of Bone King is not as good as improving my strength and breaking through the upper limit of the world, so that I can travel and conquer all the worlds and choose my own characters.

As soon as I saw the protagonist making up a bunch of anime characters, I instantly lost interest in watching it. It was really embarrassing. You might as well make a few Cthulhus to make it more practical.

When you create an anime character and add a character you like, you will feel like the character is a doll.

I am severely poisoned and unable to fight anymore. Please allow me to resign 😒

Regarding this book, I will briefly say a few words. The realm of this book still has a certain level, level, and logic. There is also a bit of logic. The most important thing is that the key points are still focused. The author still made a certain list and description in these places, positioned the protagonist, and described the background of the story. In short, this is a book, and I still wrote some words.

It is recommended not to have a female protagonist. Many novels are written because they don't know how to write emotional scenes.

It looked good at the beginning, but Shen He suddenly jumped out, and the sense of dissonance and embarrassment was overwhelming, and the setting was ruined. The NPCs in the Big Tomb are generally extreme towards humans, even the princess who comes later is a little devil, and the character characteristics of the anime and game characters written by the author have been written perfectly, and now they are equal to You have consumed a bunch of anime settings at once, which makes you feel very conflicted, and different types of anime use the original settings to maximize the contrast and become awkward. Maybe the plot in the back may not be bad, but the beginning of this work can dissuade 80% of people. I don't believe that a work that can't be watched at the beginning can be watched later, so I'd like to pay my respects to you fellow Taoists.

As for the infinite manufacturing bug, we should constantly create reproducible NPCs that can be assimilated or merged. In this way, we can use assimilation or fusion to continuously add attributes to the protagonist and continuously strengthen the protagonist. Also, the plot is too similar to the original work. It is better to use this opportunity to create your own power to travel through time, then conspire to usurp the throne and seize the highest authority, and then develop your power to travel to other animations to conquer the world. For example, the story of creating a vampire dynasty and opening a space door to conquer other anime. One more thing, I prefer angels to vampires. The protagonist himself is the supreme angel God of Light, and then creates a story in which angelic forces continue to preach and conquer various different worlds.

I won't talk about the original novel. I just want to ask the author if he has watched the animation? Don't read the Bone King fanfic and then write the fanfic again

If you were in the World Tree, what kind of character would you create? What settings will you add? (The character level cannot exceed 100. It is best to give settings that are consistent with the original text. The primary profession is 15, the advanced profession is 10, and the final profession is 5. Finally, roughly write down the racial level and professional level. If it is not enough, use other ones.) The prototype of Calder (ancient ice soul) is the ice soul in Dota. Attributes: -500 (extremely evil) Race level: Frost Ghost: 15 Frost Archmage: 10 Arctic Master: 5 Ancient Ice Soul: 1 (Special Profession) Others Professional Level: Frost Warlock: 15 Weather Apostle: 5 Ice and Snow: 3 World Disaster: 5 World Guardian: 5  Others Race Level: 46 Career Level: 54 HP: 49% MP: 100+? % Physical attack: 43% Physical defense: 39% Agility: 29% Magic attack: 100+? % Magic defense: 98% Comprehensive resistance: 100+? % Speciality: 100% Total 658%+? % Additional job introduction: The Extreme Cold Master is advanced by the Frost Ghost and is the pinnacle of the final race. A special skill once a day to strengthen the next frost magic and fall into absolute freezing. The freezing time is different according to different strengths, at least 30 seconds. Ancient Ice Soul, to obtain this race profession, you must first obtain (Arctic Master), activate a special world-class prop, return to the special copy and complete the race advancement to obtain the special race. Its special skills are. (Ice Crystal Explosion) It can be activated at any location within a maximum distance of 10 kilometers. It is a delayed magic that does not require chanting. The magic is delayed for three minutes. The range is 300 meters, causing a lot of damage and the target hit will be cursed. The curse lasts for 30 minutes. During the curse time, 1% of HP will be lost every minute. HP cannot be restored in any way during the curse, and it cannot be dispelled. And at the same time, magic chanting will have an extra 50% delay. If your HP falls below 10%, you will die directly. The cooling time is once every 100 hours. World Disaster does not need much introduction. (World Guardian) can activate the World Guardian Barrier three times a day, condensing all time and space within 1 km of itself for 20 seconds. During the condensation process, players other than the Releaser profession will be unable to act. Any magic or skill inside or outside the barrier will be stagnant when it comes into contact with the protective barrier. Once the time has passed, it will be activated and can be cut by the dimension. Or other space system special skills to break it.

He is actually the King of Bone Writing, so how can he omit the idiom solitaire? I'll come first, there's no other way

Is this the author's first book? Just follow your original outline, it doesn't matter if you have a running account, just finish it as soon as possible. Then sum up the experience and write the next book. I'm worried that if you change the outline according to readers' suggestions midway, I'll leave the changes to the next book. Then, read the book reviews, chapter reviews, etc. After they are finished. You will cry if you feel depressed. You know what I mean.

Can the Bone King choose a race similar to hatching bugs as a dependent race to follow the Zerg route?

As long as you are the overlord, I will support you.

Is there any fan fiction that travels to the time of the Eight Desire Kings or becomes the Eight Desire Kings? There is no need to keep talking about the Bone King. If you can't live for hundreds of years, you will reach the Bone King time. I can't stand watching the same timeline as Bone King.

I can't say it's good or bad among the Bone King fanfics. It's just average. The creativity is pretty good. The author may have problems with the main character sometimes. It just feels a bit silly. Everything else is okay.

... Play Genshin Impact, or unite with Ren

After watching a few of them, I understand why the eunuch is not recommended.